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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

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Posted: 15 years ago

#581

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur

di i would be waiting for that day!

do write more.......cause i really love them!

haan di...........sachi mein......ham likh toh dete hain........par man hi man darte hain ki kahin agar aisa hamare saath hua toh ham kya karenge?

that's why it is said......its eassy to write and say than to do.......

Love u di............do share more......

i too wrote a poem on a social topic.........but i am a bit nervous to share it!

Hi Mahak,

share ur work.. no problem..i guess many of my work i attempted after such responses..or else i wudl have stopped writing poems looooooooooooong back.. Wiritn poems is somethign i did from childhood but never felt it was nice doign it.. it has its power girl.. write and when u share u feel more ocnfident to attmept even better ones whcihu never felt u could.. love u tc.

Bhoomi

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#582

Originally posted by: Revolutionbreez
awesomeeeeeeeeeeee !!!

glad to know u liked it:)

Bhoomi

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Divya

@MyInspirationz

Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#583

Hey Bhoomi... beautifully written.. and this is such a sensitive topic.. my heart goes for every women who are affected by this and every man who encourages or indulges in this habit.. i dunno why they do such acts? Aren't they satisfied at home that they need to appease their hunger outside.. doing such acts for money or any other reason is really cheap, low and disugusting..

Nicely written and sorry for not commenting on the previous two poems... but they were really nice.. i loved umeed more than Prabhat...😊😊😊

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#584

Originally posted by: Divya_kaldivya
Hey Bhoomi... beautifully written.. and this is such a sensitive topic.. my heart goes for every women who are affected by this and every man who encourages or indulges in this habit.. i dunno why they do such acts? Aren't they satisfied at home that they need to appease their hunger outside.. doing such acts for money or any other reason is really cheap, low and disugusting..

Nicely written and sorry for not commenting on the previous two poems... but they were really nice.. i loved umeed more than Prabhat...😊😊😊

Hi Divya,

Good to get ur comment dear. Yup in my poems i find it easy to eal with sensitve topics..or may be some part in me encoruages me to write it down and ease my inner feelings when i read or hear soemthign or go throguh .. it feels muchbetter when i can share this work andknow all ur views.. good to know u feel the emotions the same way and wonder how such eople go thorguh such lengths and how family may be affected..

no problem if u havnt commented for previous ones..u read au enjoyed thats more than enoguh and if u comment its like soney pe suhaga.. luv u tc

Bhoomi

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Bun Maska

@bunmaska

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#585

👏ur so so talented Bhoomi......keep a copyright of all the collections and publish it sometime...am sure u will rock girl...God bless u...

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Bun Maska

@bunmaska

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Posted: 15 years ago

#586

👏kaay liheles ga pori.....mann bharoon aala....khoopach chaan.......too toot good..no words to describe how talented u r...

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#587

Originally posted by: Lata
👏ur so so talented Bhoomi......keep a copyright of all the collections and publish it sometime...am sure u will rock girl...God bless u...

Hi Lata,

Happy birthday dear....👏👏👏 A five star chocolate for u ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️..

thanks dear for reading the poem on my request and so nice to know that u liked it .. u think my work can be copied by others..awww I enjoy pouring my thoguhts in poem form dont even know if they can be called poetry.. just verses... Publishign it..hmm lets see whats turns on... thanks dear for ur lovely words of encouragement.. its surely boosts my spirit for sure..comign from u is sweet , so close ot my heart.. luv u dear.. once again..happy birthday..thanks... enjoy the day..

Bhoomi

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#588

Originally posted by: Lata
👏kaay liheles ga pori.....mann bharoon aala....khoopach chaan.......too toot good..no words to describe how talented u r...

awww u could understnad my marathi that itslef is a compliment to me..i was wondering shayad marathi hai yehi samjhna maybe hard..😉.. I know i have to improve but i wanted to share my thoughts on these rituals and write this.. soo sweet..Tula avadlaa tu samjhu shakli.. ahhh Ataa mala confidence yet ahey.. thank u.. ani Vaaddivaschi shubheksha ga pori.. 😃 ..and me talented..agaa friends tujhya sarkhe ahe magg thodi faar talent majhyat suddha adhun madhun yet astey..:))😛

luv u

Bhoomi

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seema mittal

@seemamittal

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#589

Heyyy bhoomi
That was so touchy
Feeling sad abt that guy n his mother
Really amazing poem

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#590

Originally posted by: seema.mittal2
Heyyy bhoomi
That was so touchy
Feeling sad abt that guy n his mother
Really amazing poem

Hi Seema,

glad dear u liked this poem. yup its a bit sad and shows their depressed self's... U felt for them makes me to knwo u could feel the emotions they went through esepcially the boy. thanks dear for ur encoruagment.. means a lot to me.. tc

luv u

Bhoomi

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