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JAYASHREE

@jayvenk

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Posted: 9 years ago

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For the king it was the law of the land.

For the lover it was the wife he betrayed,

For the brother the kings order he obeyed,

For the son it was the mother he betrayed.

By everyone

She felt betrayed,

Her eyes dry they stayed.

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Sitey

@ramaasita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#2

Beautiful! Totally captures the situation! 👏

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Srutha

@SriMaatangi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#3

This is perfect Jaya 👏👏

As always, the few lines you write explains a whole deal to your readers 😳

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LakshMe

@Milaksh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#4

Originally posted by: jayvenk
For the king it was the law of the land.
For the lover it was the wife he betrayed,
For the brother the kings order he obeyed,
For the son it was the mother he betrayed.
By everyone
She felt betrayed,
Her eyes dry they stayed.

Every word of it was thoroughly enjoyed,

Outstanding was the meaning it conveyed,

In the ear, its verses replayed,

It was none other than your poem betrayed!

😃 😃 😃 😃

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vipraja26

@vipraja26

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Posted: 9 years ago

#5

Perfect Jaya !

Love your lines that brings out the points short and straight into one's heart !

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xLavenderx

@xLavenderx

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Posted: 9 years ago

#6

U ryt so beautifully jaya...and each and every word u wrote is very true dear

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JAYASHREE

@jayvenk

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Posted: 9 years ago

#7

Thank you for the appreciation.

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