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piccola1

@piccola1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

Oh Viji, THANK YOU 🤗🤗🤗for this superbly written and supremely satiating OS on Space and even more for transforming what was a literal plea, into a dedication (to us) and a motivation (for you)!😃

You humble and delight us, all at the same time !👏

Its midnight now, and I need to sleep so I can catch my 5.30 am flight out tomorrow😕. But, while I will hold my patience and share my appreciation over the entire Space, for now, I CANNOT hold back on being wowed by the other 'doff of your hat' in the climax today...😳

Did you do it on purpose😳 (please say yes !! ), or was it inadvertent or even your subconscious😆 (I'd like to believe that it was!) , that you chose to couch Sanskaar's reaction ("he responded to her, the way men who have had their proposals accepted normally do") ,in the same tones as that eternally unique verbiage used by one Ms Austen😳 to describe Darcy's reaction to Lizzie's acceptance of his 2nd proposal...You know ."..and he expressed himself on the occasion as sensibly and as warmly as a man violently in love can be supposed to do" !☺️😳❤️

Umm...I can really draw a parallel to the 1st proposal too, when I think of it ! 😃 Now I know I am going to dream of P&P and Swasan, all night thru !!

Love your penmanship, your vision and your humility,

🤗Pic.

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akanksha

@luvakanksha

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Very wonderfully written

Loved the way this os describes dp and sanky relationship

Swasan are always too cute

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Lifez_Beautiful

@Lifez_Beautiful

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Ok Viji gal u hv done it again! What an absolutely engaging piece of work?! Kudos!! 👏👏👏

I loved this on so many levels! Firstly there was that really sad folk tale to which DP had similar reactions as I had when I was reading it... So it was very satisfying to know someone commiserated with me, albeit a fictional character about a fictional story... but like they say misery needs company! 😆

Next you would be surprised to know that what made me super happy was not the swasan romance but the word 'circa' you wrote in the sub headings! 😃 Because seriously my fav subject is history and fav pass time is actually going through hundreds of pages of wikipedia links related to some random historical trivia!

I just can't help clicking on the hyperlinks and devouring ancient literally totally useless information... But well a gal gotta to have her own crazy addictions right?😆 Anyways, the point is I got a feeling I was reading on of those wiki pages as I was reading Dp's background story and his life story or lemme be cheesy and say HIS STORY! 😆

But seriously loved the style and 'circa' just put an authentic stamp on this fictional wiki page for me!

And lastly you just referenced few of my fav movies and I just got lost there a bit in the world of wood elves, headstrong dwarves, cheeky hobbit and sexy voiced dragons! But like J R R Tolkien says, " Not all those who wander are lost" You brought me right back to earth or in this case 'space' with naughty swasan thoughts! So I literally had a great ride through many worlds! Thank u ! 🤗

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javeria

@Javeria3991

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

Awesome one shot

I love the way you begin the perceptions of DP and the lovely tale. And the addition of dialogues from the hobbit and IPK simply made the tale superb.

enjoyed a lot reading quartet.👏

Continue writing.

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inlieu

@inlieu

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Thanks so much, Jean. 🤗 When you say, that I could not have captured the essence of DP's persona any better, it means a HUGE lot. I respect your in depth character analysis articles so much, they are so perceptive and top class.

Looking forward eagerly to your piece on DP & SwaSan. 😊

Hey girl! I meant every word. Also just realized that I somehow missed your dedication at the beginning of the OS, so wanted to thank you for that.

Your enthusiasm about my upcoming post has motivated me to put in extra effort and make it worth your reading while. 😉

Keep the fab work coming. We all are grateful to you for putting in so much care and love into your work. 😃

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: Kamala05
A beautiful work . I loved the narration from Dp's perspective.

Thanks so much Kamala. 😊

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: The.Lannister
A perfect ending to a perfect series 👏
I loved the story of the sky falling in love with the earth.

DP is one character I completely love in the show. The actor is great and the man seems to be the only sensible one in the family after sanskaar. I also for some reason see him being more of a father figure to swara than shekhar ever was or could be. So I was extra happy to see DP trying to patch up these two.

And that chandni raat mein chat pe taare ginna as you think of your love 😆 haaye but that is so romantic. And those lines from smaug ...words can sometimes kindle a passion as strong as any touch! 😳 I am sure swara is half the time seduced just by the things he says😳

Some of the descriptions of the morning and night skies was like reading an english classic 👏 you truly weave magic with your words.

How I wish we get to see ur DP - Sanskaar scene and swara missing sanskaar while she is in the Baadi on the show

Hi Shruti 🤗 🤗

So glad you liked it. As I mentioned, you're one of the people who motivated me a lot to continue with one more element, after the trilogy I'd originally planned to complete it with. I am really touched and humbled that you feel this lived up to your expectations.

Yeah, I admire DP's character too. That's why I wanted to explore the layers to his nature, put in place a back story for him. I agree with you, he is more of a father figure to Swara than that waste-of-space, spineless Shekar.

How could I not put in a moonlight & starlit terrace romance scene between SwaSan--my most favorite pair of all time! 😳 The Kili--Tauriel dialogues from Desolation of Smaug are too good, no? I am a HUGE fan of LOTR and Hobbit series, BTW.

Thanks for the nice words you said about my descriptions of the dawn and the night sky 😊 Since the Element theme in this one was "Space", I decided to describe the Sky in quite a bit of detail. 😉

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anju rana

@anju10

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#48

woww lovely update dear
great work 👏 👏 👏 👏
awesome
thanxx for the pm

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: swa291
Perfect dear.
I loved all the updates.

They were one of the perfect ff i have read.

Do write more

Thank you so much for reading and leaving this lovely comment. 😊

Edited by CogitoErgoSum - 10 years ago

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: The.Lannister
Do PM me when you write anything new on SwaSan.

Sure, Shruti. I will start working on a SwaSan SS soon...have the broad theme and the title ready, so now have to get to the details! 😉

I will, in all likelihood, post it after Dussehra, perhaps 1st week of November. I usually like to upload all parts at one go, once I'm through. This one should have 3--4 parts, I'm guessing--not too long. I'm also traveling for part of the Dussehra holidays, so will need some time to get all the parts ready.

Will surely PM you the moment its up. 😊

Edited by CogitoErgoSum - 10 years ago

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