SS2 (Fanfic II) - Page 8

nice n funny parts once again 👏 👏 👏

sam,u r absolutely right......!
v want dis fanfic 2 b evrlasting.

Originally posted by: diya(swtgrl)

nice n funny parts once again 👏 👏 👏

sam,u r absolutely right......!
v want dis fanfic 2 b evrlasting.

😳Thanks Diya.... For the encouragement..... But as you said for me itslef it seems the FF is gonna be everlasting😆

Dipika, Neha and Boxer waited for a while, with Neha and Boxer having their coffees…. The bathroom door opened and Aryan came out wiping his face with the towel in one hand, having his brush and paste in the other…..

Neha saw and went over to him calling out "Aryan"…. Aryan looked up to see who it was and his face broke into a broad smile….. 😃

Aryan: Neha…. 😛

Neha gave him a one sided hug and Aryan held her closely…. 🤗 He was well aware of the relation between him and Neha…. More than a friend…. Like his own sister…..

Parting from him Neha asked……

Neha: How are you feeling now? 😳

Aryan: Fine…. Bahut dino ke baad chal raha hoon naa to kuch uneasy sa tha…. But now its okay…..

Neha nodded smiling and led him over to the couch…..

There was a triple seater couch and a single couch on to the either side of the coffee table…. Dipika was seated in the single couch… Boxer in the corner of the triple couch, near her….

Aryan sat at the other end of the couch….. After Aryan was seated Neha took his brush and paste and went to keep it in the cupboard to the left of the couch….

Aryan gave a satisfied look around and when he glanced at Dipika…. They both looked at each other again 😍 and felt the same amusement and embarrassment they had felt few minutes ago…. Immediately both of them averted their eyes….☺️

Neha came back and sat between Aryan and Boxer…. Looking at him sideways instantly tears appeared in her eyes…..

Neha: We missed you so much Aryan…. 😭

Aryan looked at her surprised to see tears in her eyes…. Cajoling he said…. 😳

Aryan: Hey… Neha… I am perfectly fine now…. See….

He spread his hands to indicate himself…. Dipika and Boxer looked at each other smiling…. He was fine… They knew… But he wouldn't know the torment they had undergone these months….

Patting Neha on her shoulders Aryan looked at the coffee table… Looking at a cup of coffee he inhaled a deep breath…. 😛

Aryan: Wow…. Coffee…. Bahut din ho gaye…. Of course I don't realize it….

Saying this he extended his hand to the cup when "No"…. Shocked Aryan froze…. He looked up to see all three of them Neha, Dipika and Boxer seated forward extending their hands as if stopping him…. 😲

Aryan retracted his hands and looking at them weirdly asked….

Aryan: (Confused) What?

Immediately all three of them put their hands down and looked at each other, not knowing what to answer… After a while….

Dipika: Vo…. Aryan… (Thinking of something immediately) Jhootha hai… Boxer ka…. 😉

She looked at Boxer…. Boxer jerked his head to look at her… Dipika raised her eyebrows and gave a curt slight nod…. Understanding it Boxer took away the cup of coffee from his side and said…. 😕

Boxer: Vo… Um… Haan Aryan… Ye cup mera hai naa... Jhootha hai.... Isliye.....

Casually at the same time Neha also took the other cup and placed it at the far side of the table….

Aryan looked at Dipika, Neha and Boxer weirdly and surprised…..

Aryan: Jhootha?!?!? Boxer we share the same cup of coffee in office….. 😔

Boxer looked at him… He felt so trapped…. Of course they shared coffees… But doctor had said not to even give him a sip…. What to do?

Coming to the rescue Neha said…..

Neha: Vo kuch nahi Aryan… Tum abhi abhi theek hue ho…. Doctor ne… Haan… Hygiene follow karne ke liye kaha hai…. 😕

But Aryan was not so pleased with the reasoning.... There was something... Neha never hesitated so much

Dipika: (Catching on) Haan… Hygiene…. Tum ye lo… Bread…. Main... Main tumhare liye ek aur cup pour kar deti hoon….

She passed the plate of bread to him..... Aryan still wondering what was the matter took the plate…. He looked at it with a not so happy look… Neha looked at him and smiling looked at Dipika… Both shook their heads….. It was an expected reaction….. 😆

Of course it was not like Aryan hated bread and jam, but still he liked more of Indian spicy food for breakfast which he ate very rare before…. 😛

Aryan looked up with pleading face at Neha and Dipika…. But seeing their stern looks he went back to his plate and started on the bread silently…. One woman chiding him was far enough…. Two?!?!? He can never handle….

Dipika started to pour him his milk when she remembered……

Dipika: (To Boxer) Boxer vo fruits? Nahi laye? ❓

Boxer looked at her burrowing his eyebrows thinking….. 🤔 Then remembering he hit his forehead and said….

