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Posted: 17 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: cool_SK

haila........Wah ji wah.......pehle hi itni betabi dekhanay laggi mummye

😳

Yaar aryan kitne sawal pochta hai..........mummye tau darr gai 😕 ........ 😆 ...........likin abh tau zindagi bhar sunana hai..........mummye..........adaat daal loo 😆

Mummye ka roub kaam kar gaya.........Sweeto......jab mummye ne kaha k woh khana layain gii tau tumhain kia prob 😳 ........mummye practice karwa rahi hai........agay bhi khana hai.....mirch masalay ka bata deyna 😃

Chachu ne chachi ko mana liya yaan sirf hero ban raha hai 😉 ............likin phassa bura tha.......chachi or aryan doonon k mamlay main........likin donon hi solve ho gai

Sweet dreams sweeto 😳

Great Going Krithika

That was a fab part 👏

waiting

lolz
ana 👏

😆Ana mujhe nahi pata.. Mera FF itna funny hai ya tumhare comments... Thanks a lot... As for mummy... Yaar... Shaadi ke baad Aryan ki baat chalegi ka.... Soch lo... Koun sunayega Aryan yar mummy😉

Raub kaise nahi chalta... Aryan uthne baithne tak kaabil nahi ab.... 😃

Chaachu hamesha hi hero banane ke chakkar me hai ana... Neha ke saath aur doosron ke saath bhi😆

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Posted: 17 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: cuteboomer9

thank god dipika didnt bang on door...varna uske liye b room book karwaana padta hospital mein 😆 😆
aryan ko sahi tym par neend aagyi.....lovely ji z really so shweeeeeeeeeet yr....bahut he funny character hai unka..bindaas hai....ajay to bach gya aaj...bechaara phas gya hai....dipika ki sune ya aryan ki!!!!!! 😉

Thank you Bhoomi... Haan.. Aur shayad Aryan ke paas waale bed me hi😉 😆

Thanks for Lovely ji's appreciation... Hain naa sweet vo? Mujhe bhi pasand hain.... Ajay ka to poocho hi mat.... Vo khud hai aisa bandar to kisi ke kehene ya naa kehene se kuch hone waala nahi hai naa Bhoomi😉

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Posted: 17 years ago
#53
The door opened slowly so as to not to disturb the persons inside…. Because the night lamp was on there was some illumination in the room….

Dipika entered the room carrying a basket… She saw that Ajay was curled up on the sofa…. She looked towards Sister Lovely's chair and saw it empty… It was time for her duty off….. 😊

Nearing the bed Dipika placed a hand over the bed railing and looked down at Aryan sleeping curled up beneath the sheets…. She smiled…. He looked so peaceful in his sleep… Her eyes had yearned to see him like that… Sleeping stretched out in a bed…. 😳 She smiled thinking of those times she had chided him for not going home and having rest…. Her dreams had come true…. Yes, but in a painful way…

She sighed and went up to the couch… She placed the basket on the table and rounding the table neared the couch…. She bent down and slowly shook his shoulders….

Dipika: (Whispering) Ajay….

Giving a start he woke up…. He sat upright and looking around wildly said….

Ajay: Kya? Koun?

Dipika: Sshh… Aryan ko jaga doge….

Ajay: (Rubbing his eyes) Oh… Dipika…

Dipika: (Straightening) Haan… Main…. (Smiling) Good morning…

Yawning he stood up and stretched himself….

Ajay: Hunh… Good morning!

Dipika: Jao… Jake fresh ho jao….

Looking around slowly he located the bathroom padded off towards it sleepily…. 🥱

Dipika took out a flask and poured a cup of coffee…. She set it down and sat on the couch…. She had just taken out the newspaper from the basket to read it, when the Ajay returned…..

Seeing him Dipika offered him the cup of coffee…

Ajay: (Sitting down on the other side of the couch) Thanks….

Aryan was still in his deep slumber because of his heavy medications….. 🥱

Ajay sipped his coffee and said…..

Ajay: (Softly)Ah… Early morning one cup of strong coffee… Kitna refreshing hai…..

Dipika looked up from the newspaper and smiled at his comment….. He had been saying this for the past two months whenever she bought coffee for him in the mornings…. It was her practice to bring coffee for him or Boxer, who ever were staying for the night…
😊
She went back to reading her newspaper, when Ajay commented…..

