SwaSan OS 'Earth' - Page 7

Originally posted by: Alohomora.

Hey Viji.. I am reading your work for the first time as I didn't read Fire and Water. This is one of the best story I have ever read it's because of your writing, you wrote so beautifully. 👏 This is a series but I started from this, the last one and I really loved this one. You portrayed the characters wonderfully. When Swara confessed I felt Aww at that moment she confessed it in front of the family. ❤️ The flashback was nice. I'm so inspired from your writing and I should say that keep writing and post more but this is the last part of the series. I make sure that I will read your Fire and Water anytime. What an amazing writer you are? I know this is short but I have lots to say about this story. 😆 My network is so worse that it doesn't allow me 😛 Do make a new one 😉

Originally posted by: SONAL30

Unresd on page no 1

swara and sanskaar water and earth ❤️

my element is also earth, so naturally loved reading it. you made me love them more, sometimes its embarrassing, they are only fictional character😆

Originally posted by: SONAL30

Hey viji

Sorry 4 the late comment

Okk

Loved the OS

The chilling n teenage sanskaar was good but the khadoos n mr serious is best😳

Loved the flashback n sansku kavi's bonding😃

Back to present

Finally AP did the blunder...she has hasked for swara n laksh's alliance

According to her sanskaar should say yes because he was the reason behind this mess...wow but our hero cleared that ki only swara has a right to choose

DP tried to stop AP...but AP is AP the highness Annpurna jo kisi ki nhi sunati🤢

Even her spineless beta too joined her n tried to thopofy his decision on swara

And and and finally our swara admitted her love for her hubby i.e. our sanskuwell its okk na she have been listening laksh n his mother's crap from so long now its her turn to choise her family n her priorities

She loves sanskaar n he is her family along with her over dramatic Mom in law n silent movie waley FIL😆 and yeah her long lost nanad Uttara🥱

DP finally played a father's part n shut them up

Chalo SwaSan r together😳

Awesome update dear

N sorry 4 the chotu sa reply

Originally posted by: someonelikeyou-

woah !

too good

Originally posted by: patralekha24

swara and sanskaar water and earth ❤️

my element is also earth, so naturally loved reading it. you made me love them more, sometimes its embarrassing, they are only fictional character😆

Originally posted by: SupriyaG96

Fabulous and phenomenal write up (Read about other elements too) 👏 👏 👏
You are one of the finest writer 👏 ⭐️ ⭐️
And SwaSan what to say about them they are imperfectly perfect couple and finally Swara confessed her love for Sanskaar in front of whole family ❤️ ⭐️
DP was fabulous too 😃
Loved the most Sanskaar-Kavita part 😳
Hat's off to You for writing such wonderful write ups and your efforts along with your research

Originally posted by: RUQAIYA10

Hello Viji😊

Finally managed to steal some time to read your update. I am traveling so busy finishing off assignments, work, packing

What can I say about Earth. Everybody has said so much😊. You really are an amazing writer. I know I know I have said it before and you have heard it so many times but you are so so so good.

What I particularly liked about Earth is how perfectly you have etched out Sanskar's character. The flashback with Kavita and his attachment to AP sans the umblical cord. It is true that sometimes relations are not all about blood but love and affection. These emotions are not confined to biological relations and they arise out from the very core of our intrinsic nature. I think such is Sanskar and APs bond. even though she may lean towards her offspring the fact that she does care for Sanskar can not be put aside

The Earth and Water analogies are very apt for Swara and Sanskar and you have incorporated the elements in to their characters really well. By the way I am an air sign any thoughts on that?😉

Please keep on writing more stories. I have become a big fan of your work😃🤗