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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: Ardhikian
GOd, beautiful.
The amount of creativity and hardwork you put in is commendable
Superbly written, very involving
Loved it
Do write more soon
Look forward to it

Thank you so much, for reading and for leaving such generous words of encouragement. 😊 Will let you know when I post more---I should have an SS up after Dussehra, around Nov 1st week, as I plan it...

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: Princess_Mansi
How do you manage to write such wonderful updates👏👏
With each update I am becoming your fan scratch that I am becoming your split AC😆😆
The character of DP and his persona was bang on...perfectly written⭐️
Loved the way you should DP transformation from boy to adult to a father😉
The character of DP has lots of potential seriously saying only DP and Sujata are sane they are what on the face not like other characters 🤢
Thanks a lot for the pm
Keep writing such wonderful update

Thanks so very much, Mansi. I really respect the thought and effort you put into you works, so your warm comments mean a lot!

Glad you liked the portrayal of DP in this one. I agree, he is a very strong and balanced personality, and he tries hard to be fair between all the family members. I wanted to explore the layers in his character, and give a back story to his childhood & youth.

You are right, He & Sujju certainly are the only people with perspective in that MM house full of madness! 😊 But I feel AP is also a strong character, and I have a strong feeling she is going to start showing grey shades soon.

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: mjhtfan8
Beautiful. Everything fit in place...loved reading it😊

Thank you for reading and for this lovely comment. 😊

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Nityah

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Viji... Sweetheart... 🤗Once again, you have penned down piece of perfection...⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ The way you weave the story is amazing.. 👏👏while reading it one can totally get lost in it and feel LIKE you're actually watching it. I am so glad you took DP's character to depict the element this time. In Maheshwari's after Sanskaar, only this man have some brains otherwise all others are idiots. I loved the way you explored and presented Durga Prasad's personality. The story about sky and earth... yaar.. you make me reminisce my childhood... My granny had told me this one... I remember it because there was a major blackout that time for 3-4 days, there was no electricity in city. So we used to sit on terrace at night and my granny used to tell old folk lores. When I read this one.. it reminded me about that time 😳😆 Love the way you explored the bond between Sanskaar and DP.
Now coming to SwaSan... hayyeee... you again cast you magic... and I am lost in them again.The terrace scene under blanket of stars... so romantic... Loved it. You have so beautifully written that part. Will be looking forward to more of your work...😳😳 Keep rocking..😃😃

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: TeriGalliyan.
Extremely well written!
I think this is the best one you've written in the series!

Thanks so much Nisha! 😊 Glad you liked it.

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: suhasini2727
It's awesome
Story told by gauri. ...it's very nice
Awww dp is so understanding n his love of having a daughter n wanted to c d same in swara is splendid
Absolutely loved it...
Taking a bow for ur writing 👏
Swasan as always ...beautiful
Thankyou very much for this story
Love u loads. ...🤗

Thanks very much for your lovely comment, Suhasini 😊. Glad you liked the portrayal of DP as well his mother. Of course, me being such a crazy SwaSan fan, no story of mine would be possible, without a good bit on them. 😊

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: vaishnavi77

Well, viji, if u write this beautifully, every character gets attention..it isn't about supporting characters or leads..it's just about characters and how well u can unravel the varied layers beneath it. You, my friend seem to have just known this art so well. ⭐️
poignant writing 👏
Would be happy to see quartet turning a quintet😃
Yes please. Please let me know whenever you write anything, Would be pleased to read😊

Thanks so much again, Vaishnavi. Really appreciate your warm comment. 😊

Well, I had initially thought of doing "Air", as a 4th part after Water, Fire & Earth. But the problem was, I had conceived "Air" on Lakshya, and I am frankly too irritated with that character right now, for me to be able to do justice to that OS.

That's why now I moved straight to "Sky", on DP, omitting "Air" altogether. 😊 Maybe, if the characterization of Lakshya improves, I just might do it later. Or maybe I shall think of doing it on Ragini---let's see how it goes.

