Sabherwal Series: Shot #5 updated Pg24 (27/10) - Page 12

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Posted: 4 years ago

This Kanchan was one escapism in reality u threw straight at our screens

I loved the way, she spoke about responsibility and child bearing, modern thoughts, it has all my ears and eyes and heart and soul to it

She expounded courage and enthusiasm with Devi amazing it is

I loved Yash

I loved how their relationship dynamics hasn’t been imperturbable but immaculately impeccable

Wonderful dr

This couple deserved a lot like this

Much awaited for another Sabherwal story or of Ahir with someone else, introduce someone new for him or even Rhema but not Babli, my kind request

Much love

Jen

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Posted: 4 years ago

Wt cd hv been the much awaited parallel story to Shakhi. Yes the blissful married life of Shaurya and Anokhi was the direct opposite of Kanchan and Yash's relationship. Even if Shakhi were at loggerheads, there was a spark, intimacy even in that too. Throughout the show the thing that always nagged me was Kanchan was so alone. Maybe due to the non existent Yash character. She was battling her insecurities, Devi's taunts all alone with no support to fall back upon or even share with. Gayatri as a mother in law was completely useless. Bt even then she tried her level best to help Shakhi, by guiding both of them whenever they needed. Yes shez a bit loud mouthed, n can't keep secrets. Bt that's a normal human trait. I have never seen her being envious of Shakhi even when her own relationship was in tatters. Only once did I see her venting out her frustration, that too on yash in goa.


U'r story on Yash taking small steps to build back their relationship was too the point. I wd have loved to read more of it. Especially hw he stands up for her infront of the great Devi. He also took pains to learn salsa 💞.


Do keep writing more. 😀🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago

Wow superb update .KaYa relationship was left unexplored in Saakk .Thankyou for writing on KAYa.SS and ABs relationship is instrumental in Kanchans introspection into her relationship with Yash.

In arranged marriages it is always assumed that once we find "suitable boy" everything will fall in its place .In arranged marriages Girls always think or are forced by family n cutural pressure a well educated boy, good job,good family backgnd is an asset but fail to realise that the relationship is going to be asset only if both parties invest time into this relationship. Important to invest timely in a relationship else it becomes a liability later on.in saying this family support plays a key role here where sabharwals failed for kanchan.

Kanchan always thought it will work thst way and has never spoken openly about her needs or wants nor yash has and thats until AB entered in Sabharwal house.kanchan finds courage to put forward her expectations from her husband which he was totally unaware being busy in his work.


It would have been a good track to explore if was handled properly by creatives.

Thanks for the tag and update.

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Posted: 4 years ago

I absolutely loved this OS Akshu!!!

I always wanted to know more about Kanchan and Yash’s story!
For one, she played Cupid in Shaurya Anokhi love story, so imagine how much of a romantic heart she has, so Yash’s indifference had to have hurt her for sure.


You started the story with the reality of what many women go through. N I loved how she answered her mother.
And as the story progressed, her teasing of Anokhi seemed so natural. N I loved how you included Shakhi moments.

I am glad you had Kanchan expressing her disappointment and dissatisfaction to Yash. N though it seemed like she was talking fo deaf ears, he listened. And he slowly n gradually tried to become the husband Kanchan deserved.

I loved how both Gayathri n Yash took a stand for Kanchan. It was high time.


I absolutely loved this one Akshu. It’s my favorite right now. But I am greedy, I want more. I want to see Yash’s interaction with Shaurya and Anokhi. I want to see Kanchan being independent. Maybe join with Babli and do something for herself. We know Shaurya and Kanchan have a good bond. I want to see how Anokhi and Yash bond as well. So, pretty please, when you can please write more about them!! 😍😍😍


You are doing an absolutely fabulous job with these one shots. 🤗❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Finally Kanchan and Yash story. It's so good to see Yash standing up to his family. Kanchan deserves a happy and fulfilling relationship.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: AK_2010

Thank you Jiggy 🤭

Babu?

😂😂

LOL.

Wo babe tha..

Mera autocorrect is behaving like Tamarind.. 🙃

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Posted: 4 years ago

Ye part 2 mai quote ka option nahi aa raha..


Anyway I was really disappointed with hug and forget all in the serial.. I really liked the progression here..

Seriously the twins needed guidance and who better than Anokhi.. Moreover they were so shallow and were really not enjoying the small wonders of trying and winning in their life..

Gayatri standing up for her daughter was on point.. Somewhere they had become wayward since they saw their mother who is supposed to be their role model a doormat..


This was really nice Akshu.. ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Jiggy7

Wo babe tha..

Mera autocorrect is behaving like Tamarind.. 🙃

My auto correct is always behaving weird. Some tweets on TT look like I am an average tuta-phoota english bolne wali ladki 😆
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Posted: 4 years ago

When will we get the next update

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Posted: 4 years ago

Finally read it. The much awaited part. But here i m late to comment.

What an update it is. I always wanted see more of kanchan yash story. Like u said arranges marriages have different type of story to tell. Here got to read one. kanchan n yash's relation progressed, yash become a more caring than before n much more.

Yash never stood for his wife. But later he tried to take stand n it took time. In SH Every relation has their part of struggle. Over the period of time everything is getting better. Anokhi's presence is doing the good. U wrote it very well. It made me greedy to read more of it. Do write ashtha n shaan.

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