TS THE FOUR PART 6A : BEHIND ENEMY LINES BEGINNING PG 35 22/05 - Page 12

Originally posted by: sumana.shesha

Oh My !!!!

This is seriously not an OS :) :) :)

Poora aadha ghanta laga ise padne mein :) :) :)

Beautifully written :)

Main toh has haske pagal ho gayi hoon :) :) :)

Superb :)

Thanks for the PM :)

Wow superb story👏

Such a long update.
Khatam hi nahi ho raha tha.
But lovely one.
The bonds are tightening nd are so strong.
Continue soon

Originally posted by: AMAYASTARSS

OH MY GOD, kitna bada thaa😆

par masst thha ekdum😃

mujhe toh laga ki memory loss ke time phirse shaadhi hogi unki coz mila ko bhaagke karni thi na shaadhi🤣

But I enjoyed reading it, please write more :)

thankls for the pm :)

love kriti😛

Originally posted by: shetel13

It was awesome...I laughed soo much while reading...u r amazing writer. ...please update more...

Originally posted by: Sanavi

Such a long update.
Khatam hi nahi ho raha tha.
But lovely one.
The bonds are tightening nd are so strong.
Continue soon

Hey shivam..
Amazing yr..Superb job...
So enjoying..
All.teasing and having fun..
Lakshman.lost his memory and then shatrugun and all his plans..damn hilarious...
I was scared looking at its.length. Waise it took 40 minutes to read entire update but I enjoy and laugh..
Waiting for more shots...
Thanks for pm dear...

Originally posted by: DilMereSuntaNhi

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Baapre Baap ! This looks like a Mini Novel 😆
And Valimiki Role , You fit in to it vry much 😆😉</font>

Valmiki bane hai toh kam bhi waise hi karegein... 😆
Mini novel was awesome... 👏 ⭐️

Originally posted by: _Eternity_

Hey shivam..
Amazing yr..Superb job...
So enjoying..
All.teasing and having fun..
Lakshman.lost his memory and then shatrugun and all his plans..damn hilarious...
I was scared looking at its.length. Waise it took 40 minutes to read entire update but I enjoy and laugh..
Waiting for more shots...
Thanks for pm dear...

Thanks shivam for reply!!!
your OS is very good 👏. Specially the mandavi nose part it was so funny
[ LOL]
I also want that you write an OS on emotional bonding of ram and lakshman as sayee has said to u. Plzzz write OS on this point . It will be great and enjoyable to read it . I will be thankful to u if u do this. 😃