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Posted: 17 years ago
#61
aryan ko jagaane ka deeps ka tareeka too gud tha yr....as usual it was an interestin part....i dnt hv words to describe ur ff.....its more rockin each day...love u kririka 4 bein such a gr8 writer....its fabulous yr...hats off 2 u!!!!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: diya(swtgrl)

yaar,main tumhare is fanfic pe poori tarah se fidaaa ho chuki hu .........!
wat a fantabulous writer u r???
i just luv d scenes btwn aryan n deepika........!
wowieeeeeeee........!
another one is gonna cum next....
wating 4 dat..........!

Hai Diya.... Thanks.... Hmm.... Well yes... Ab se aise thode thode meethe meethe scenes aayenge unke beech.... Bahut ho gaya rona dhona naa😛

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Posted: 17 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: rockswizard

hey wat a ff! u should receive som best writr award ya smthn! ur tooo good..............do continue will wait for nxt part!

Hai Shruti... Thanks a lot for commenting.... And I really lucky to have such good commenters here.....😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: cuteboomer9

aryan ko jagaane ka deeps ka tareeka too gud tha yr....as usual it was an interestin part....i dnt hv words to describe ur ff.....its more rockin each day...love u kririka 4 bein such a gr8 writer....its fabulous yr...hats off 2 u!!!!!!!

Thank you Bhoomi... I don't think its worth so much a big appreciation... But yes I like you guys reading the FF.... Thanks a lot😛

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Yaar tum log itne comments de rahe... I am flabbergasted.... Thanks..... 😳

Lekin pata hai mujhe nahi pata ki main apne FF ko kab khatam karne waali hoon... Itneeeeeeeeeeeeee dinon se likh rahi hoon..... Aur ab to there is more to goooooooo............. I hope readers don't get bored with it 😕
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Seeing Aryan awake Dipika said softly "Aryan" and went up to him….

Dipika: (Looking down at him) Good Morning! 😛

Aryan: (Smiling up) Good Morning! 😊

Dipika: Kaise ho? ❓

Aryan: (Nodding slowly) Fresh… Fit and fine!

Dipika smiled on hearing him use the phrase she had used the previous day when she saw him… Aryan made an effort to sit up but he was finding it difficult, because he had to put great efforts on his limbs…. Since they had not been working for two months…. Also his hand was still having the drips injection….. Seeing him struggle Dipika asked…..

Dipika: Aryan kya kar rahe ho? ❓

Aryan: Nothing…. Trying to sit up…. Its so frustrating lying down after waking up….

Dipika: Acchha theek hai…. Wait I'll help….

Dipika slowly raised Aryan's head…. And propped the pillow straight against the bed's head…. Then she helped him sit straight and lean against the pillow while Aryan held the drips hand in the other hand….

Dipika was still having her hand behind Aryan's head when the room door opened again and Lovely ji entered…. Seeing them like that she blushed and said sheepishly…. 😃

Lovely: Sorry hai ji….

Dipika was helping Aryan so hadn't noticed Lovely coming in…. Hearing the voice she and Aryan saw her…. Dipika released her hand and said….. 😳

Dipika: Are Lovely ji…. Kuch nahi hai… Aayiye naa andar…. Kya baat hai?

Lovely came into the room and rounded to the other side of Aryan's bed and said….

Lovely: Vo ji kuch nahi….. Aryan ka saline bottle injection nikaalna bhool gayi… Ab ye zaroori nahi hai naa….. Good Morning Aryan! Bahut acchhe lag rahe ho.... 😛

Saying this she rested her tray on the bedside…. Aryan replied smiling…. 😊

Aryan: Good morning Sister! Thank you....

Slowly she removed the injection from the backside of Aryan's wrist…. Aryan winced a little…. It didn't pain much… Just because he was weak he felt it…. But Dipika winced inwards seeing it…. She felt the pain…. She chided herself for been silly… Lovely cleaned the injected place place with cotton and solution; she placed the cotton and plastered it….

Lovely: (Wrapping the saline tube around the pouch) Ji ab main chalti hoon… Day nurse aa gayi…. Vo baad me aake inki BP check karegi aur injection degi…. Lekin haan aath baje se pehle breakfast aur medicines le lijiyega…. Warna Doctor rounds pe aayenge to gussa karenge….

Dipika nodded as Lovely left…. When Dipika turned back to Aryan she saw him pulling back his cover….. Stunned she asked…. 😲

Dipika: Aryan ab kya hai? Tum ek jagah chup chaap nahi baith sakte kya? 😡

Aryan looked at her weirdly…. What yaar? He felt awkward and embarrassed….. How could he tell her that he wanted to visit the rest room…. Can't she understand? He looked at her like she was a weirdo and said slowly…. 😕

Aryan: Dipika…. Mujhe rest room use karna hai….

Dipika closed her eyes and bit her lips… Of course…. She hit her head virtually and smiling sheepishly said….

