Prompt And You Shall Receive: Lakshmila Drabbles Part 8 on Pg 33 *New*

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: aayu_26
Oh my God this was brilliant! And please post long updates only not short ones they are not that desired tbh😛 I loved the emotiona expressed. Eagerly waiting for the second part. One prompt from my side, please write something steamy and passionate between them. Maybe as an extension of this story only. I hope I dont offend you by this prompt but it will be fun to read something that is fierce and passionate😊

Thank You so much aayu...for your kind words...You think I am brilliant!!!😃. You are being too nice yaar...but thank you nevertheless😳. Don't worry you didn't.😳 Afterall it's a love story there's bound to be some passion in it. I just hope not to get banned from IF😆Keep reading

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#22

Originally posted by: Annei123
Amazing update... Beautifully written!!!!
Plzzz update next part asap 😃

Thank you so much...keep reading and commenting...they mean the world to me..😃

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#23

Originally posted by: Divi.C
Superb .will wait for 2nd part..

Thank you dear...keep reading

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: LakshMila
No please do long ones!you have a beautiful flow in your writings.Will look forward to the second one!muahh

Hi!! i love your username BTW and also your drabbles...do update soon and Iwill get down to commenting on them as soon as I can. Thanks for appreciating...

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: sugunmanas
hey Riya
thank you so much for this😃
nicely penned down😳
by the way this is manas😃
continue soon

hi! Manas!

Thank you so much for liking the update. Keep reading😃

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#26

Originally posted by: asmitag
Fab continue soon👍🏼

Thank You ashmita...yes updating now...keep reading and commenting😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: DilMereSuntaNhi
Wowww ! I am Amazed . Beautiful it is .
I could feel his inner turmoil .Such a fab writer you are 👏
You chose a perfect situation , Mila comes to inform about Mandvi's assent and gets to know about Lakshman's rejection . ❤️ Above that her sarcasm , Being Vidhikari of 3 marriages . I am damn sure they have made their way straight into his heart and caused a major damage.
You nailed it Riya ...I could actually feel it .Those hidden tears You mentioned through your words
Would love to read more . No , Pls write lengthy ones, You hav got magic !

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Sruthi

Thank You Sru...i am glad that you liked it after all this prompt was yours and Paro's brain child.

Yes...i had to give away Shrutakirti role to Urmi...as I couldn't think of a better way...

Thank you so much for finding time to read this even with your exams going on...

You really think that I have magic...????😃. Awww thank you so much . keep reading I hope to entertain you guys in future too.😊

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#28

Originally posted by: -GrilledCheese-
wonderful update! waiting for more!

Updating...thanks for reading😊

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#29

Originally posted by: NEIRAlover
Hey Riya🤗
WOW!!!!

What a beautiful piece of writing...loved it.
You are a fab writer.

Please do continue this.

Eagerly waiting for the next part.

Thank you for liking the update...what do I call you...

You think I am good writer..awww thank you so much I hope to improve with every update.

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