SwaSan OS : Outburst - Page 4

Originally posted by: Luv_Ishveer

Such a lovely OS.
It was truly beautiful
I felt my heart pounding during the Swasan convo.
Really it was fabulous.

Originally posted by: kulsum_5

wow loved this OS...😳

hey i guess you should continue this OS...!!😉

Originally posted by: ros_aavir

Awesome 😊

Originally posted by: Aahanaxx11

Anna!

I think I remember you from IPK forum. Those mad days 😆 😊

Now coming to the OS, It was gorgeous. Sanskar's feelings and thoughts seemed so genuine. I could vividly imagine this scene playing out on my T.V screen. Really very very well written. Very natural to see Sanskar wanting to stay totally away from her because of the pain and hurt that he would have to go through if he has to stay with her or even anywhere near her given the fact that she doesn't reciprocate.

Just so heartbreaking when he told her he can't promise her to stop loving her or fall deeper in love with her.

Ahh, the unsurmountable pain that comes with one sided love beautifully captured by you 👍🏼

Originally posted by: princess_tara

lovely

Originally posted by: medhasankar

Very well written anna,

i felt so sorry for him.

i hope the show actually progresses to this very soon.

Originally posted by: ll_megha_ll

After reading this my lips got sealed yaar...

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Hey don't get me wrong re...

It's awesome and wonderful os...

It's just that i am speechless...

I don't getting any words to praise you...

You wrote each and everything so beautifully...

Do write more...

And also please pm me...

Originally posted by: JazzyM

Well done. An outburst that needed to occur...the wound was becoming a gangrene. If Sanskaar doesn't let go of his feelings, doesn't let it surface, it will most probably kill him or at least make him become a patient of the mental asylum...He acted as mad but with Swara's 'good intentions' she'll most probably turn him mad.

Swara always reminds me of a race horse...to ensure best results, the horse's eyes are covered in a manner where it can only see in front, no disturbance, then it just races...that's how Swara is, to get to her matlab (her ma baba, her behen...) she doesn't care about the others...it's like casualty of war..

I wish the CVs would take a leaf out of your piece and think about it...

Originally posted by: CutiePie..

Awesome

Kinda unique from the stories i have read so far about swasan