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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#141

Reet ya Preet

Meri Duniya Shant thi aur Main Gumsum si bethi thi,
Is Duniya mey tum Shamil huey aur Main Khil Uthi thi,
Na jaane kyun Tum lagtey Mujhe Sabse Khaas,
Tumhari Baatein dil ko chuti hoti unmey Kitni Mithaas.

Mulakat Hamari Hui aur Jaana humney Ek Dusrey Ko,
Bahut hi Kam Waqt laga hame Acche dost banney Ko,
Tum the Sachey Aur bekhoff Zamaney key banavat se,
Meri Hichkichahat aur Udasi door kardete ekdum jhatase.

Mere Sang najane Kitne Dukh Dard Tumney Bantein,
Magar Is Rishte par Hastey Log, chubhoty Humey Kantein,
Meri Sadgi, masumiyat aur Saral Swabhav Tumhe lubhata tha,
Mere Dil mey basa tumhareliye Apaar Sneh tumhe Harshata tha.

Tum the nidar janti thi zamane ke agey nahi jhuko gey ,
Main darti thi Parivaar se door tum kardiye jaoogey,
Tumne Apne ghar pe batadiya , tum mujhse shadi karogey,
Sabne kahdiya tha Mere sath tum kabhi khush nahi rahogey.

Mauka bhi nahi diya ki kabhi hojau main tumpar khafa,
Mujhe yakein tha tumpar janti thi tum na hogey kabhi bewafa,
Phir bhi na chahtey hue hogai main khud hi bewafa,
Tumhe Jhuti Narajgi dikha ker,kardiya Apne Gharse dafa.

Tum Umra se the Baais saal ke aur phir bhi kitney samajhdaar,
Main thi Paintis ke aas-pass phir bhi manliya zamaney se haar,
Tumne kahdiya tha jhuti hai narajgi aur mere dil mey hai prem Apaar,
Dil ke darvaje khulne ka beqararise karogey zindagi bhar mera intezaar.

Tumney kaha Pyaar ke safar mey mushkileyn ayengi har dagar ,
Magar yeh pyaar dafan nahi hota, yeh to rehega hamesha Amar.
Pyaar Umra mey jakda nahi rehta hai,
Pyaar Bhavanao se judata rehta hai.

Pyaar ko samjhna Umra ke hathon mey nahi,
Kyunki Pyaar ki khud ki koi umra hoti nahi,
Samaaj mey Umra ki reet hai shadi ke bandhan keliye,
Pyaar mey Prit hi kafi hai humdum bane rehne keliye.

Jahan prit se door aur umra se sath ho,
Wahan Umra ka chalava behkasakta hai,
Jahan sachaa pyaar, taal mail aur aadar ho,
Wahan umra koi maeiney nahi rakhta hai.

..................................Bhoomikauttam

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Sri

@RadiantTreasure

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#142

hey bhoomi...
its my luck that i am able to comment first...... 😃
i really liked this poem again..
i know love is not related to ages..any age people can love anyone..,,but its difficult to maintain a relationship with a old age women especially....society never accepts them....
may be i too will never....but love is eternal n doesn't have boundaries...

loved these lines

Jahan prit se door aur umra se sath ho,
Wahan Umra ka chalava behkasakta hai,
Jahan sachaa pyaar, taal mail aur aadar ho,
Wahan umra koi maeiney nahi rakhta hai.
it summarizes the whole..

great one again
sri:-)

Edited by sri_4 - 15 years ago

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adi_gupta

@adi_gupta

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#143

jo baat humein achio lagtien vo aksar kyo dossro ko chubti hein kyo dil jinke saath khush hote unhein dekh ker he ye zamana rota hein
ek girl kitna soctiu hein na ek boy ke barrien mein or uski family ke barre mein.......
phir hum kassie kisi ke pyar ke naap toll saktein he or kassein keh saktein ke vo khush nahi rehge
omg she did for the boy he love her ,,,i think the most wonderfull feeling of love where he knoe she love him and all her bad things is false
very very right bhoomi di jahan pyar ho vaha koi rupp rang or umar nahi dekta pyar to bus pyar hein is mein kassia rup rang or kassie diwaar

"Pyaar ko samjhna Umra ke hathon mey nahi,
Kyunki Pyaar ki khud ki koi umra hoti nahi,
Samaaj mey Umra ki reet hai shadi ke bandhan keliye,
Pyaar mey Prit hi kafi hai humdum bane rehne keliye.

Jahan prit se door aur umra se sath ho,
Wahan Umra ka chalava behkasakta hai,
Jahan sachaa pyaar, taal mail aur aadar ho,
Wahan umra koi maeiney nahi rakhta hai."

i wish ke ye sab sach mein ho or log pyar ko samje na ke body or age ko
again bhoomi your poem touch my heart and soul toooooooooo.

