SS- Don't know why part 5 page 10 updated

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello people! I know I have got to update my other writings,but I have a new story for swasan and ragya fans here. I will update the other ss and ff soon. The prologue of the story is here. If you guys like it I would love to continue..

Prologue

" I don't know. Its like that, I mean your smile it just fills me up. It assures me that everything will be alright, that things will be fine and puts me at ease, just calms me down"

"Do you mean its my smile that has brought you here?"

"Yes. I know its completely insane but you have got to trust me."
Sanskar took another sip of the coffee,nodded his head sideways and smiled at Swara.

" exactly see.that smile of yours- Swara exclaimed pointing at Sanskar.
I know Sanskar we aren't strangers but we are not friends either but I feel a strong connection towards you"
Sanskar looked at Swara intently and gave a pale smile.

Shall I continue?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ohh...
Two Strangers having a coffee date...
Sounds interesting..

Continue soon...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi guys a very good evening. Thank you so much for your support. I appreciate All the comments and likes and on this auspicious beginning of navratri I am glad to begin this ss- don't know why. Here is the first part.

Part 1

A girl was anxiously waiting all dressed up in a a beautiful chaniya choli. The dress had the mirror work and she wore a simple jewelry to complete her look. She looked behind and could see people doing garba on her favorite song "dol baaje". Seeing all those people move elegantly to that song, she couldn't stop herself from tapping her foot to the loud music. Her eyes were twinkling with the joy of navratri, she had a beautiful smile on her lips but the smile was short lived. She looked at her watch and then back at the entrance. She decided to call her sister. Just then someone tapped her shoulder from behind. She turned to find her friend with the charming smile.
Hi Sanskar.
Hi ragini. He gave her a side hug and wished -
Happy navratri.
Same to you.
Why are you standing here? Come let's go inside and dance.
Ragini sighed.
I can't Sanskar. I am waiting for Swara. I always do the first dance with her. She is my partner.
Ohhh..yes. So where is she?
She hasn't come yet.
She will be here any moment.
Just then came a red scooty and there was the sweet and bubbly Swara wearing her pink helmet. she saw ragini in the entrance waiting for her. She parked the scooty among the other vehicles there and running went to ragini and gave her a hug.
Sorry.. Sorry sorry ragini...please maaf kardo. Ragini knew her sister's antics and she happily forgave her.
Its okay Swara.
They broke their sisterly embrace. Ragini looked at Swara from head and toe and exclaimed-
Swara! You are looking beautiful.
Swara smiled. She was wearing a pink and blue chaniya choli. Her hair was tied into bun and plated as well. She wore her favorite jhumkas, bangles and anklets. She looked like an angle. Ragini held Swara and started walking towards the dance area. Sanskar walked beside ragini. Just as they were about to reach the dance area -
Swaraaa...came a voice...
They turned to find parineeta all dressed up for the garba. Pari gave Swara and ragini a hug and wished them happy navratri. She moved her hand forward to wish Sanskar-
Happy navratri. Sanskar took her hand and wished her.
Finally they reached the dance area and the sisters danced gracefully. With every turn and step they tool their ghagra moved in swing. Sanskar and parineeta joined their group on the other side. After their dance swaragini went to their group. While ragini ran towards them and wished everyone. Swara was taking her time. She observed everyone. Adarsh and pari were laughing (may be on adarsh's another joke), Sanskar was looking handsome as always in his royal blue kurta pyjama. He was talking with Laksh, her best friend. Laksh was in his usual jeans and white shirt. She went on to greet everyone. Laksh gave her a side hug while adarsh shook hands while wishing her.
She shook hands with Sanskar and he took her hands and wished her with a smile.
Swara's state and her thoughts-That was it. She was happy. His smile, it was his smile that made her everyday. That gave her hopes and happiness. It was that smile of his all the way from that morning jog when she meets him in the park, while returning from college, and during these times of meeting in festivals, its him and his smile for which she longs for which she has come. They don't talk much. In fact they don't talk at all. They are in a group but barring him she talks to everyone and thats the same with him. We aren't friends. We aren't strangers but I don't know why Sanskar ...I don't know why...you mean something to me... All this while when she was in her thoughts she stood there looking down. And she didn't know that from the moment she has entered sanskar's eyes were only on her.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely story yaar... good concept.. plzz pm me on next update.. i don't want to miss it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is very interesting! Loving it!

Plz do PM me wen u update dear. :)

And yeah, HAPPY NAVRATHRI!! 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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amazing start...👏
so Sanskar watching Swara😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oooh...its lovely...love is in the air but unknown to both...pls do update soon...n pm me if possible.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey that great...
Loved it..👍🏼
N happy navratri
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice update. They r enjoying navaratri celebration. Awesome swara having feelings for sanskar. In their group he won't talk with her and she won't talk with him. There aren't friends and they aren't strangers.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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lovely nd intrstng prologue nd first update was awesome
waitng for next updates
continue soon
thanxx for the pm
😊 😛 😛 😊

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