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Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: -.Aphrodite.-
This is so beautiful Preet. I am in love with your writings. Sanskaar's confession was so pure and realistic. I wish they have shown it like this in show. His pain of losing his first love, his realization of being wrong and then his love for Swara...it's so amazing. It's like he is dying for his family's trust, yet no one is able to feel his pain. I loved the way Swara supported him. Really awesome work.
P.S. Do you have an index for all your writings??

Thank you so much Preet 🤗 Means a lot 😳
And nope abhi tak index nahi hai of all my writings

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Smilelicious

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Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: Asha122
Amazing preet...👏👏
Beautifully written...😳
Sanskaar confession was realistic loved it a lot...
Do write more yar...😊

Loved this dialogue...⭐️⭐️⭐️

'Tum mera saath dogi Swara?'
She looks in his eyes'humesha, mein kabhi tootne nahi dungi tumhe'
'Jaanta hoon Swara, jab tak tum ho, tum kabhi bhi tootne nahi dogi'and rested his head on her shoulder.

Thanks a lot Asha 🤗