SwaSan OS 'Earth' - Page 5

Originally posted by: JazzyM

Your elements comparison makes full sense... for me, I always see a different side of each situation; the flip side of the coin kinda thought... I guess, my job is such that I tend to look for the nuance that makes the character different.

Agreed with your description of Sankaar...I'm stating him as fire with the same elements that you have described...fire can make or break any condition in life...patient, loyal, dependable ... it ensures we receive warmth, it ensure we have food on our table. Unyielding and impeccable when fire hits it's maximum. Sanskaar can go any length for his loved ones, Swara and when Swara is attacked he becomes unyielding and impeccable... Sankaar is the other side of fire to AP...

For me Swara is earth. She absorbs everything, willing to sacrifice for her loves ones, erupt when her loved ones are attacked.

Anyway...a fantastic elements comparison. thank you...

Originally posted by: anu91

Fantastic update dear...

Swara stand on her own...

Wow...The confession before entire family...so nice...

Loved it so much...

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

My comments were all very fair and genuinely meant 😳.Oh in my earlier haste I forgot the other comment I had to make. I was obsessed over Linda Goodman's book you footnote for years! I had a copy but when I left home (Kenya) to come to the UK years ago, I didn't bring our copy as my mum and sister used to like it too! Such a fab analysis of all signs and I distinctly remember how accurate it was for Virgos- who can be both introverted and extroverted, sometimes at the same time- which I totally am!

Last day of first week today. Love the new place and the energy but as it's a brand new role and I have to build up a new team there's loads of pressure plus the travel. Really exciting though so looking forward to it and praying I can prove they did right to create the role and promote me! I have flexibility though so can work from home today- yayyy! I hope you'll be back soon too and get some rest! What do you do btw? If I'm being nosy you don't have to tell me or you can PM me if you don't want to say here! x

Originally posted by: Cintila

Viji..🤗 you're back !! It's an absolute pleasure to read your stories. You write sooo beautifully. There's a perfect mix of everything in your stories. I loved loved loved this one. I could picture sanskaar's face when swara declared she loved him😳. Also, I loved the flashback part too. You described sanskaar's personality perfectly. Not only your stories but also the way that you write, the words that you use...everything is just soo right. It's perfect. Always.

I loved this os. Though I'm sad the series is over. Looking forward to reading more of your amazing works. Oh and thanks a lot for the pm😃😳

Originally posted by: bips

Eeks! i missed the update .. my inbox is like overflooded ...

Do you really need us to tell you what we think of your writing ? ... its just so beautiful ... the images you evoke (btw, i forgot to mention i loved the imagery you created in fire of devtas and asuras having a ;silent' battle in havankund ... I plan to use it for story telling when i have children) ...

... ummm right... back to earth ... your sanskar - he is like rahul dravid - solid wall. you know you can depend on him and he will never let you down and you captured that feeling to the T. And swara finally declaring her love in front of everyone - life comes full circle!

I'm sad that your series has come to an end (who had you planned for air though?) ... esp considering that i have not too happy with how the actual tv show is progressing, your stories were like a lifeline ... i really really hope you continue writing . You are brilliant!

p.s: I have to say though that "fire" was my favourite ... and not bec of swasan but bec of AAA ... sheer power of your writing viji

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Thanks so much Bips! Wow...glad you liked that imagery about the eternal battle of good versus evil so much, you're planning to tell your future kids about it. 😊

Yeah, I did want Swara to admit to her feelings in front of the whole family--just like Sanskaar had. Its only fair. 😊

I hadn't really fleshed out "Air", when I conceived this series, I was always more sure about making it a Trilogy (Water, Fire, Earth), and I was undecided about Air. If I did do it, though, I was thinking of doing it on Lucky. But I frankly don't have very clear ideas for the plot at the moment, and I feel if I did write it now, I just wouldn't be happy with it.

I plan to continue writing for sure. 😊 Am kind of rolling ideas in my head for an SS, but its all rather nebulous at the moment. I will do it, but it would take me some time. I hope I get inspired by the next week or two's worth of episodes. if that sets my imagination on fire, that should help quicken the SS. 😉

Thanks for reading & liking this series! And all the very best for your exams, I guess you said they are coming up?

Originally posted by: bips

Nooo! ... don't ever write about lucky ... you'll make me like him ... and i don't want to ... let me keep imagining him as a spineless waste of space ...

Yes, my exams are coming up ... and i was going to quit this forum but swasan kept pulling me back ...

but today, for some reason i just got exhausted while watching the show ... THIS is not how you tell a story ... I would have loved to watch what you wrote on my other thread - sitting on the balcony, watching LOTR etc

... But no, its all OTT drama, and endless one at that ... They are just going to waste sanskar ... just like swara has become indistinguishable from other tv bahus, so will sanskar ... I was really irritated with the show today (strange bec everyone else seems to have loved it) ... So i guess another day or two and then I'll quit the forum

Please pls do keep in the loop for your future writings

Originally posted by: RK-ki-Kaneez

Beautiful