The Ice King SwaSan SS Complete - Page 14

Originally posted by: NitaMikealson

Thanks for the PM. 😊

i liked this chapter, Finally Sanskaar and Swara met, it going to be interesting to see his revenge plan/reunion with his once best friend.

i am looking forward to your next post, Cant wait, PM me if possible.

Also i liked DP characterization so far, this chapter didnt have ragini, did she attend her sis engagement or not?

Originally posted by: bloomnskyrules

I am so glad they finally met. I am guessimg that Lakshya wont be happy that Swara forgot about their engagement and ran off to Sanskaar. I loved the bonding between DP and his soul daughter. Will he and Annapurna (she is Shomi's friend right?) support and trust Swara when s**t hits the fan and she marries Sanskaar? I hope they do. Swara won't forgive Sanskaar as easily as she did on the show right? But I do hope they patch up soonish and that this revenge driven Sanskaar won't last long infront of his Shona.

I am eagerly waiting for the next part and I hope you update soon.

Originally posted by: JazzyM

The 4th chapter, dazed me off...A chess game for sure, the way DP was thinking...king, knight, his fortress...now I wonder, who is the grand-master...DP or Sanskaar...

Both have the same attitude..Sanskaar is like a reflection of DP, his planning, his reactions...

What's with the pen-drive...what are you hiding there...suspense...good addition

I really loved the part of how you described Sanskaar ...'attitude of a 4 year old, with his heals taping..' very cute. It takes a good writer to a make a ruthless man look like a smug 4 year old...beautiful...

Swara...ouch...she dropped her engagement ring and like a swoosh she went to her long lost friend...the heart of the story...wondering???

Originally posted by: dimaag

Hey sakura you really are a person worthy of appreciations dear !! The way you gave sanskar's character a modification and added things like told you she knows me and all that really made me think as if its happening in reality in the t.v and swara leaving her engagement behind was superb !!
Really awesome work, waiting for your next chapter my friend... 😛 😛

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Ooh it gets better each time! You also find Swara DP's soul child and Sanskaar the son he wanted? *hi5*! I like the mystery you weave in. Sanskaar is here and he's going to cause mayhem- yayyy! So I take it Sanskaar will do to Swara here what he did to Ragz in the show in the sense of asking for his "dost" Swara to stay with him whilst playing mad?! Intriguing- waiting to read more!

Hi Sakura 😊 Thanks for the pm 😊

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Hi Sakura 😊 Thanks for the pm 😊

I am traveling now so please bear with me if my comments are not as detailed as I would normally like them to be.

I liked the way you fleshed out DPs character here, his affection for Swara, and his precise, almost obsessive chess board like planning of his family and business empire's future. I liked how he is under no illusions about Lucky's capabilities visit a vis Sanskaar's 😊

Probably in the next chapter you would deal with how mere physical distance frayed the former extremely close friendship sanskaar had with swara, and directed his affections towards Kavita.

In the earlier chapter, I thought sanskaar was going to come out into the open, in a battle with DP. Boy, you had a surprise for us. 😊 They still don't know the identity of the "chairman" of their rival company, and Sansku is now back home, pretending to be insane 😊

Looking forward to the next chapter.

I love dp here. how much he care for swara. he considered swara as an ideal daughter. he loves her as his own soul daughter. .. loved it... laksh is a mystery for me here and also in serial.. I can't understand him. did swara love sanskar? why did she rush towards sanskar on her engagement? I think she loves him.. you are a brilliant writer... thanks for this excellent update..

While much awaited Sanskar's entry was rocking, it is DP and Swara's convo that overshadowed everything for me.
The crown secrets guarded by the queen as she strides to marry the faithful knight.
And then...the rightful King returns!!!!!!!!!

Loved it. Thanks for the pm.

My my.. I did not expect the events to turn out Like this..

So Swara is in impression that Lakshya has saved her from the trouble she could have landed into!
What stood out for me was Swara's and DP conversation.. The Emperor is given to the Queen rightfully.. Eehhh.. DP is a clear headed man., A strong personality here who does not fail to judge that his own son is not capable enough of Handling his own Empire.. You are too amazing with the words You use.. They certainly pull you towards the story n you just cant take your eyes off a second whole reading it !

Now that Sanskar is back.. I would love to see how long he would b able to hurt Swara..

update soon 😃