But in the meantime, I am planning to do a standalone SS on SwaSan, in a separate genre, not part of this series. Hope to have it up after Dussehra, 1st week November, perhaps. I normally like to write all the parts and update them together. Shall let you know as soon as I post that one.

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Cintila

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Posted: 9 years ago

#58

Viji. ...!🤗🤗

You dedicated this to me ?? Omg thank you soo very much. I'm so happy to know that I was one of the reasons why you wrote this...its a big thing you know, I'm such a HUGE fan of your works 😳. I'm so sorry dear I was a little busy so couldn't read earlier.

Coming to the OS, I really don't know what to say. You build each and every character so well. The details make everything just PERFECT. I loved the durga prasad waala part too. He's one of my most favourite characters in the show ,After swasan of course 😆😳

I absolutely loved how DP encouraged sanskaar to go to swara. I wish he does the same in the show, and my most favourite part obviously was the confession part.😳 it was simply beautiful. Loved it viji. Thanks a lot for this one. It came as a surprise...once again THANK YOU..!😃😳

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: bloomnskyrules
Loved it and you wrote the OS as brilliantly as always! I liked that penultimate paragraph where it said that space is above all the elements and is fair, that is true about DP. He has been fair thus far and hopefully will remain so in the future as well.
Are you going to more? Please do. I will be waiting eagerly to read more rics from you.
BTW did you write an fics for ArShi? If so, can you PM me the links please?

Hi, thanks for reading and taking time to comment. 😊 Glad you liked this O.S. I am not planning to continue the Elements Series, there is only "Air" left, and I am too irritated with Lakshya's character to be able to do an OS on him now (I had earlier planned to do "Air" on him) 😊. I am working on the concept for another SwaSan SS however, and should have all the parts up, hopefully Nov 1st week. I normally like to complete all the parts and post them together. As I plan it, could have 3--4 parts, not too long.

I didn't write anything for ArShi, unfortunately. 😊 I really loved the pairing though, was a fan of that serial before they majorly screwed it up towards the end. Now I am a complete, major SwaSan fan 😊

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: Smilelicious
First of all thank you so much Viji for dedicating me and the others this OS 🤗 You are such a sweetheart 😳 You deserves all the appreciation Viji 👏
Your OS literally makes my day It's like i'm watching a film, because i can imagine every scene you described, in my mind. You are purely brilliant.
Kudos to your immagination 👏 I never thought someone would write something on DP and so beautifully. I really like his character, such a genuine and honest person he is.
The bedtime tale was really beautiful ❤️ I loved it, especially the description of the sky wearing a midnight blue sherwani embroidered with a million glittering stars.
I feel DP is the only person who really understands Swara and Sanskar.
The entire SwaSan scene where Sanskar says those famous lines was a magical moment ❤️
And the ending, wow 👏 Perfect way to end a masterpiece 😳
I can't thank you enough for writing this, but still thanks a lot 🤗

Preet, my dear friend...I meant every word of that dedication. I had actually planned to end the "Elements" series as a Trilogy (Water, Fire & Earth), since I was not feeling very interested in writing "Air". I had initially thought of doing "Air" on Lucky, but I was just so irritated with that character that I could not do justice to it.

It was motivation from all you guys that made me take up the 4th O.S "Space", in this series. So thanks for that. 😊

Thank you so much for this detailed comment. Glad you liked my portrayal of DP, and also the bedtime tale. I could not resist imagining that bit about the midnight blue sherwani embroidered with stars. Blue is my favorite color, you see, so it kind of sets my imagination flying into the sky! 😉

I just love the LOTR and Hobbit series, and I felt those dialogues between Kili & Tauriel were fitting for this "Space" themed O.S. Am very glad you liked it. 😊

Thanks so much once again, for all your kind words.

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