Ajay: Aryan will not like it!!!! 🤔

Dipika looked up again from her paper frowning… Seeing her confused Ajay said….. 😕

Ajay: Ye… (Indicating the coffee cup) Coffee… Use peena mana hai naa…. Pata nahi uske liye kya karne waala hai… He will not like it…..

Dipika: (Sternly) Whether he likes it or not Ajay…. He has to listen… Uske sheet ke liye hi to hai… He has to stop it…. 😳

Ajay raised his eyebrows over the rim of the cup suppressing a surprised smile… 😵 Looking sideways at Aryan sleeping he thought…. Well…. Well… Aryan buddy boy…. You are in for some tough time….. 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
#54

Ajay started to sip his coffee again when he remembered something and asked Dipika…. Dipika again looked up from the newspaper….

Ajay: (Softly)Dipika… Kal Aryan ne Special Squad ke baare me poocha… Poocha ki uske absence me cases koun handle kar raha hai?

Dipika: (Stunned 😲 )Tumne use bataya to nahi?

Ajay: Hmm… No… I had tough time evading him though… Thank God, mere kuch bolne se pehle vo so gaya…

Dipika let out a sigh and relaxed back in the couch… Giving Aryan a glance she wondered how long could they keep things away from him? Not for long…. But matters must be said very slowly… He was still very sensitive… Doctor had said….

Ajay: (Voicing the same doubt as hers) Lekin Dipika kab tak chupayenge ussse? Aryan is very incisive…Waise usse keh kyun nahi dete? Its not going to matter…

Dipika: (Nodding) Haan Ajay… We can't keep things from him for long… Lekin itni jaldi batane ki bhi koi zaroorat nahi hai… Let him get discharged… Doctor ne kaha hai ki use stress nahi dene chahiye… The more he rests is better for him…. Waise bhi Vishal ke baare me kahenge to he would start to ask a lot questions…. 😕

Ajay: (Agreeing) Haan… That too when we feel they both know each other…. (Looking at his watch he set down the cup) Saath bajne waale hain… Main nikalta hoon… Seedha office me milta hoon….

Dipika nodded… Ajay went to Aryan to have a look at him… Smiling he whispered….

Ajay: Bye buddy!

Saying this Ajay went off home to get ready for office….

Dipika settled back against the couch with the newspaper and waited for Aryan to wake up…

The doctor had said to give him rest and let him wake up on his own… Not to wake him up deliberately… His body had to come back to normal functioning with rest and sleep….

Just as it was seven-thirty the room door opened and Nurse Lovely came in…. She smiled looking at Dipika from the back… She had expected to see her and she was there…. 😃 She came up to Dipika and said….

Lovely: Good Morning Dipika! 😊

Looking up back Dipika saw who it was…. Seeing it was Lovely she immediately got up and said smiling…. 😛

Dipika: Good Morning Sister! 😊

Lovely: Aryan ke davaayi ka waqt ho gaya hai… Waise breakfast laaye hain naa? Breakfast ke baad hi medicines dene hain…..

Dipika: Haan Lovely ji… But he will not like it…. Bread and jam… He likes them…. Lekin use spicy khaana, parathe zyada pasand hai…. Aur to aur coffee bhi banned hai pata chala…. To zameen aasmaan ek kar dega…. 😉

Lovely: Lo… Kar lo baat.... Use pasand hai isliye use masale daar khaana to nahi de sakte.… Aaj se diet shuru karenge… Kal shayad use kuch spicy milega…. Lekin coffee totally no….

Dipika nodded…. She knew it very well… But then Aryan wouldn't agree without a tantrum…. 😔 Well… Let's see… They have to face him…. 😊

Lovely: Use uthana hai… Usse davayi deke mujhe bhi off duty jaana hai…. Aur surprising se us Bandar ne kal koi shaitani nahi ki…. Mere kaam bhi isliye jaldi khatam ho gaye… Warna nou ke lagbag ho jaate mujhe apne kaam wrap up karne me….

Dipika chuckled 😆 at Lovely ji's jib…. But she was confused and asked her…. 😕

Dipika: (Looking at Aryan and back at the Nurse) Lekin Aryan to so raha hai Sister… Doctor ne kaha hai ki use deliberately uthaya na jaye….

Lovely: Haan… Lekin unki medication ussse bhi zyada important hai… Unhe uthana to hai hi…. Lekin softly… No jerks or anything….

Leaving a thinking Dipika 🤔 behind Lovely ji went to Aryan's bed to wake him up when Dipika hurried up to her and stopped her….

Dipika: (Just in time catching Lovely hands) Lovely ji…. Aise nahi… Main…. Utha doon?

