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Posted: 10 years ago

#51

Anna...loved it...Truly lovely...😃

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Posted: 10 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: Smilelicious
Anna 🤗
You depicted Sanskar's feelings in a sublime way👏 His pain, frustration, everything was described so well.
Why can you not see that the more time we spend together - the more deeply I will fall in love with you? Why don't you see ki tumhare Maa Baba ko milane ke chakkar mein mujhe tumse pyaar hogaya? Why don't you realize ki Lakshya aur Ragini ko ek karte karte - kahin main tumhare pyaar mein itna paagal na ho jaun ki apna maksat poora hote hi - when you leave me and go - I DIE!
Wow. This took my breath away👏
Loved the last part where Swara looks herself in the mirror while holding the manglasutra tightly.
Looking forward to read more stories from you 😳

Thank you so much Preet! 🤗

I really would like Sanskaar to have an outburst! It is much needed from him. Swara needs a realisation and only Sanskaar can give it to her. Have we not seen how she becomes demure when Sanskaar speaks of his love? 😳