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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

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Posted: 15 years ago

#281

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid
Thats a beautiful poem Bhoomi n I seriously think....I need to learn new adjectives for u...hehe. Cuming to the poem....its actually inspiring....I always try to strengthen myself like this whenever I feel sad or weak....u c...there r soooo many ppl in fact I think every1 has his own problems n he is fighting wid it everyday....so one must not feel disappointed....though aisa karna thoda mushkil hai....hehe.....but I always try my best.....and I'm glad tumne ye khubsurat poem likha.....along wid this wonderful inspiration. Love you for this!!

Hi Sumaiya,

heheh no need of adjective.. u know easiest way i always say is.. Say u know why i can write such poems..as i have wonderful set of friends and unka kuch to asar mujhpe hoga hi...😃 yup even i do and many time learn hard lesson from their simple gesture... ya true na... we all have problems but we need ot learn to smile and know nothign will stay stagnant.. peace of mind khona nahi chahiye which thse people possess their happiness they get in small things..they work harder than us achive little many time and slowly that too but smiel with that little.. and we need to get that inspiration of postive attidue for sure.. good to know dear u r enjoyign these chits bits.. tc

luvu

Bhoomi

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

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Posted: 15 years ago

#282

Originally posted by: golu_1677
beautiful poem bhoomi.

Hi Golu dear,

good to know u r readign and like it..

luv u

Bhoomi

Originally posted by: manatated
beautiful poem....loved it!

hi ,

aww feels so ncie to know u liked it and felt it was beautiufll.. thanks

Bhoomi

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

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Posted: 15 years ago

#283

Originally posted by: monikaseth
👏Again Awesome subject ,Well written, Mind blowing thought every day i learn some thing from your beautiful poem keep write dear .

Hi Monika dear,

awww thats really very very sweet of u to make me feel my work is that good.. U truly make me feel so special which i am not.. i gues i learn from the world aroudn and u know i learn from u as well.. the suject and all i feel anythign touches me i can only do little of writing it down..

thanks dear for encorauging me so mcuh with ur warmth and love.. i owe u a lto mroe love i know.. lu vu dear tc.

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

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Posted: 15 years ago

#284

Originally posted by: ssh57
Hi Bhoomi,
A very inspiring poem. I just wanted to share something on the same topic. Being a teacher, I have seen many differently abled children. Their parents are so patient, encouraging them for their smallest deeds and showering their love on them. I sometimes wonder whether it is the children's condition which has made them so strong or has God given them such children because he felt only they would have the patience to raise such children. Whereas the parents of normal children get frustrated if their children's performance is not upto to their expectations. I hope this will set some minds thinking.Love ssh57

Hi Sharadha,

Yup an inspirign poem listenign to this line i feel soemwhere hwatevr i wanted to brign i could..i feel great with the way u wrote the feelings. i agree to it 100% i cant tell u even i wonder abotu the paretns and many tiem ask question as u asked here.. i feel i am blessed ot have met such people witnessed such unconditional love and coruage of theses people.. we all need to learn so mcuh abt life from them na.. this is exam time and i cant tell even i get stressed with parents wantign me to beat children do antyghin but get things into their head and i really feel terribel for the kids how can thye grasp things with so much of subjects load and pressure from paretns... we realy need to learn from the parents of the disablled differently abled chidlren , the patience , the love is innocence charmign and soo soo inspiring..

thanks dear for mentionign this and made me glad to have written this piece..

luvu for ur kidns words and time in commenting.. tc

Bhoomi

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

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Posted: 15 years ago

#285

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur
di!

another poem?

i know i am not the first one to comment.....

neither can i be any time......

coz i have been loaded with studies which i hate to do..........

awesome poem!

sometimes we think that we have not got this this........not got that........

but when we see someone who hasn't got what we have, we realise its value........

di its simply mid blowing........

everybody has its own problem..........

but no one tries to find its solution.......

awesome job di!

