YuvAni FF: Separated (both POVs) part 7. p17 End+note - Page 14

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Posted: 10 years ago
Ok where do I begin it was Awesome

Wow wonder when we will get to see this Yuvraj in the show hungry for his wife lol

I like how Suhani was like get off and open the door and out your shirt on lol

She was hurrying him to open the door she forgot her has to out the shirt on

Aww Saurab Anuj Sharad are naughty but sweet

I like how Saurab gave premission to Sharad and Anuj to disturb Yuvani

Sharad is funny asking them to open the door he knew what they were busy doing

Aww Pratima standing and listening to them she is such cool mum, it's funny how Suhani tried to hide behind Pratima because of the teasing

Aww they all hugged Suhani they all love her so much it's nice to see them happy that she is back

Aww Pratima got suhani saree and jewellery that's nice

Omg Yuvraj is funny when suhani said do whatever you want he got happy we can't blame him

It's nice he put the sindoor and the mangalsutra on her and he got her a present that's nice and sweet about time he got her gifts

Lol he wants her to spend every second of the day with him crazy guy wants to make up for all the time they wasted

It's nice he missed her on her forehead and they walked out hand in hand great ending

Mehwish what can I say brillant story written beautifully as always

I cannot wait to read your next story it will be fab hope you start it soon

Love you mwaaah 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
Fantastic writing.
Loved it!

Ok now u leave me wanting more!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow beautiful!!!
lovely ending.. really liked the story..
thanx a ton.. keep writing!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
oh no it ended 😭
but it's k next ff will be yuvani consummate 😉 😳

CMG to this part mehwu I just loved this type of yuvraj now Im waiting to see this kind of yuvi in show

ur blessed writer dear..each n every word z amazing.we can imagine every scene in ur words

sharad dialogue was superb Oh Guru, let Bhabhi go for a few minutes." ha ha he z so funny

saurabh part when he gave permission to saurabh n anuj to tease yuvraj its so cute

pratima was so good he gave saree n all to her wow

"I can't sleep." He said. "Suhaniii..." He begged
like a child. oh my god he doest want to sleep he z so romantic..can't wait to see this yuvi in show
when will we get these scenes

we are so lucky to have in this forum so we are getting amazing ff..love u dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME!!!

This is just... No words 👏

Its getting hot over here... I blushed like a stupid throughout!! This is brilliant Mehwish dear!! I love love love it sooo much!!

YuvAni romance is just beautiful!! Thankyou sooo much for such a wonderful ff!! You gave it a happy ending!!
Love you sooo much!!

Ek aur baat, Your ff has made a ghehara asar on my mind.. Ab me padayi kaise karu? Mujhe book me bhi YuvAni dikh rahe he.. If this continues, Me doctor kaise banungi?? 😆

That was a joke... You are the rockstar of our forum! You are so talented!! Keep it coming girl!! Ham sabko aise hi khush karte raho!! THANKYOU!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
beautifully ff Mehwish 👍🏼👏
loved desperate Yuvraj 😳😆
& his brothers teasing so cute
poor Suhani aww she tells him to get his shirt on ☺️😆
the sindoor & mangal sutra part was so beautiful
the writers should seriously take tips from u

awesomely well written as always ⭐️
Edited by ...RamonaG.... - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautifully done. I only wish you could possess Tripathi.

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