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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: Luv_Ishveer
Such a lovely OS.
It was truly beautiful
I felt my heart pounding during the Swasan convo.
Really it was fabulous.

Thank you! Sanskaar needs to have an outburst asap.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: kulsum_5
wow loved this OS...😳
hey i guess you should continue this OS...!!😉

Hahaha! Thank you! 😊

I am in two minds to continue this. Lets see. :)

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: ros_aavir
Awesome 😊

Thank you! 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: Aahanaxx11
Anna!
I think I remember you from IPK forum. Those mad days 😆 😊
Now coming to the OS, It was gorgeous. Sanskar's feelings and thoughts seemed so genuine. I could vividly imagine this scene playing out on my T.V screen. Really very very well written. Very natural to see Sanskar wanting to stay totally away from her because of the pain and hurt that he would have to go through if he has to stay with her or even anywhere near her given the fact that she doesn't reciprocate.
Just so heartbreaking when he told her he can't promise her to stop loving her or fall deeper in love with her.
Ahh, the unsurmountable pain that comes with one sided love beautifully captured by you 👍🏼

Hey Aahana! 🤗

Yes Yes Yes. You got that right! Took off from ArShi REDUX Land and landed right here in SwaSan's 😆 Those were the days! 😆

Thank you so much! I wish they could play this out in the show. I mean literally I am done Sanskaar playing second fiddle to Swara all the time. He needs to take a stand. Whenever I watch the show - I can feel Sanskaar being hurt but taking in all the pain silently and I just wish he would stop.

Thank you so much again! 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: princess_tara
lovely

Thank you 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: medhasankar
Very well written anna,
i felt so sorry for him.
i hope the show actually progresses to this very soon.

Thank you so much Medha. Means a lot! 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#37

Nice os anna. U clearly explained his feeling for her. He can't control his emotions anymore so his feeligs for her burst infront of her.Finally she realised he is the one who she needed at her good and bad times.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: ll_megha_ll
After reading this my lips got sealed yaar...
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Hey don't get me wrong re...
It's awesome and wonderful os...
It's just that i am speechless...
I don't getting any words to praise you...
You wrote each and everything so beautifully...
Do write more...
And also please pm me...

Thank you so much Megha! 🤗

Will definitely PM you guys! :)

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Posted: 10 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: JazzyM
Well done. An outburst that needed to occur...the wound was becoming a gangrene. If Sanskaar doesn't let go of his feelings, doesn't let it surface, it will most probably kill him or at least make him become a patient of the mental asylum...He acted as mad but with Swara's 'good intentions' she'll most probably turn him mad.
Swara always reminds me of a race horse...to ensure best results, the horse's eyes are covered in a manner where it can only see in front, no disturbance, then it just races...that's how Swara is, to get to her matlab (her ma baba, her behen...) she doesn't care about the others...it's like casualty of war..

I wish the CVs would take a leaf out of your piece and think about it...

Thank you so much! 🤗

I know I am scared too that so much of hurt and pain from Swara - Sanskaar will become really mad. Sometimes I wish that Sanskaar would leave MM and just go and live his life elsewhere. Would save so much of pain.

I like how you have compared Swara to a horse. It is beautifully explained. 👏 👏