TS THE FOUR PART 6A : BEHIND ENEMY LINES BEGINNING PG 35 22/05 - Page 13

Sorry for late reply and as always Aweosme Update.
Loved it.
Thanks for the pm.

Plz write more on Lakshmila

Originally posted by: VYGA89

Sorry for late reply and as always Aweosme Update.
Loved it.
Thanks for the pm.

Originally posted by: vrinda65

Plz write more on Lakshmila

Originally posted by: Shivam...

Will be posting next part soon

plzzz write OS on my point alsooo. It will be great to read. Bcoz your all OS r very good and enjoyable to read. Plzzz do reply. 😊

Originally posted by: Sumi-19

plzzz write OS on my point alsooo. It will be great to read. Bcoz your all OS r very good and enjoyable to read. Plzzz do reply. 😊

Bharat : Nahi Manadavi , ab pitashree Lanka thoda naa jaenge.
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Shatrughan : Bhabhi , Karya bahut kathin hai , aisi paristithi mein humein kisi aise vyakti ki aavshyakta hai jiske dimaag mein bahut hi bhayankar yuktian aati hain . All of them at once looked at each other's faces , getting the answer , and said in chorus " Lakshman Bhayia "
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Urmila ( Excited , Patting Lakshman's Shoulders ) : Shaabash mere shoorveer patidev , yeh hui naa baat , kitna aanand aata hoga naa aise bhaag kar vivaah karne mein , kaash hamara vivaah bhi aise hua hota to...
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Shatrughan ( speaking very softly near lakshman's ears ) : Bhayia , mujhe gyaat hua hai ki ham Charon bhayion ke vivaah ki baat chal rahi hai inn charo se , Ram Bhayia aur maithili , Bharat bhyia aur Mansi , main aur kirti avem aap aur ... samjh hi gaye honge aap. Isliye veh sab baat karne gaye hain guruji ke ashram , tab tak yeh sab yahin rahenge , ayodhya ke mehel mein.
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Bharat : You are right bhayia , this lakshman and shatrughan have a tendency to sneak out in the night towards the kitchen to grab the sweet puddings.

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Shatrughan ( speaking teasingly , looking at urmila ) : Haan Haan , theekha bhojan aur teekhe log bhi.

Urmila started blushing .

Lakshman : Yeh kya badbada rahe ho chote , aur iss bhojan ko le jaao meri nazron se door.

Urmila ( convincing him ) : Sumitra nandan , dekhiye , itne prem se banaya gaya hai bhojan , aur anna ka apmaan nahi karte.

Lakshman ( mocks urmila ) : Par devi , vahi to main keh raha rahun , isme anna hai hi kahan jiska main apmaan karoon.

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Shatrughan ( teasing ) : yeh bachon ki baat nahi hai

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Ram : Lakshman ki to yadhasht gayi hai Sitae , par yeh shatrughan toh baawla ho gaya hai . Chot lakshman ko aayi hai aur asar ispe zyada hua hai .

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Okay I guess I quoted to many ! But I wanna quote many others 😆

I was literally rolling on the floor . 🤣

This is sooo soo Fantastic ! Spellbound completely .

I ENjoyed reading all the hilarious part . Then u make it emotional as well . However U make it appear hilarious and Off-track , I can still connect to it very well . #GreatJob👏

Had a good time laughing 😆 I made it so long to read , Sry for that !

Shivam U Rock it Man 😎

Wow!!!! We really have some amazing writers in this forum. Read all four parts in one go and simply CAN'T WAIT for the next update. You are a very creative and talented writer 👏. Thoroughly enjoyed it. Keep it up!!!

Shivam bhaiya when u r updating your OS . Waiting terribly for your OS , u have said that u will post it today, plzzz post it fast. Ab aur intezaar nahi ho raha hai . And please check my second part of my SS and do reply. Post your OS fast plzzz 🤪 😊

Originally posted by: Sumi-19

Shivam bhaiya when u r updating your OS . Waiting terribly for your OS , u have said that u will post it today, plzzz post it fast. Ab aur intezaar nahi ho raha hai . And please check my second part of my SS and do reply. Post your OS fast plzzz 🤪 😊