Prompt And You Shall Receive: Lakshmila Drabbles Part 8 on Pg 33 *New* - Page 2

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Sruthi

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Riya_16
Do tell me the positive and negative points in my writing...they will only help me to grow as a writer. Constructive criticism is always welcome😊

A special shout out to both Sru and Paro for suggesting this prompt🥳

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Awww...I am very glad that it is our request you started it with !😳

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GrilledCheese

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Posted: 9 years ago

wonderful update! waiting for more!

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Darkchocolates

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hey Riya🤗

WOW!!!!

What a beautiful piece of writing...loved it.

You are a fab writer.

Please do continue this.

Eagerly waiting for the next part.

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chandanagimsy

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Posted: 9 years ago

amazing...the way you potrayed lakshman devotion towards ram and urmila hearing...omg continue soon...cant wait for next part

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Adora Thangjam

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Posted: 9 years ago

👏 It's so AMAZING!!!!!!! Please update and do more!

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emina

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Posted: 9 years ago

Just 1 word 'Brilliant'👏

Nothing more to say for this wonderful piece of work. waiting for your update😊

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vaidehikeram

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Posted: 9 years ago

Great job👏 eagerly waiting for d next part

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mandy001

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hey riya. Its amazing yr. I could feel laksh's pain. U are amazing in expressing their feelings. All things were going vry smoothly.

I want next part soon. Nd u promised to give if tonight. Please tell me are u updating it today???

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Frosty_Moon

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hey riya..
It's awesome yr..
Lakshman turmoil..urmilla's pain..
Each and every part is beautifully written..
Love it..
Continue soon..

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Sanavi

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Posted: 9 years ago

Amazing.
Being a LakshMila fan, wld love to read the whole series.
Plz continue soon

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