SwaSan OS 'Samander mein, kinara tu'

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medha

@ToujoursPur

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

I got transported preet...into a dreamworld.

its so like a poem.

it flowed with emotions...and the drama was handled so well by you. I often find dramatic sequences by writers overdone and unreal...but you were perfect.

love---

medha.

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Smilelicious

@Smilelicious

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: farayan
A beautiful confession, excellently written, Sanskars pain is well shown and expressed...

Thanks a lot for appreciating 😳
Glad you liked my OS 😊

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Smilelicious

@Smilelicious

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Lavender_Love
Preet.. its so beautifully penned down...🤗
Rula dia tune yaar... so much pain.. guilt.. frustrations...you put them in words amazingly

Aww thank you so much Nityah 🤗
I tried my best to write it and glad you liked it 😳

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Smilelicious

@Smilelicious

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum
<font size="2">Amazing yaar Preet. So beautifully penned. The whole thing was so lyrical in its flow.

These exchange seriously gave me goosebumps:
</font>
'Tum
mera saath dogi Swara?'
She
looks in his eyes 'humesha, mein kabhi tootne nahi dungi tumhe'
'Jaanta
hoon Swara, jab tak tum ho, tum kabhi bhi tootne nahi dogi' and
rested his head on her shoulder.
<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">Such a beautiful encapsulation of their relationship.

Thanks for the PM. I am now waiting for your your SS updates 😊</font>