Lovely looked at Dipika… She smiled and said…. 😳

Lovely: Acchha… Main medicines nikaalti hoon….

Dipika went to the window behind Aryan's bed and moved away the curtains… The sun let in his graceful rays directly on Aryan's eyes… They were not so strong but very light and refreshing… When Dipika came back to the bed Aryan was stirring from his sleep….. 😛

Lovely came back to the bed and seeing Aryan stirring from his sleep smiled… She set the medicines on the table beside Aryan's bed…. She looked at her watch and exclaimed….

Lovely: Are der hoti jaa rahi hai… Ab tak ye day duty nurse kyun nahi aayi? Usse handover karke jaaoon to… Vo aaye tab naa….

Seeing Lovely's state Dipika volunteered to help….

Dipika: Lovely ji… Agar aapko der ho rahi hai to jayiye… Main Aryan ko breakfast deke medicines bhi de doongi…. 😊

Lovely smiled knowingly…. 😃 Welll… It was getting late… But for Lovely her duty came first…. She wouldn't go anywhere without completing her duty… And she never complained of being late…. But today she had exclaimed purposefully….. 😉 She thought ye dono saath kitne acchhe lagte hain…. ❤️ Something had made her do that! 👍🏼

Lovely: (Innocently) Accccchhaaaaaaa… Theek hai… Lekin thank you hai ji… Sacchhi me der ho gayi... Main chalti hoon…. 😉

Saying this Lovely ji was out of the room within seconds…. Smiling at her Dipika turned back to the bed…. Aryan was wide awake now smiling at her….. 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#55
it was great krithika.

i know who would be the love guru for the aryan, but i am not sure. i am not going to give name of that person.

i did not know every day dipika goes to hospital in the morning, i thought she goes to hospital after the work is finish.

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Posted: 17 years ago
#56
hey dear
yaar app jo marzi sochoo........likin its just i can't resist pulling leg of any one from ur FF 😆

these parts are as usual great.......... 👏

Well dipi is so soft with the ppl living with Aryan or imagine.........how soft she will be with aryan 😉

Chaloo........luvly jii raat ko sakoon se rahin.........Chachi ne accha jadu kia chachu pe 😉

Mummye jii........aryan ko impress na karain..........he is already impressed.........waise uthanay ka tareeqa accha tha 😛

well now waiting how will sweeto react to her when she will ask him to eat his medicines and no coffee 😆

he is definately a coffee crazy man 😳

lolz
ana 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: cool_SK

hey dear
yaar app jo marzi sochoo........likin its just i can't resist pulling leg of any one from ur FF 😆

these parts are as usual great.......... 👏

Well dipi is so soft with the ppl living with Aryan or imagine.........how soft she will be with aryan 😉

Chaloo........luvly jii raat ko sakoon se rahin.........Chachi ne accha jadu kia chachu pe 😉

Mummye jii........aryan ko impress na karain..........he is already impressed.........waise uthanay ka tareeqa accha tha 😛

well now waiting how will sweeto react to her when she will ask him to eat his medicines and no coffee 😆

he is definately a coffee crazy man 😳

lolz
ana 😛

I love your leg-pulling by the way😃

Hmm.. Aryan impressed hain hi.... Lekin kya hai dikhata nahi naa... Ghonchu jo hai😆

Hmm.... Neha ne kya jaadu maara aaj pata chal jayega..... 😃

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Posted: 17 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: sam78

it was great krithika.

i know who would be the love guru for the aryan, but i am not sure. i am not going to give name of that person.

i did not know every day dipika goes to hospital in the morning, i thought she goes to hospital after the work is finish.

Oh... Sam itha bhi nahi pata.... Yaad karo very much before I mentioned it as Neha thinking when Dipika was going to court for her case hearings😊

Love Guru?!?!?😉 Ek aur baat bataaoon.... Aru ki zindagi ka ek nahi kayiiiiiiii love guru hain... Usme se ek love guru ki entry bahut baaaaaaaaddddddd hone waali hai.... And when it does... Welll.... You guys are gonna love it😃

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Posted: 17 years ago
#59
yaar,main tumhare is fanfic pe poori tarah se fidaaa ho chuki hu .........!
wat a fantabulous writer u r???
i just luv d scenes btwn aryan n deepika........!
wowieeeeeeee........!
another one is gonna cum next....
wating 4 dat..........!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#60
hey wat a ff! u should receive som best writr award ya smthn! ur tooo good..............do continue will wait for nxt part!

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