SwaSan OS- 'Space' - Page 3

Originally posted by: samiya.059

Viji, my dear friend, thank u so much for
considering me worth the dedication for this
such a beautiful and wonderful story.It made
my day.What u called encouragememt from
my end is just the genuine appreciation that u
truly deserve
I am truly at loss of words to express what I
feel for this piece of work...fantastic.I can say
this with my hand on my heart that lady! u
have surpassed the brilliance of your previous
works
" Always be a poet, even in prose."
It holds true for writers as u. It seemed like a
poem to me...the emotions, rhythm ,weaving
of whole story around a concept and beautiful
discription of characters.
I couldn't believe ,I would be reading a story
on Durga Prasad again and again.This is one
character in swaragini who truely is a very
genuine person.I am so glad you wrote about
him .It definitely gave an insight to things
which made Durga Prasad the man he is!
There are times when that the characters we
are reading gets into motion in our minds eye.I
could very much imagine all that happenings of
DP's life.That only a good writer can do.The
events he/she narrates should b such as if
happening b4 u .
I have too feel that sanskaar has qualities of
Durga prasad .He too like his uncle is
intelligent unbiased straightforward and a just
man.
I liked the swason part too,but DP's story was
what made it so interesting
Thank You so much for writing such beautiful
stories weaved on characters we adore.
I hope someday you publish your work and we
read it and say 'hey this great writer is my
friend'
Keep writing and keep shinning
Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: inlieu

Beautiful! What a fabulous portrayal of DP, who happens to be one of my favorites on the show! You could not have captured the essence of his persona any better! It would really be fitting to see him proactively cut through all the hide and seek between both families and show Swara the light instead, and Sanskaar too if needed.

I have been wanting to do one of my analytical posts on DP and SwaSan but am just waiting for the next couple of episodes to see Shekhar's behavior before I go ahead. But I will say I agree that your reading of his character is pretty much in line with my thoughts.

Once again, loved it, and glad you decided to write this piece! 😃

Originally posted by: Banjaaran...

Air on Lucky.. *shocked Muh*
Hell NO!

Sujata has more going for her than this character. i neither dislike nor hate laksh but he doesn't have the depth to merit a prime position next to titans like Sanskaar or DP..
no matter how exasperating swara could get at times.. she is a sweetheart.
AP is errmm interesting. ( i am counting for her to turn greying black soon).

Air despite it's fickleness could be a terrifying force if choose to be..
imagine Laksh as air!
so Yeah Atta girl! for dropping the plan.

i read a joke long time back..
A man rues his divorce stating.. My sun-sign element is earth, my wife's earth. No wonder together we made Mud.

i used to crack up remembering that joke.

Now Sanskaar and Swara are Earth and water.😆.

i am not discounting Cv's from making mud.. but you dear viji created a perfect sculpture out of it.

p.s Hey i clicked like on all your works that i read. commenting for the first time.😳. but wont be last.

would love to read anything and everything you pen down (err type).
Cheers!