SwaSan OS 'Samander mein, kinara tu'

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Smilelicious

@Smilelicious

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: medhasarkar
I got transported preet...into a dreamworld.
its so like a poem.

it flowed with emotions...and the drama was handled so well by you. I often find dramatic sequences by writers overdone and unreal...but you were perfect.

love---
medha.

Omg thank you so much for the amazing and lovely words Medha 😳

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Rimjhim Ghosh

@Rimu_coldfire

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Its so amazing preet dear...I just loved this OS to bits...

The best part for the OS was when Swara says that she won't let Sanskaar break...I was like awww...

please do write more...and thank you so much for the pm...😃

-Rimjhim

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Mansi

@Princess_Mansi

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Preet its awesome

Loved the confession

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Shweta Gupta

@ll_megha_ll

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#44

wow dear

awesome shot.

loved it..

brilliant...

you wrote each and everything beautifully

do write more on swasan😳..

sorry for short comment due to plaster😭

hope you understand

thanks for the pm...

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Smilelicious

@Smilelicious

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: -damon-
not liked it!
loved it

Thank you so much 😊

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Smilelicious

@Smilelicious

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: sneharay
Superb as always..and thanks for pm😊

Thanks a lot 😊

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Smilelicious

@Smilelicious

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: -TeriMalang-
This was amazing!
How he put his heart open..the hurt of being misunderstood and being broken again n again ...pain !
She is the heal to his wounds

Dard anjaane nhi
Par malham se hai pyar
Har zakham hai pyara
Par tujh bin jeena nhi gawara

Thanks a lot dear 😳