Boxer: Oh… Damn… Vo to main apne bike ke case me bhool gaya… Abhi lata hoon…

Boxer immediately got up and went outside to get the fruits….. 😊

Dipika poured Aryan's milk and getting up placed it in front of him and sat back…. Just as Aryan finished his bread he took the cup to receive the worst surprise….

Aryan: Milk?!?!? (He looked at Neha and Dipika) Ab bhi??? (The becoming stern he said) Neha kya ho raha hai? I don't drink milk in the mornings, you know that…..

Neha looked at him helpless and looked back at Dipika for help…. As Dipika nodded…. Taking a deep breath Neha said….

Neha: (Looking at him said softly) Aryan… Doctor ne tumhe coffee peene se mana kiya hai….

Aryan: (Stunned) Kya? Lekin kyun? I.... 😭 😉

Neha: Darasal Aryan, jab tumhari routine tests ki gayi thi, tab pata chala ki you had started to develop ulcer... Uski wajah se tumhari treatment bhi thoda slow hua tha..... Isliye doctor ne strictly keh diya ki tumhe coffee bilkul nahi peena chahiye.....

Aryan just kept blinking at her stunned….. Ulcer?!?!?! 😕 Instantly he looked at Dipika who was also watching him….. Both of them were thinking the same moment…….

Dipika: Itni coffee pioge to pet me ulcers ho jayenge, agar ab tak nahi hue hain to…. Aryan itni choti si baat nahi maante…. Coffee kum piya karo….

Aryan had jokingly asked her…..

Aryan: Ab main apna samaan baandoon????

Dipika: (Confused 😕 ) Kya?

Aryan: (Grinning 😃 ) Nahi…. Aaj tum subah subah mujhse itni sweetly baat kar rahi ho, mere health ke baare me fikar kar rahi ho.... To mujhe lag raha hai... Aaj vo din hai, jab tum mujhe Special Squad se bahar nikaal dogi... (Mock sighing) Acchha laga yahan kaam karke.... Lekin Dipika I'll really miss you yaar... 😉

Dipika had shook her head unbelievingly at that weirdo and left the cabin... Got him two cups of coffee…. Banging them on the table asked……

Dipika: (Sternly) Aur laaoon? 😡

Aryan: Nai….

The phone rang…….

Dipika felt as if someone was shaking herself….. Coming out of her reverie she looked around….

Dipika: (Involuntarily) Kya? 😔

Dipika felt as if someone was shaking herself….. Coming out of her reverie she looked around….

Dipika: Hunh……. 😕

Neha: Dipika tumhara phone….

That's when she realized her cell was buzzing... Nodding she took her cell from her suit pocket... Accepting the call she placed the phone over her ear when Aryan commented….

Aryan: Cheeni kum hai….

Dipika: (Confused) Kya?

Aryan: (Looking at her over the rim of the cup) Maine kaha isme cheeni kum hai…

Dipika smiled at the coincidence…. 😳 And answered the phone….

Dipika: Hello…. Haan Vi…. 😲

Dipika stopped herself in mid-sentence and looked up…. Both Aryan and Neha were watching her…. She chided herself for been nearly so careless…..

Neha's stare said her to be careful…. Aryan watched her suspiciously... Excusing herself Dipika went outside to attend the call…. 😳

Aryan thought "People stop mid-sentence while talking about Special Squad in front of him.... Why??"🤔

aryan because they care for you.

it was great krithika.

we love that you have given so much time on aryan. it is great that you are doing that because we do want aryan's part very much. for about two monthes we only heard about his name and about his health, so finally he is talking, if the time is going slow than it fine with us that the story is going slow.

pehle he dipika ki baat maanli hoti to aaj aryan coffee pi sakta tha!!!!!!
yr, aryan se kab tak chhupa payenge ki case vishal solve kar raha hai...kab tak???? 😕

wow,funny parts 👏 👏 👏
felt pity 4 aryan........!
but,bhugatna to padega hi!

poor aryan....no COFFEE! dats bad i pity him! but anyways nic parts!

Superb chay
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Neha and aryan really shared a sweet relation 😳 😳 😳

Boxer bhai, dipika ka har time saath denay se phaas sakte hoo...........be careful 😆

That Flashback was too good...........aryan and dipika 😳

Sweeto, be careful............we all 😉 care 4 u.......so plz take good care of urself....... 😳

luvly going

Vishal ko bhi abhi call karni thi..........itnay acche khayaloon main mummye thi 😳

waiting 4 next

lolz
ana 😳

hey there ive allways been a silent reader of ur fanfic but today i had to comment its simply mindblowing ive no words to describe it at all im speechless im actually a ght fan but i love ur fanfic i cant say anything more

and here is a link of the video which u have mentioned in ur post the coffee scene
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ejehw8_m4j0
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