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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

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Posted: 15 years ago

#621

Originally posted by: urooj92
Very beautiful Bhoomi :)
loved it

x x

Glad that u liked it.. thanks for ur reply..tc

Bhoomi

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#622

Originally posted by: Alone_Prince

Awsome Poems Bhoomi 👏👏

I Want To Dedicate A Ghazal To All Mothers In This World

Maut Ki Agosh Main Jab Thak ke So Jati Hai Maa
Tab Kaheen Jakar Raza Thoda Sukoon Paati hai Maa

Fikar Mai Bachoon Ki Kuch Is Tarha Ghul Jati hai Maa
Naujawan Hotey Hue Budhi Nazar Ati Hai Maa

Ghar Se Jab Pardes Jata Hai Koi Noor E Nazar
Hath Mai Quraan Lekar Dar Pe Ajati Hai Maa

Chahe Khushiyoon Mai Hum Maa Ko Bhool Jayen Dostoon
Jab Musibat Sar Par Padti Hai To Yaad Atiu Hai ma

Shadiyaan Kar Kar ke Bacchey Ja Basay Pardes Mai
Dil Khatoo Se Aur Tasveeroo Se Behlati Hai Maa

Gar Jawan Beti Ho Ghar Mai Aur KOi Rishta Na Ho
Ek Naye Ehsaas Ki Sooli Par Char Jati Hai Maa

Pyaar Kehtey Hain Jise Aur maamta Kya Cheez Hai
Koi Un Bacchoon Se Poochey Jinki Mar Jaati Hai Maa

Shukriya Ho Hi Nahi Sakta Kabhi Maa Ka Ada
Martey Martey Bhi Dua Jeeney Ki De Jati Hai Maa

LOve U Mom

And Happy Mothers Day To All Of U 😊

Hi,

Glad that u liked the poem here which i wrote.. :)..

thanks for sharing this poem with us.. u know its so beautifully written mentioned and those lovely meotions it carried.. for me the perspective of the poet is soo wonderfullly touched in thoise words.. kitna bhi kahun shayad kam hai..lekin ek ek lavz sach hai sahi hai.. aakhri dam tak she keeps workgin doign for children not lettin them suffer but getting tensed how they will be.. i was so touched.. it was soo beautiful.. it inspired me to write more..and this poem made me know how beautifully emotns can be expressed..the Urdu words here were merging beautifully adn i liked reading it.. My love for my mother grew more and felt emotional as the read the last lines.. its true every line is true.. very well written .. i enjoyed reading.thanks for sharing..

A Happy Mothers day.. a Salute to all the MOms..

Bhoomi

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#623

Originally posted by: ssh57

I don't think Maut ke baad bhi maa sukoon paati hogi. Then also she'll be worrrying about her child's future. Tc ssh57

Shardha, u think even after death she will be worryign abotut her children.. ohhh... i remember reading a story and there mom says to her chldren she is too tired and all her duties are over let her sleep quitely without worrying for the next morning duties... and she never sees the next morning.. i remembered that story after reading this poem ..

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Divya

@MyInspirationz

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Posted: 15 years ago

#624

Hey Bhoomi... Pyaar was just beautiful... you have written it so beautifully... Yaar.. mein kya karoon tera???? 🤗

Pyaar se pyaar kar baithi hoon

yeh bhi naa pata chal kab,

Pyaar mein jeene ki chah hain

pyaar meib doob kar

pyaar mein rehne ki chaah hain

koi bataye mujhe pyaar itni

pyaari si bhavana kyun hain

pyaar mein rehkar bhi mein

pyaar se pyaar kar baithi hoon..

The poems on Mother and Maa.. mein kya boloon bhoomi.. my eyes were literally filled up with tears... The only and pure form of GOD.. Mother..

Theres a beautiful song in Tamal from the film "Mannan".. I will translate it : There no creatures which does not utter the word "Amma".. There is no relation that does not go beyond Mother.. The God comes and speaks to us directly.. which else form could he come but for Mother....

Both the poems are beautiful..

Edited by Divya_kaldivya - 15 years ago

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#625

Originally posted by: Divya_kaldivya
Hey Bhoomi... Pyaar was just beautiful... you have written it so beautifully... Yaar.. mein kya karoon tera???? 🤗

Pyaar se pyaar kar baithi hoon
yeh bhi naa pata chal kab,

Pyaar mein jeene ki chah hain

pyaar meib doob kar

pyaar mein rehne ki chaah hain

koi bataye mujhe pyaar itni

pyaari si bhavana kyun hain

pyaar mein rehkar bhi mein

pyaar se pyaar kar baithi hoon..

