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medha

@ToujoursPur

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: JazzyM
Superb my dear...
Sanskaar pouring his heart out was heart wrenching...You brought life to his pain...it was brilliantly written...Every word jumped up of the text with high strung emotions...

The ending ...great...you joined the lovebirds very realistically...loved this OS!

thanks Jazz...you praised me!!!! I'm dancing.😃

I dont like unrealistic things much. dont work for me.😳

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Malangan

@TeriMalang

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#22

I sooo love ur writing.

And I cannot miss any writing of yours.

Apologies. For not commenting last night. I had written comment and net started playing . n left it and went back to sleep :P

This was so beautiful.

Of course swara has been cruel to sanskar all the while. She had used him as means of escape frm situations.she turned blind eye to his emotions his feelings his pains. He needed afrnd all this while and he had none. He needed a shoulder and he had none.

"Har zakhm daba rakha hai

Har lafz daba rakha hai

Ashq bhi sookha gaye dard itna bardasht kar rakha

Ishq bhi itna kiya hai

Khanjar use thama diya jiske chot ne bar bar tadpaya hai."

Edited by -TeriMalang- - 9 years ago

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Roshini Mathews

@RoshiniManeet

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#23

I am like awestruck with the works of the writers in this forum...its beyond beautiful. How on earth u come up with such imaginations...may be thats why its called imaginations i suppose. Spectacular...spot on feeling of Sanskaar who stood without a word yesterday...everybody using him left right center and not a word of good told to him. No one even asked him what he wants.

Loved ur writing. Thank u for such a wonderful OS.👏

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tigress.meenu

@tigress.meenu

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#24

beautiful os...

had tears in my eyes...😊

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medha

@ToujoursPur

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: Smilelicious
This 'Even when she acknowledges that I'm her sole support and her best friend..she still has never tried to return the favour Kavi. Defend me yes. But that she does for everybody.
I am still everybody to her Kavi. I am nobody. Yet we are married. Told you its funny.
And this 'I will never dare to fall in love again. I am scared i will be broken beyond repair'
This took my breath away. So brilliantly done Medha.
I want Swara to fall in love with him, badly.
You describe exactly his POV. So touching it was. I can't see him breaking apart 😔
(Sorry for unressing so late)

thank you preet😃

and its totally ok. i want my friends to read it...

if they are not free at some point..

.I would want them to enjoy it when they can.😳

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medha

@ToujoursPur

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11
Ahhh the pathos- so perfectly put and each word is rapier like but totally 100% effective and true. Swara is captured in this letter so accurately, it doesn't lose or diminish her essence but as per the current very frustrating track, this says it all that should be said! Ironically, I wrote a letter from Sanskaar to Lakshya and then read it- it has managed to calm me down a lot. It was cathartic for me- thank you!

Shruti🤗,

I hope you are completely calm now..because i read that letter of yours, and for once you seemed really angry as opposed to your composed self as it usually comes across in your works.😆

Stop saying Thank you ..otherwise that belan I gave you to kill lux with is gonna bang your head.

Glad u liked it. I'm in darjeeling at the moment on an outstation audit..and the Wi-Fi is really bad. Wont be back until 20th. Till then..I'm not going to be on the forum much i guess.😕

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medha

@ToujoursPur

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: SONAL30
Beautifully written medha👏
Loved the way u portrayed sanskaar's feeling
He was frustrated n sad yet he was helping her in that stupid ragya ko milao mission🤢
He shared his thoughts to his only frd Kavi😳
N that they need a psychiatric help line...cracked me up🤣indeed these pagal gadodia sister needs a psychiatrist
But my most fav part was the revelation ki they r married from last 3 years n now she is madly n deeply is in love with her hubby toh ab kya farak padta hai😆
Loved the OS medha
Do write more
Thanks 4 the pm🤗

Sonal😃,

Hi..and thanks.

Yup, both of them do need psychiatric help. Its obvious to us...

but certainly not to MM and Baadi people.

Sanky needed a voice. Bechara is getting hurt.😭

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Mansi

@Princess_Mansi

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#28

It was as usual awesome Medha⭐️

You are a star I know you must be bored reading it as and again but I can't help praising your writing skills...⭐️

I loved the way you showed Sanskar pouring his heart to Kavita... 😉

She can forgive everyone but not her husband seriously Swaragini need Psychiatric treatment...🤣

Using Sanskar for mission Ragya😡

But the best part was its been three years and Swara loves Sanskar😳

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medha

@ToujoursPur

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: kaku17
Medha, my dear...😃.

.thank you soo much for writing this gem...this has helped in chucking off a bit of load from my heart, though am sure I will be back to square one soon...😛...I dislike swara so much that it will be difficult to put in words 😡...so thank you for doing so beautifully that too without any rancour...👏

thank you kaku.

I actually started detesting swara too.

jo samajhdaar hoke na samajh bane usko kya kaha jaye.