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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#291

di!

this was such a sweet poem!

i had tears while reading it!

such a touching ending!

awesome di!

hats off to u for ur skills!

u r amazing!

aaj hi maine mjht ka episode dekha.........usmein itna royi ki ab toh yeh poem aur bhi zyada achi lag rahi hai........

hats off to u di for writing such poems!

love,
Mahak

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manali

@Revolutionbreez

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#292

Amazing poem bhoomi !!!

A lone tear escaped my eye when i read the last part ....

It was beautifully written...

You know I never really liked poem these much....it's stories that have attracted me....but simplicity in your poems and use of light and apt words have totally changed the scenario!

Thanks for making me enjoy poems!

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Divya

@MyInspirationz

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#293

Hey Bhoomi... You asked for a jaadu ki jhappi last time, isn't it? This is a huge teddy bear jhappi for you.. and as for comments, you are well above them now... Do I need to write anything more????????

🤗

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monika

@monikaseth

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#294

U are honest, emotionally very strong n very caring dear,
With you I know I have arms which will absorb all my fears,

I have been selfish at times by jugding things from my point of view,
U have been such a beautiful soul,kind at heart and gentle like a dew.

My love, My life's angel, my lifes only inspiration is U,
Am truely blessed to have U, as such sweet hearts r rare n few,

Great sad but shows true love towards her it make me smile , he love her from his deep heart and wanna to give her all happiness but she is gone leave him alone but his love still make her alive ..👏thank you for great poem sad but i love it bec true love now days you cant find so easily .

I want to hug you swetoooo.... abhi isske sath kaam chala lo jab such mein miluge tab asli de duge ....

🤗

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#295

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur
di!

this was such a sweet poem!

i had tears while reading it!

such a touching ending!

awesome di!

hats off to u for ur skills!

u r amazing!

aaj hi maine mjht ka episode dekha.........usmein itna royi ki ab toh yeh poem aur bhi zyada achi lag rahi hai........

hats off to u di for writing such poems!

love,
Mahak

Hi MAhak,

maine bhi episode dekha.. and ya looking at their state and love to be ending and they partign ways made me feel sad as well... chalo kuch to achaa hua, we got ot chat abotu a scene of MJHT for the first time soon after its telecast lol..😆..

So dear u liked reading the poem and it made u to feel the meotions mking me feel thrlled.. sometimes i wonder what all i am trying to fell thorugh the words does the reader feel the same.. and good ot feel from ur message u did dear..

and remember rona nahi hai.. and keep smiling..true love never goes away..it alwya sstays... 😃 be in any form.. gettign to expereince treu love is hte most gifted thing at first.. luv u dear tc

Bhoomi

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#296

Originally posted by: manatated
Amazing poem bhoomi !!!

A lone tear escaped my eye when i read the last part ....

It was beautifully written...

You know I never really liked poem these much....it's stories that have attracted me....but simplicity in your poems and use of light and apt words have totally changed the scenario!

Thanks for making me enjoy poems!

Hi,

awww that line made me feel that u liked this poem . thanks for such lovely words of encoruagment.. i am trygin to get better and good ot know u all still enjoying the experience of reading my work here. Let me tell me i was also like u , i really felt poem r really boring and not easy to understnad as well.... but after my college i suddenly felt songs lyrix and those r also poetry form.. slowly grew my love to write four lines in slam books etc and soon i enjoyed writign these.. its only that u all call this poem whereas i am still not convinced they can be termed as poetry..😆.. thanks for me feel that my work is so much appreciated..