👏

love,
Mahak

Hi Mahak,

no problem dear, even i am too busya nd u can see not regular in postign poem though ready as time at comp is less work pressure is more.. but feels awesome that u in ur busy time coming here reading and commenting.. pouring so much affection to me and ecnoraugaing me so mcuh.. yes dear u r right we crib abt th esillest thigns na sometimes fight as well with God but so mcuh god gives we tend to thank less enough for it.. people who r differently able r inspiration especailly the way their parent loeve adn look after them.. the smile of those kids are infectious and inpirational even in depressign time we can have a glimpse of them and know our problem if far too small and not cry over it.. thasnk dear for readign this and for the applause really touched. comign first is all luck

luv u

Bhoomi

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

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Posted: 15 years ago

#286

My Love!

Ur Sweet Simple Smile lits up my face,
Am in peace by just Ur gentle embrace,

Our relationship is the one I feel is true,
As We need not be fake, just be ME and U,

When U are with me everything seems so fine,
U make by ur presence my life to really shine.

Am lucky to have known U n spent years together,
For U, my happines, mydreams are only that matter,

U are honest, emotionally very strong n very caring dear,
With you I know I have arms which will absorb all my fears,

I have been selfish at times by jugding things from my point of view,
U have been such a beautiful soul,kind at heart and gentle like a dew.

My love, My life's angel, my lifes only inspiration is U,
Am truely blessed to have U, as such sweet hearts r rare n few,

I want to make U the princess of my life,
I want to pamper you like a child,

Bring the billion stars at your feet,
Make the purest angels from sky to greet,

I know My love! its a silly thought to say,
As now u belong to the heaven's gate way.

........................... Bhoomikauttam

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Sri

@RadiantTreasure

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Posted: 15 years ago

#287

hey bhoomi

great one dear n this is in english great i should say

he loved her n want to give everything to her..but he lost her..its sad...

hope he ddint judge her he didnt hurt her,,,hmm..

loved these lines

U are honest, emotionally very strong n very caring dear,
With you I know I have arms which will absorb all my fears,

I have been selfish at times by jugding things from my point of view,
U have been such a beautiful soul,kind at heart and gentle like a dew.

My love, My life's angel, my lifes only inspiration is U,
Am truely blessed to have U, as such sweet hearts r rare n few,

good wishes

sri:-)

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

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Posted: 15 years ago

#288

Hmm...so this is also not a very happy ending....but despite that it brought a smile to my face....it was SIMPLY wonderful....and I literally mean that Bhoomi....I mean....with the simplest words u hav made it soooooooooooo amazing dear!!! Feelings r soooo rightly expressed...just awesum!!! And being a poem....its all the more fascinating!!! Gr8 gr8 gr8 work yaar!!

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

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Posted: 15 years ago

#289

Originally posted by: sri_4
hey bhoomi
great one dear n this is in english great i should say

he loved her n want to give everything to her..but he lost her..its sad...

hope he ddint judge her he didnt hurt her,,,hmm..

loved these lines

U are honest, emotionally very strong n very caring dear,
With you I know I have arms which will absorb all my fears,

I have been selfish at times by jugding things from my point of view,
U have been such a beautiful soul,kind at heart and gentle like a dew.

My love, My life's angel, my lifes only inspiration is U,
Am truely blessed to have U, as such sweet hearts r rare n few,

good wishes

sri:-)

Hi Sri,

wow u made a hatrick in repling first.. feels so nice that u comment immediately after readign it..and glad u liked it.. i was just tryginto show how one loves soeoen and only when the person is goge we realise what al he/she did and how we wish we coudl give more to the person..

am glad dear that u liked it..

u liked those lines.. heheh glad dear.. its too simple in words but happy it broguh the emotion i wanted to towards u al..

luv u dear

Bhoomi

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#290

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid
Hmm...so this is also not a very happy ending....but despite that it brought a smile to my face....it was SIMPLY wonderful....and I literally mean that Bhoomi....I mean....with the simplest words u hav made it soooooooooooo amazing dear!!! Feelings r soooo rightly expressed...just awesum!!! And being a poem....its all the more fascinating!!! Gr8 gr8 gr8 work yaar!!

Hi Sumiya,

ehheheh yes this is not on a very happy endng note.. next one i hope does end on a better note.. heheh😆... but am glad and touched to know u liked it and it broguth a smile on ur face knwogin the description of love in it for him.. thanks dear for makgin me feel that this small poem touched u soemwhere and u felt i could project some ncie story throguh these few and smiple words which i felt as thoguths came throguh..

G* friends aroudn..so better work needs to be done.. tc luv u

Bhoomi

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