YuvAni FF: Separated (both POVs) part 7. p17 End+note - Page 12

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Posted: 10 years ago
OMG God what an HOT update loved it * fanning myself*
Mehwish hun what can I say brillant I like how you wrote everything so perfectly and with ease and grace

His confession in the beginning was beautiful words were amazing, him kneeling down and looking into her eyes while talking was excellent, him asking to stay in their room and in his mums room was good

him going out to talk to her parents was nice and mature, I like how Pratima came out and saw them, Pratima hugging suhani was sweet

lol Pratima holding their ears because she thought they both hit each other was funny and cute

Pratima jumping up and down aww she is a kid at heart such nice mum

wow Suhanis parents are sweet they excepted his apologise so quick that is nice of them

her staring at him and him holding her hand while driving was nice, what made it better was him asking is she was happy awww

I like how he didnt let her unpack that was a good decision by him, I mean they both have waited so long no time to waste anymore

the intimate scene is written beautifully and graceful well done it was tasteful and not vulgar

I loved how Yuvraj I said I love you, sooo sweet and perfect timing

Ok who the hell is at their door now, people leave them alone and let them be, they need sometime alone, Pratima and Sharad need to understand that, it better not be dadi the witch

ok loved the update thank you

can't wait to read what happens next, we need lots of romance and yuvani alone 😃

Thank you Mehwish love ya 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shanakyasharan

who the hell is knocking on their door wen they r just about to boom boom😡😡😡

ill kill maa n sharad if they were he ones knocking😡

I know right why do they have to disturb them
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shanakyasharan

loved loved loved yuvi bhaiyya's confession...so much to say n he said it so beautifully


loved the dialogues!!!

u know ur the best babe🤗

I know the confession was awesome
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow beautiful!!!!!
luved yuvraj's confession...
Awww pratima's reaction was cute and funny..
erhh wonder whoz at the door disturbing them..
plzz continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago


❤️

👏

Awesome Awesome Awesome. No words. It was so HOT and sensational. His confession was sooo touchy and cute. Specially that part...I still don't know what's love...his feelings for her is so strong. I wish you were the script writer for Yuvraj. You define him the BEST 👏

Pratima made me 🤣
She thought they were hitting each other. This part was so cute. I really loved this trio's conversation. I wish our Pratima of the show could teach him like this.

You can unpack in the morning ❤️
And the rest of the part just killed me, chopped me into pieces. What a temptation! You are an amazing writer with good sense of romance. God their kisses Hayeee...Hotness at its peak...Superb...I was blushing throughout...my cheeks are still red 😳

And then the KNOCK 😲 not fair...who is this annoying creature disturbing my love birds?!

Awesome update. Its worth waiting for your FF ❤️
Love you too much. God gifted you are. You know the best how to utilize YuvAni 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
They were on their BED
when will it happen in the show 😔
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Posted: 10 years ago
Love you for writing this. Its epic. Aww I want to see this in real. Please writers read this and at least give 10% of it. I'm reading from part 1 again 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
😡😡Why this knock now??? Leave my yuvani alone...
For the past few days, my first job in the morning is to on the laptop and read ur update, anything and everything can wait..😳😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
Read part 4,5 and 6 one in a go... You are amazing Mehwish!! Loved his confession...
Finally I've got some time to read your ff.. No review this time I'm really sorry.. These bloody exams.. Urghh
Update soon!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
HOT...HOT...HOT!!! What else could be?
It was again an awesome update.👏 I was blushing throughout while i'm reading. ☺️

Who is on the door and Why are u stopping at the wrong place?😭😭😆

Pls update soon yaar. I'm waiting...😆

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