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#144

di!

ek aur poem?

aapne kitni saari poems likh rakhi hain?

i love all of them.........

hoye re! u showed how much a girl loved a boy who also loved her.......but she knew that their relationship wudn't be accepted by others.........so she did false appearance and made him go from her life.......she knew this becoz they were aged........but love knows no age......love is ageless.......and has no limitations.....

wow di!

but society has some rules regarding love...........

they wont let love bloom between the aged people becoz of their age.......

why?

Pyaar ko samjhna Umra ke hathon mey nahi,
Kyunki Pyaar ki khud ki koi umra hoti nahi,
Samaaj mey Umra ki reet hai shadi ke bandhan keliye,
Pyaar mey Prit hi kafi hai humdum bane rehne keliye.

Jahan prit se door aur umra se sath ho,
Wahan Umra ka chalava behkasakta hai,
Jahan sachaa pyaar, taal mail aur aadar ho,
Wahan umra koi maeiney nahi rakhta hai.

these lines were more than awesome.........

loved the poem to the core.......

and it gave me a new lesson......

pata hai kya?

aaj hi maine ek neew shwo "rishta.com" dekha.......usmein woh apne papa ki is umar meinek girlfriend nai bardassth kar paa rahi thi......although her mother had been dead since 11 yrs......

i wish ki woh yeh poem padh leti..........

awesome poem di!

loved it!

another social matter related poem!

cool!

hats off to u for writing such poems.......

some flower for u my di.......

u rock!

Mahak......

Edited by mahaklovesmayur - 15 years ago

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#145

Originally posted by: sri_4
hey bhoomi...
its my luck that i am able to comment first...... 😃
i really liked this poem again..
i know love is not related to ages..any age people can love anyone..,,but its difficult to maintain a relationship with a old age women especially....society never accepts them....
may be i too will never....but love is eternal n doesn't have boundaries...

loved these lines

Jahan prit se door aur umra se sath ho,
Wahan Umra ka chalava behkasakta hai,
Jahan sachaa pyaar, taal mail aur aadar ho,
Wahan umra koi maeiney nahi rakhta hai.
it summarizes the whole..

great one again
sri:-)

Hi Sri,

I completely agree with u .. u will find in my poem that there isnt any mention that in the end they got married .. as i have kept it up to the readers to think and have a clue.. i guess for me its difficult to egeneralise sometimes 10 years age difference seems so much ot me... and somewhere i feel even of same age people in their mind n heart are absolutely different in terms of understnading.. and also physciality..

Just take example Amrita singh and saif married where amrita was 10 years older to him.. and Amir married his wife Reema not much age difference here.. still both marraige after around 13 years broke up and both men have soemone else in their life... so what future hold isnt sure whether age difference can be the issue or not oen cant say..

I agree personally i may not as well support it and also to add i wont even go aagisnt them i may just make them know its diffuclt the trust factor has to be double and so much more complications..but love soemtimes is beautiufl.... may be 4-5 years of age difference where woman is older i may agree myslef.. but society wont even take that ever... 😕...

glad u liked it and feels good that though u dont support it u can feel the charcters and their love ..

Bhoomi

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#146

Originally posted by: adi_gupta
jo baat humein achio lagtien vo aksar kyo dossro ko chubti hein kyo dil jinke saath khush hote unhein dekh ker he ye zamana rota hein
ek girl kitna soctiu hein na ek boy ke barrien mein or uski family ke barre mein.......
phir hum kassie kisi ke pyar ke naap toll saktein he or kassein keh saktein ke vo khush nahi rehge
omg she did for the boy he love her ,,,i think the most wonderfull feeling of love where he knoe she love him and all her bad things is false
very very right bhoomi di jahan pyar ho vaha koi rupp rang or umar nahi dekta pyar to bus pyar hein is mein kassia rup rang or kassie diwaar

"Pyaar ko samjhna Umra ke hathon mey nahi,
Kyunki Pyaar ki khud ki koi umra hoti nahi,
Samaaj mey Umra ki reet hai shadi ke bandhan keliye,
Pyaar mey Prit hi kafi hai humdum bane rehne keliye.

Jahan prit se door aur umra se sath ho,
Wahan Umra ka chalava behkasakta hai,
Jahan sachaa pyaar, taal mail aur aadar ho,
Wahan umra koi maeiney nahi rakhta hai."

i wish ke ye sab sach mein ho or log pyar ko samje na ke body or age ko
again bhoomi your poem touch my heart and soul toooooooooo.

