SwaSan OS 'Samander mein, kinara tu' - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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I got transported preet...into a dreamworld.
its so like a poem.

it flowed with emotions...and the drama was handled so well by you. I often find dramatic sequences by writers overdone and unreal...but you were perfect.

love---
medha.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: farayan

A beautiful confession, excellently written, Sanskars pain is well shown and expressed...


Thanks a lot for appreciating 😳
Glad you liked my OS 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Lavender_Love

Preet.. its so beautifully penned down...🤗
Rula dia tune yaar... so much pain.. guilt.. frustrations...you put them in words amazingly


Aww thank you so much Nityah 🤗
I tried my best to write it and glad you liked it 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

<font size="2">Amazing yaar Preet. So beautifully penned. The whole thing was so lyrical in its flow.

These exchange seriously gave me goosebumps:
</font>

'Tum
mera saath dogi Swara?'

She
looks in his eyes 'humesha, mein kabhi tootne nahi dungi tumhe'

'Jaanta
hoon Swara, jab tak tum ho, tum kabhi bhi tootne nahi dogi'
and
rested his head on her shoulder.

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">Such a beautiful encapsulation of their relationship.

Thanks for the PM. I am now waiting for your your SS updates 😊</font>


Thank you so much Viji, right? 😊 Means really a lot 😳 Will update soon my SS 👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: JazzyM

Well written...loved the transcript during Sanksar's drunken stage and how you made Swarna care for him...


Thanks a lot dear 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
Superb as always..and thanks for pm😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
This was amazing!
How he put his heart open..the hurt of being misunderstood and being broken again n again ...pain !
She is the heal to his wounds

Dard anjaane nhi
Par malham se hai pyar
Har zakham hai pyara
Par tujh bin jeena nhi gawara
Edited by -TeriMalang- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
preet its beautiful yaar 👏
loved it a lot 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Preet
It's beautifully written
U r an amazing writer loves the way u write...full of emotion👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Preet, dear this was soo beautiful. 🤗
I loved it. You've started writing soo well👏
I love your os's😳

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