TS THE FOUR PART 6A : BEHIND ENEMY LINES BEGINNING PG 35 22/05 - Page 11

Originally posted by: shivam030291

Thanks Sayee

I will give it a try for purely ram-lakshman

can you please elaborate exactly what type of scene u want ?

I just love the bond between the two. Could it be like Ram finds out about the utter devotion of Lakshman towards him but just before he could react to it they are attacked & Lakshman is wounded & Ram nurses him back. Before marriage.

Wow, such a lovely narration. Thanks fro the lovely & long update. And pardon me for not reading it immediately on posting.

Very beautiful write up. Just finished reading.👏 Waiting for the next update. n thanks for the PM.😃

it was superb,amazing,wonderful,fantastic,
fantabulous,stupendous n what not.
really i hv lost words for praising u..
u r really an awesome writer..
keep writing..
n thanks for d pm

Originally posted by: shivam030291

Hi Ankita , Thanks a lot for liking the Post.

I had some scenes in mind , just needed to combine them in a meaningful plot .

Took me about 5 days to do writing and editing . Ya it was very long , 11000 words approx.

My Lakshmila group memebers were after my life for the post to be posted yesterday only , so I had to miss a couple of scenes in this story😆

Originally posted by: TwinMadness

Valmikiji :/

What are you writing new? :/

Originally posted by: deejagi

Wow, such a lovely narration. Thanks fro the lovely & long update. And pardon me for not reading it immediately on posting.

Eagerly waiting fro the next part.

It was awesome...I laughed soo much while reading...u r amazing writer. ...please update more...

OH MY GOD, kitna bada thaa😆