Sabherwal Series: Shot #5 updated Pg24 (27/10) - Page 13

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Posted: 4 years ago

Read the 3rd part on janmashtmi but forgot to comment

So here i m

This chapter was so relatable and kanchan's case was so close to the plight of so many women in general. Where there are silent efforts from one person and the other person knowingly or unknowingly acts ignorant because the issues in the relationship has not been voiced out. If someone isn't voicing out their problems in a relationship does that mean there are no problems at all ? No right there are problems and sometimes we just need to voice it out to know whether we ll be heard or not.

Here yash passed the test he heard her plight and tried to work on their marriage. He didn't mimick shaurya but unveiled his own true self in front of his wife which she always wanted.

Kanchan really deserved this happy marriage.

Well done akshuu ❤

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Posted: 4 years ago

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Okay here I am.

And I apologise for the delay.🙈


Now coming to the three updates I read. I will talk later about the beauty of it, first I would like to acknowledge how it was needed.

Akshu, you tried to touch those loose threads that kept us hanging while the show completed its run. And not to sound too divulging, I would say we were ignorant too because we were hopeful- and the invested part of our repetitive watching too. But then it didn't happen, disappointment flooded my senses thinking about the countless possibilities the show could have moved forward with but then my love for ShaKhi and the moments and the utmost joy SAAKK gave me was too strong for me to decide and discontinue.

But I felt disconnected. At lot of times, and on lots of scenes and I never stopped myself from sharing my dissapointed as well. I was pretty clear in my head that when I was appreciating the pros of the show it would have been extremely unfair to ignore the cons just like that.

But at the end I never questioned the magic is created, SAAKK was beautiful to watch and appreciate.

There were characters performing, speaking and justifying human behaviour.

There was fiction beautifully messing up my reality.

And I didn't mind. At all.

Because I was enjoying.

And I still do. There are memories to cherish. And scenes to remember. But then there were loop holes, I refused to ignore.

And now how glad I feel when I read these parts rolling up the characters one by one from a crumpled sheet of paper, you splattering the ink of completion on those exact letters which were left half broken, desperate and faded.

The parts were beautiful Akshu, justifying the journey of these characters, creating a successful mirage of how it ended.

Beautifully written! 🍂

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: mehr05

OMG!!!

Someone please help me!

Its about Yash here❤️❤️❤️❤️

You made me fall in love once again with him.

Yash

I love cheesy Yash! ❤️😳😳😳

Akshu, thank you thank you thank you for this shot! The best!

Aaye haye! 🤪

So much excitement for KaYa chapter!? ShaKhi aur ShaStha ke liye bhi thoda bacha ke rakho, Ma'am 😆

Mehr, I should be the one thanking you for being such a sweetheart ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Debvirfan_7

Very nice 👍.. I wished they could have shown something like this in the serial. Waiting for next chapter soon 😊

Arrey, why fear when Akshu here!

Jo icchayein show mei puri nahi hui, woh mai fanfic mei puri karungi 👍🏼

Why do you think I am writing this series? These are my adhuri icchayein that I am putting down in words 😆 The fact that you guys are liking my content, is like brownie points for me... 🤗

Also, pls tell me your name 😃

Thank you for taking out time and commenting. Next chapter coming soon ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi

aww i just love this

uff so happy for kanchan

Kanchan - Yash was an undiscovered pair on the show, I am glad you like whatever I could put together for them. ❤️

Thank you so much for commenting.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: GHKPM

That was a nice one...always wanted to see Kanchan find happiness with Yash & family...she really put up with a lot of crap from the Sabherwals so it is nice to see her get rewarded...Yash is basically a nice guy so I have no issues with her finding her happiness with him...

Loved the scene with Devi ... God that woman drives me crazy...so satisfying to see it (used to enjoy it on the show too when Kanchan finally said enough is enough😊)...


Great update...really excited about this series...great idea👍😊💖🌹

I think one of the best things about SAAKK was that characters were really NORMAL. No one was ott creepy or psychotic. So writing for them is a lot easier for me because the characters are real 👍🏼

I would have loved to see more of Kanchan and Yash to understand their dynamics so that I could stick with their character graph but I had grasped that Yash was ignorant and wasn't keen on breaking the cycle of toxicity in the Sabherwal house. Mostly bcz he was the son, he never faced the discrimination that the DILs went through and he didnt think anything was wrong with that.

I really wanted to explore more on that but then the story would have been too lengthy.


Thank you so much for reading this, Vani 🤗 I promise I will do my best to make it read-worthy for you guys! ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: anjali9996

Amazing and wonderful chp, loved it, Yash's character was not at all shown in the show , so loved the dynamics and u portrayed kanchan's emotions very well

Anjali, Thank you so much for reading and then taking out some time to comment. I am really pumped to know that my work has somehow touched your heart.
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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Aimsha

Was waiting since so long for you to update, will wait eagerly for the next update

Apologies and Thank you for waiting. I know I am a little slow with updates but I promise, next update will be up by Saturday. I hope you will like that too! 😃
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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Bhavisweet03

Finally story of Yash and Kanchan. Thank you so much for this Akshu🤗


It's always good to read new chapters and specially when it comes from you my dear.


I really love the beginning of this chapter. Kanchan and yash are going to celebrate their 3rd anniversary and her mother is asking for kids. I mean it's natural now a days after marriage all are asking same question. But here I love the way Kanchan replied. Bache kab krne hai ye completely unka decision hona chahiye. Why people are interfering too much? I personally experienced this situation so I can understand it very well.


Mother is always worrying about her daughter. Kanchan's mother is suggesting her to think about her own life also. And that's completely true. One should always think about their personal life.


I am happy atleast Kanchan expressed her feelings to yash what she is thinking what she wants. It's indeed necessary to run a relationship smoothly. But here Yash is like fully blank he doesn't have idea what's going on in her mind. Come on man give some time to your wife. That will make life so easy.😳


Wow finally Gaytri took stand for her bahu. And wait what am I reading ? Yash is taking her wife's side. I really love that part. That time Kanchan is like


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Finally he spent some time with Kanchan. it's really beautiful story.


Akshu seriously I love the chapter of KaYa. I never thought unki love story bhi itni achi ho sakti hai.❤️

Bhavi Di, thank you for being patient with my slow updates!! ❤️

I am not married but I know how much it affects the woman when she is not birthing a child in the first 3-4 years of marriage. My cousin had to go through that and it put a lot of pressure on the couple. I think in society's rule book, Bacche in first 3-4 years = Couples happy s*x life = Happy marriage.

So, keeping in mind that Kanchan and Yash have issues to resolve, I gave it a nice twist that Sabherwals are not pressurizing them bcz Devi herself never had kids for reasons only she knows.

I am a person who thinks that communication is the key. So, it is not fair to keep quiet and expect people to understand what we are feeling. Thats why I gave Kanchan an outburst so that she could tell Yash everything... And I am glad you guys liked it.


I think Kanchan was more like this:

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Thank you Bhavi Di ❤️❤️❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: ShaKhi1820

Lovely update ❤

KaYa ka bond which you have shown is just amazing ☺

The way Yash started changing for Kanchan is so good👍🏻

And the way he gave back to Devi 🤣

ShaKhi always gives us couple goals

Thank you so much!

I think Yash started changing because he finally started to see what Kanchan was talking about. He understood that just because they are not fighting, it did not mean that their marriage was a happy marriage especially when he heard Kanchan feeling miserable.

ShaKhi are undoubtedly couple goals for everyone. I want a Shaurya ASAP!!!

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