Dipika: Vo… Um…. Haan... Sorry! 😔

She moved and Aryan slowly rested his feet on the floor..... He got up putting his full weight on the feet, but stumbled and was about to fall down when Dipika caught him around his shoulder and Aryan caught her arm for support…. Instead of straightening they got lost in each other eyes for few seconds…… Their eyes spoke those sentiments which they never which they were still not sure of…… 😍 Immediately realizing their state Dipika composed herself and Aryan straightened….. Embarrassed Dipika and Aryan looked elsewhere except at each other…..

Dipika: (Slowly) Dheere… 😳

Aryan's legs felt like jelly to him… It wobbled for sometime…. He shook his legs and waggled his fingers to get the circulation proper back…. He took tentative steps… After a while the blood circulation returned to normal….. 😛 Still for support he had to hold on to Dipika's hands till the bathroom…. 😳

Dipika left him at a distance to the bathroom and Aryan holding on to the wall for support went in…. Dipika came back to the couch and starting laying out Aryan's breakfast…. She unwrapped the bread, placing it on a plate and took another flask which had milk in it… She had just put the plate down when the room door opened again…. 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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This time it was Neha and Boxer… Looking up at them she smiled and wished them….

Dipika: Good Morning!

Neha and Boxer first looked at the bed and with excited expressions came up to the couch…..

Neha: (Happily) Good Morning! Aryan uth gaya? 😛

Dipika: Haan… Bathroom me hai… Neha maine jo kaha vo sab laa di?

Neha nodded and indicated the small bag in her hand…..

Neha: Isme sab hai….. Boxer aaj subah hi Aryan ke ghar jaake uske liye ek hafte ka dresses aur uske toileries sab laaya…. Soap, paste aur brush naya khareeda… Uske regular use do maheene se pade the uske ghar me…. Not hygienic…. Uske brand ke hi hain… Boxer ne uske ghar me notice kiya….

Dipika: Theek hai… Aryan will need the brush and paste….

Neha nodded… She opened the bag… Took out Aryan's brush, paste and a towel… She handed them to a pen smoking Boxer…. Neha sat next to Dipika….

Dipika: Neha coffee? ❓

Neha: (Nodding) Thanks….

Boxer went to the door and tapping on it said….

Boxer: (Grinning he said 😃 ) Good Morning boss…

Dipika got up and went to the sink and washed the cup…

From inside the bathroom an excited voice called out….

Aryan: Are Boxer….. Kab aaya? 😛

Boxer: (Wide eyed) Lo… Poochne ka jagah nahi mila kya Aryan? 😆 Pehle darvaaza khol aur ye le….

Coming back she poured a cup for Neha….. Hearing this even Dipika and Neha grinned looking at each other….. Everything seemed to be returning back to normal in the team..... 👍🏼

Aryan: Kya hai Boxer? Ek minute aaya….

After a while the door opened and Aryan stood at the entrance…..

Aryan: (Smiling) Kaise ho? ❓

Boxer: Ye mujhe poochna hai… 😉 Waise ye lo….

Boxer extending the towel, paste and brush…. Seeing it Aryan stood surprised…. 😲 He looked at Boxer, Neha and Dipika once…… Only after entering the bathroom he wondered as to what to do for his toiletries…. 🤔 He didn't feel like asking for it…. But here everything was arranged for him…. He smiled at Boxer… 😊 Mumbling a thanks he took the items and disappeared again into the bathroom….

Boxer came back to the couch and sat down….

Dipika offered him also coffee…. Usually she brought cups and coffees for everyone… Because she knew that every morning she, Neha, Ajay and Boxer visited Aryan…. Their first work in these two months… To see him and then only step in Special Squad…. ⭐️

Dipika poured another cup of coffee and gave it to Boxer, who accepted it gratefully…. 😛

They all relaxed back waiting for Aryan…….. 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: maha_prakrti

Yaar tum log itne comments de rahe... I am flabbergasted.... Thanks..... 😳

Lekin pata hai mujhe nahi pata ki main apne FF ko kab khatam karne waali hoon... Itneeeeeeeeeeeeee dinon se likh rahi hoon..... Aur ab to there is more to goooooooo............. I hope readers don't get bored with it 😕

krithika we love the SS FF that why we read the FF.

it makes us happy to read , we will never get bored from this form.

hope in the future you do not say anything like this again. krithika we love this form very much and we will be happy that you keep writing this form very long time.

this is a request from me krithika.

pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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Posted: 17 years ago
#69
it was funny and great krithika.

i donot have words to say, it was great i can not say anything.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Sam.... Thanks a lot.... And sorry will not tell anything like that before... Thousands of sit ups 😳

Thanks for the encouragement too, will definitely continue writing long....

Liked the part.... I am taking this part slowly so that we get more time with Aryan.... Later the story will definitely move faster 😃

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