Hi ,

Glad that u read this one and liked it and agree ot the fact that sometimes love is so pure age differences doesnt matter especially women even if elder to a man which isnt acceptable til now at many families..

but tiems r changign i hope peoples mentality change.. its just that i can still digest soemone going against a love marraige for reason liek this of age where compatbbility nahi ogi they feel..btu caste key naam par doign is weird and stupid..

yes Reet to reet hai society has made..but without preet no reet has a stand..and if Preet is deep rooted no reet can ever stop the preet love inside.. 😃

I am hapy Adi u liked read and enjoyed ur time.. hope to see more of ur coments here its very encroaugin to me.. tc

Bhoomi

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#147

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur
di!

ek aur poem?

aapne kitni saari poems likh rakhi hain?

i love all of them.........

hoye re! u showed how much a girl loved a boy who also loved her.......but she knew that their relationship wudn't be accepted by others.........so she did false appearance and made him go from her life.......she knew this becoz they were aged........but love knows no age......love is ageless.......and has no limitations.....

wow di!

but society has some rules regarding love...........

they wont let love bloom between the aged people becoz of their age.......

why?

Pyaar ko samjhna Umra ke hathon mey nahi,
Kyunki Pyaar ki khud ki koi umra hoti nahi,
Samaaj mey Umra ki reet hai shadi ke bandhan keliye,
Pyaar mey Prit hi kafi hai humdum bane rehne keliye.

Jahan prit se door aur umra se sath ho,
Wahan Umra ka chalava behkasakta hai,
Jahan sachaa pyaar, taal mail aur aadar ho,
Wahan umra koi maeiney nahi rakhta hai.

these lines were more than awesome.........

loved the poem to the core.......

and it gave me a new lesson......

pata hai kya?

aaj hi maine ek neew shwo "rishta.com" dekha.......usmein woh apne papa ki is umar meinek girlfriend nai bardassth kar paa rahi thi......although her mother had been dead since 11 yrs......

i wish ki woh yeh poem padh leti..........

awesome poem di!

loved it!

another social matter related poem!

cool!

hats off to u for writing such poems.......

some flower for u my di.......

u rock!

Mahak......

Hi Mahak dear....

wow! flowers ahhhh great i love it and i am gogin ot hold them in my hand for day long .... it make sme feel how special i am for someone😳😃.. thanks for ur love dear..

Yes , age differences is a huge issue ..i remember Astitva ek prem kahani where it was shown on similar lines..i just feel love and deep true love cant find this differences affectign them but society does.. I think society also can treat people equals... many times things cant be generalised it is a individual life.. and many problems many issues situatiosn they only understnad..and if they can solve and they feel together they can live life wonderfully why unneseceaary society pokes in btween and show them they rnt equals..

anwyays its a complex situation i myself dont go against it nor do i support it..its just a individual thing which i thinnk is related ot heart and not mind.. i like the woman and she demands respect .. why blame her to ruin his life.. love is at both ends... just because she is aged doesnt means she shoudl beblamed..

thanks mahak for makign me feel the poem amde sense this poem surely is a bit tricky one but i fel tot post it.. and abotu how many poems i have written many.. 😆 and i keep writing on n off now as welll.. it doesnt take much time if my mood is right.. hope u njoye soem more. fo them.. and atlast u will get bored and say dii ab yeh jhodo..hehhaahhah

Bhoomi

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#148

Sukh

Janey Sukh hai kya?
Kya yeh hawa ka jhonka hai,
Ya phir man ka dhoka hai.

Sukh ki talash mey bhatakta hai insaan,
Aishoaram ko sukh samajhta hai insaan,
Mrigamarichika bangaya hai sukh,
Manushya is vilap ka karata hai dukh.

Sukh hai paed ki chaown mey,
Sukh hai meetey sapno mey.
Sukh hai Thandi hawaon mey,
Sukh hai bacche ki muskan mey,

Chhoti batoon se pareshan na hona,
Apney Adhoory Sapno se nirash na hona,
jab choti chejo mey miley tumhe khushi,
Hardam rahoogey tabhee tum sukhi.

Sukh kahan hai jantey ho,
Apney ap mey jhanktey ho,
Wah kaisa hai, eisa hai,
Magar jaise hai par na paisa hai,
Wah is paar hai aur us paar hai,
Magar hamarey bahar nahi hamrey bhetar hai.

Janey Sukha hai Kya?
Kya yeh hawa ka jhonka hai,
Ya phir man ka dhoka hai.

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jyothi

@jyothi_cool

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#149

really nice poem dear do write an ff again soon

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#150

are waah!

ek aur poem!

aapne bilkul sahi kaha.........

i too believe that truth is not in having all the pleasures of life........

but finding happiness in small things.....

and that's what i do......

Chhoti batoon se pareshan na hona,
Apney Adhoory Sapno se nirash na hona,
jab choti chejo mey miley tumhe khushi,
Hardam rahoogey tabhee tum sukhi.

these lines r simply too good..........

that's the funda i apply in my life.......

if i am unhappy due to any reasons....

i wont ever show that.......

and try to overcome that incident........

small things always make me happy......

even small gestures can make me upset.........

and then only happy.......

its a marvelous poem.......

its really too good.........

i always love ur poems.........

hmm...........

well i am right now......

dekha?

well this time u made me happy........

Mahak

Edited by mahaklovesmayur - 15 years ago

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