Bhoomi

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#297

Originally posted by: Divya_kaldivya
Hey Bhoomi... You asked for a jaadu ki jhappi last time, isn't it? This is a huge teddy bear jhappi for you.. and as for comments, you are well above them now... Do I need to write anything more????????
🤗

Hi Divya,

Awwwww the Jadu ki jhappi was awesome.. especially teddy hug AHHH.. its sooo cute.. I am immensely thrilled and happy to have it for sure... And comments u have to write.. i am besides anything cant be above... and for sure i am not above anythign my work is not above the love u all are giving me here.. i am much much lesser than what u all make me feel.. anyways thankx for making me feel that specil.. aajkal ki duniya mey gettign postive vibes is also very difficult gettign such immensely postive response brigns lots of hope to me abotu my work..thanks a bunch for ur reply... dear.. tc

Bhoomi

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#298

Originally posted by: monikaseth

U are honest, emotionally very strong n very caring dear,
With you I know I have arms which will absorb all my fears,

I have been selfish at times by jugding things from my point of view,
U have been such a beautiful soul,kind at heart and gentle like a dew.

My love, My life's angel, my lifes only inspiration is U,
Am truely blessed to have U, as such sweet hearts r rare n few,

Great sad but shows true love towards her it make me smile , he love her from his deep heart and wanna to give her all happiness but she is gone leave him alone but his love still make her alive ..👏thank you for great poem sad but i love it bec true love now days you cant find so easily .

I want to hug you swetoooo.... abhi isske sath kaam chala lo jab such mein miluge tab asli de duge ....

🤗

Hi Monika dear.... I got ur HUG>>> and u know Hug feel hota hai.. uska warmth love care feel hota hai...the words, the space in words, the smile and the coma, the full stop, the tiem in which u try n reply .. evrything everything brings that smile, that feelign where ufeel it physcially no need to be there emotionally we feel the hug and the love sent across miles.. hey at ur place lots of thandii.. so much fog.. let me also give u a jaduu ki jhappi and surely i hope situation there gets a bit brighter in day time at least.. have a great day Monika.. and I am very glald that u liked my poem and enjoyed really it...yes so true.. we cant get to see true love and real in nature.. and the way to expres ur love has become dirty and crazy.. those beauty in love is gettign lost.. hope u enjoy the remiang poems i post dear.. tc

Bhoomi

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#299

Bikhari Meri Duniya

Shaadi ke Bandhan mey yun Jam

gaya,
Damaad nahi Unka Beta bann gaya,
Saali Ko log kehtey aadhi gharwali,
Mere liye wah Meri Behan laadali.
Maa-Baba, Chotu ke liye mujhse badkar naa koi,
Bahu ki baat ayi to Vakalat uski karta har koi,
Meri Ardhangini Kahti mujhey,Suniye Ji,
Main Kahta aap to Sirf hukum kariye Ji.
Muskurati, sharmati woh Hasti,
Apni Hayya se Ghayal karti,
Yeh Saare karte mere liye har ek mannat,
Yeh choti si duniya Hi hai meri jannat.

Main Raste pe Subha chala ja raha tha,
Aisa Laga Ek shann Ek oor gir raha tha,
Dekha to Dharti Apna Dheeraj Kho chuki thi,
Apna Ugra roop Dhaaran kar chuki thi.
Jab dharti cheer gayi to Gharonde tuut gaye,
Apne Ashiyane ki sarr-jameen mey log dafann hogaye,
Dhas gayi Imarat,Mandir,masjid, Mehal, ghar jhopadi,
Dhas gaye Sapne, yaadein ,zindagi aur ujad gayi basti.
Mitti, salakhon key dheir se nikalta ek ek shav tha.
Dardnaak Nazara dekh Aatma mey laga ghehra ghav tha,
Bhukamp ke prakop ne meri duniya ko bhi bekhair diya,
Mujhe Shamshaan mey chod unhe jannat mey bhej diya.

...............................Bhoomikauttam

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Sri

@RadiantTreasure

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#300

hey bhoomi

great one dear

i remembered the recent earthquakes ...hmm..its really sad n whats more sad is we cant guess the natural calamities timings.....

all i just wish is we get more n more advanced technologies to knw these...though we have some....

Dardnaak Nazara dekh Aatma mey laga ghehra ghav tha,
Bhukamp ke prakop ne meri duniya ko bhi bekhair diya,
Mujhe Shamshaan mey chod unhe jannat mey bhej diya.

u expressed emotions of a person who lost his family ...its really great...

sri:-)

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