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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
Different story...
Part 1 awesome...
update next part asap...
Do pm for ur next update...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
superb start !! pls continue and send me a too !!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
its nice ..
plz update soon...
plz..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
Hello folks! Thank you so much for the valuable comments and the likes. I really appreciate the time you give to read and like the plot. And here is the next part. Enjoy reading.

Part 2

After about an hour of dance and fun everyone decided to go home. Ragini, adrash and pari were giggling on some joke while Swara walked in between Laksh and Sanskar. Laksh yawned and started a conversation-
God! I am so tired...
Of what Laksh? You didn't even dance.
Laksh put his hand around swara's shoulder and replied-
I am tired of not doing anything. And he chuckled.
Swara removed his hand from her shoulder and hit him playfully on his arms. Sanskar was just looking at the duo and smiling at their child like antics. Soon they all reached the parking area. Pari left with adarsh on his bike. Ragini bide goodnight to sanlak, took the key from Swara and went near their scooty. Laksh gave Swara a side hug and wished her. He left to get his bike leaving swasan alone. Swara hated this part where she had to say good bye to him. Her face fell down. Sanskar realized that she was upset with something. He remembered Swara engrossed in thoughts earlier. He looked at her and a smile appeared on his face.
You look very good Swara.
Swara's head shot up. She just couldn't believe what she heard. She was all smiles hearing that. She felt that the moment froze there itself. And came in Laksh
Come Sanskar we got to leave. Laksh wore his helmet and came in ragini with the scooty wearing the pink helmet.
Swara we have to leave. Its already 10. Dadi will kill us if we don't reach by 10.30. Come fast.
Swasan looked at ragya and then at each other. Swasan walked towards ragya still glancing bat each other. Just as ragini started the scooty, Swara looked at Sanskar one final time and he passed her a smile. She turned her face and as they drove off she couldn't curb the smile forming in her face.
On the way while Laksh was busy driving Sanskar was in his own land of thoughts-
What's wrong with us? I mean why is it that we don't talk much. She is ragini's sister. She is a part of our group. Laksh, my best friend is her beat friend. Then what is it that comes in between us. Sometimes she is so lost and sometimes she is all smiles. She is so confusing. God! Anyways there isnt any need for me to think about her. Or there is?
Swaragini reached home safely and before the deadline. As they laid back on the bed, ragini fell to sleep soon while Swara was just stating at the ceiling. She closed her eyes and she could see his smile. He was there and his smile that's what mattered. She didn't need anything else. She remembered Sanskar complementing her and the thought made her blush. She opened her eyes whispered to herself -don't know why you mean so much. I just don't know why I keep finding reasons to be near you. Why god? Why?
Laksh and Sanskar reached their colony and went to their respective homes. All the while before going to sleep Sanskar had swara's thoughts engulfing his mind. He hated this. She wasn't very close to him. In fact, they are just known strangers. He was disturbed by Swara's behavior. He realized the next day is Sunday and that meant the group will surely meet and that means she will come for sure. Shit! He looked at himself in the mirror and asked to his image- I look good. He moved his face sideways and continued- yes but then what's with this girl? I know her from a year or so and she makes me look so dumb sometimes. What is it that she always smiles looking at me. I really don't know why she is doing this...he moved away from the mirror and hit himself on the head and said-
Sanskar you are going mad. This girl isn't good for you. Stay away from her. He looked up and said-
God! I don't know why you are doing this. He sighed and retired to bed.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
Awww...
The famous silence between Swara ans Sanskar..

Lazy lucky..
Rags and lucky kyu distrub kiya bichare love birds ko??

But why are SwaSan still Stranger???
R'nt the friends yet???

great loved it..
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
Nice update. Swara loved his complements. He dnt knw whats in his mind. As they both were strangers, they didn't talked tat much with eachother, but still some thing was in between them. So now they both have to realise what their feeling was.Pls continue
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
nice update yaar... loving yheir silence. .. waiting for next part. .. continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
Awe so awesomely written...
Start to chap 2 loved it...
Do cont and pm me...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
That's cute..
Lovely updates..
Will be waiting for ur next update
Di pm if possible
Tc
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
nice updates..
the story is moving on well..

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