The poems on Mother and Maa.. mein kya boloon bhoomi.. my eyes were literally filled up with tears... The only and pure form of GOD.. Mother..

Theres a beautiful song in Tamal from the film "Mannan".. I will translate it : There no creatures which does not utter the word "Amma".. There is no relation that does not go beyond Mother.. The God comes and speaks to us directly.. which else form could he come but for Mother....

Both the poems are beautiful..

Hi Divya,

Glad dear that u liked Pyaar.. and the way u have written those lines and poem..u know i could feel the Pyaar u r brigning across... it was so magical.. very few words but straight to the heart from teh heart..and especially the first and last lines are soo beautiful somehow they capture emotion of Love in a very sweet way..

Oh wow! there is such a tamil song... aww the translation is so nice, i am sure the song must be very touchign and really good.. i will hear it for sure than.. U enjoyed and liked the poems i wrote..i am so glad dear.. tried my bit, but everytime i feel tis not all what iu can say or feel there is so much more to say and write.. its like never ending love she gives na and to expres it whole is such not simple.. its one word Ma amma but its the world for us children..

it was so nice to see ur comment dear and thanks for appreciating me so much..

tc luv u

Bhoomi

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Sri

@RadiantTreasure

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#626

Hey bhoomi,,
i know a very very very longgggggggg time...
3 months..or more..voo..
just wanna say i wil be back soon to reply on your wonderful poems and stories that i missed,,
just that i need time..
my inbox is filled with nearly 400 messages from last time i saw it was 200..and i haven't even opened one to check...so please bear with me and i will surely comment soon..(possibly very soon..lol..)
Just wanna thanks for sending me PM's and still remembering me..means a lot..
Thanks again..
Good wishes..
Sri:-)

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#627

Originally posted by: sri_4
Hey bhoomi,,
i know a very very very longgggggggg time...
3 months..or more..voo..
just wanna say i wil be back soon to reply on your wonderful poems and stories that i missed,,
just that i need time..
my inbox is filled with nearly 400 messages from last time i saw it was 200..and i haven't even opened one to check...so please bear with me and i will surely comment soon..(possibly very soon..lol..)
Just wanna thanks for sending me PM's and still remembering me..means a lot..
Thanks again..
Good wishes..
Sri:-)

Hi Sri,

U r back and its such a good news for us... not just to get to ur comments but also to see u around on IF.. its a great feelings to be in touch whether here or anywhere around havign a look that u r online..

yup many things posted april may my vacation time so was writing in poems and short stoires one shot... waise u r on time.. am writign a non serial based after a long time and will post it after few days.. so till then u will be up to readign from the beginnnign that one for sure.. LIVE match ki tarah ..heheh.

hey u dont have to thank for Pm.. i am glad that u replied here and remembered me.. feels so good to be in touch with some amazing talented readers..we lkearn as well a lot from readers like u.. and take pride to have u read our work..

dear take ur time and whenever u feel like write in. thsi one reply itself did a lot for me.. keep smiling..tc luvu .. 😃 hugs ur way..

Bhoomi

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#628

Kaisi Ye Dastaan:

Okay....I knw am super duper late....but I also knw u dont mind....u r too sweet to do that Bhoomi....so I'll just leave the comment hehe. I must say....u did a gr8 job in portraying the little boy's feelings....as he grew up and began to understand....he grew adherent to his father....and am glad he took notice to his mom and not his father. Again....his dilemma was beautifullt described by you....and as always u r awesum wid wat u do!!

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#629

Haal Bura Hai:

Ohh....so wonderfully u depict everything Bhoomi. The way u wrote it down....it just feels so correct. Jab bhi padhti hu....tab aisa nahi lagta ki am disturbed or sumthing like that....bas lagta hai....its opening my eyes....and thats wat it actually does.....and again u choose such beautiful concepts....write wid such simplicity....that it becums easy to read and grasp the idea of the whole topic. Lovely work once again Bhoomi....

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#630

Pyar:

As I started reading this poem.....I knew u r gonna describe in a beautiful way abt 'love',,,,and I was prepared to knw another aspect of this ever known term "LOVE"....I was ready for the beauty u r gonna cum up wid....still as I read these lines:

Pyaar dil,dhadkan aur jeevan se jhudta hai,
Pyaar annt nahi anant mey safar karta hai.

I gasped sooo hard.....I was amazed and amused....u r awesum in depicting things....slightest things u write seem like wonders....thank you for this poem...and yeah dont think I'm over-praising u.....u deserve every bit of it...

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