Overpowered by Love- SwaSan Three Shot - Page 6

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Wow- I just love reading your comments Fia- you take such time to give your feedback and you so engage with what the writer is trying to portray- kudos to you 🤗. Your comments are making me blush- I have so much to learn and often when I read back what I write I literally cringe 😳.

You've really captured what I was trying to show with this in your summary- yayyy, it came through to you!

Re final part- I had it figured out but then this changed as i was writing so that too has now gone haywire 😆. I have a few possibilities but I want the one which makes the most sense to me for them, if you get what I mean? I wanted to do justice to both Sanskaar and Swara but still make sure their ending is individual- I really hope I can do it some justice. Thanks again and catch you again soon! Mmmwah.

Originally posted by: sun_shine18

I am totally blown away.👏👏👏

I can't even form a coherent thought in my mind to come up with a proper reply.

So much intensity, angst, poignance.

You have mentioned Heathcliff and Mr. Darcy, two of the most popular characters with an anti-hero character. Though I've always been a Mr. Darcy fan than a Heathcliff fan, Heathcliff is too much to handle and I can understand how Swara must have felt. Fantastic referance by the way. Sanskar do remind me a bit of both.

There were a lot of lines which went straight to my heart.

"Loving someone was after all, never reason enough to be loved back."

I had to stop here for a good 5 minutes. This simple sentence contained so much within it. The agony, the despair that Sanskar feels about not being loved back. The pain behind his acceptance, that Swara can never love him back.

Hats off. 👍🏼

I can sympathize with what Swara did due to her obvious confusion and fear of heartbreak again. Little does she realize that's exactly what she is doing to herself. To spare her of heartbreak in the future, she is breaking her heart every day in the present.

And Sanskar! For me he is the only real character in the show. He had shown different shades, like every other human being. And he should be forgiven for that, because that's what human's do. We make mistakes and we forgive them. In the real world, there is no black and white. And I really really hope that Sanskar gets his share of happiness, not just in your story but also in the show.

And now being the committed fan girl that I am, I beg of you to make Swasan happy.

Brilliant update. 😳

And now I've realized that I've rambled a bit too much, I'm gonna go before you fall asleep.😆😆

Do write more.

Originally posted by: ros_aavir

This is so so beautiful, exceptionally written! 👏

"he had explained to her that it was perhaps because of Kavita that he had fallen for her the way he had. What he had felt for Kavita was born of happy times, certainly love but love of the variety that grows in a natural way between two young souls who love being in love, learning to like and enjoy everything good in each other. His and Kavita's love was never as hollow as her and Lakshya's relationship, but neither was forged from the fires of shared pain and joint suffering- thus indestructible unless by themselves. It was only after Kavita's death that rage had consumed him, rage born of his helplessness and the unfairness of having a good soul snatched from him and from this world in such a brutal senseless way. Kavita had never seen the Sanskaar Swara had- dark and full of hate, bent of vengeance. "

This. This is why I've fallen in love with SwaSan. ❤️

EDIT: Thank you, this has totally made my day!

Originally posted by: Miss-swasan

I LOVE YOUR FAN-FICTIONS THEY ARE ALWAYS SO CREATIVE

Originally posted by: swa291

Thanks for the update .

Well i hope she confess in the next at very begning so that we will get a part full of swasan

Originally posted by: Annei123

Congo for ur new job !!!!

Lovely update

Hope all the misunderstandings b/w swasan gets clear soon 😃

Do update next part asap

Originally posted by: The.Lannister

Thanks for the PM.

I am so happy that we get to read what swara is feeling & felt all those months ago. I sorely miss that on the show atm. You really do get Sanskaar. This behavior is so typical of them.

I also liked that you have kept the dialogue in hindi. I could easily imagine them actually saying these things.

Waiting for them to get back together forever and ever!

Congratulations on your new job!

Originally posted by: -damon-

totally loved it
seriously..awesome part
can't they both see how much they love each other..
i loved when sanskaar said those things to swara in d end about divorce nd all..swara really desereves it.she has been giving really hard time to sanskaar even in the show..
Loved the quotes that u put in b/w
Once again loved it waiting for nxt part

Originally posted by: medhasarkar

Shruti🤗,

what do i say about this part...I sincerely have no idea where to begin, and certainly none about where i would be able to stop.😊

you gave the entire conversation such a feel with your words. even an impatient person like me was compelled to go back once or twice and re-read the previous line, just for the pure unadulterated joy of it.👏

You know, i have always admired the way some people can write everything in detail and still manage to catch people's attention. writing emotions in detail requires a lot of finesse, which i'm grateful to say i'm learning from some writers on this forum. You happen to be one of them.⭐️

You'll tod-phod you next job. Congo! matlab don't do tod-phod...just pharo it. Oh me and my incoherency. sigh!😲 like do your best.😛

love---

medha.

Originally posted by: jasw

OMG! This is an incredible TS! I am new to this forum. I have started watching this serial recently and I am hooked onto it already!😊 Well, some Sanskar Maheshwari has to be blamed for this! 😃

Your take on Sanskar and Swara is superb and so real! I so wish the CVs take the story forward like you envisaged here although going by the melodramatic tracks they churn out, that looks kinda impossible. 😆

I so loved the reference to Heathcliff and Darcy(Darcy being my all time hero❤️).

Looking forward to the next part.