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Posted: 9 years ago
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I hope he is our sid...superb update...wwiting fr next
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Posted: 9 years ago
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UPDATE:5


A man of prem's age is holding Roli in his arms.
Both prem and simar smile to see Roli but also worried seeing her unconscious.
Simar: oh thank god Roli has come.But bhaiyya how come you are bringing her.
Prem: tell me sid what happened to her and why is she unconscious.
Sid: first lets go in. I will tell you everything.
Sid Carried Roli in his arms to her room and dropped her on bed carefully.
Now while he tried to move Roli hold his hand.
Sid tried to come out of her hold and finally after some tries sid freed himself.
Prem and simar too came to Roli's room following sid.
Prem: Sid tell us what happened first.
Sid saw prem and simar who are staring at him waiting for his explanation.
Sid: actually today I was going to their collage as I wanted to meet simar.
But on the way I heard some familiar voice screaming for help. When I searched around I found some people dragging a girl to side.
I ran towards them and found it was Roli. Seeing me those guys tried to attack me and loosened their grip on Roli. She came and hide behind me. I beat them badly and handed over them to police. But out of fear Roli lost conscious and I brought her here.
By now doctor also came and examined Roli.
Doctor: don't worry. She was too scared and took mental stress which made her unconscious. I gave her injection and she will recover soon. Just take care and give these medicines on time. She will be alright.
Doctor left.
Prem: (screamed) who the hell was that who tried to harm my Roli sid.
Simar: shhh speak softly premji. Roli is sleeping.
Sid: yes prem we will go down and talk about this. Simar be with Roli.
Simar nodded yes.
Prem and Sid went down and sat in sofa in the hall.
Prem: who were they sid.
Sid: I too don't know prem. they were 3in number. But you relax now and don't worry about them. I beat them hard and also handed them to police. DSP is my friend and he will make sure that they will get enough punishment.
Prem: thank you sid. And she was fortunate enough that you were near by the place.
Sid: ha prem. actually I don't use that way as I usually go by main road to their college. Thank god I was on that way.
Sid stood up...
Sid: well prem can I make a move now.
Prem: sure sid and are you taking simar with you.
Sid: no prem I am not going home. And more over Roli may need her. So let her come later. Bye prem. see you later.
Prem and Sid hug each other and Sid left.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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UPDATE:6


Prem moved towards Roli's room.
But stopped at the door step hearing simar's voice.
Simar was holding Roli's hand and caressing her hair.
Simar to unconscious Roli: sorry Roli. I would have not gone leaving you. I always stay with you all the time but today as I forgot my lunch went to canteen thinking to return fast. But never expected all this will happen. From now on I will never leave you alone Roli. I promise.
Prem who heard all these smiled as even he would say the same to Roli.
Prem walked inside.
Seeing prem simar stood.
Simar: Roli is fine premji. She will recover soon. Don't worry.
Prem: ofcourse why not when she have such a caring friend like you. She is lucky to get such friend.
Simar smiled at prem.
Simar: yes premji she is lucky but not because of me but because of you as brother.
Prem: well. By the way sid left. If you want I will drop you.
Simar: oh. It's ok I will stay with Roli for some more time and I will go myself later. We can't leave Roli alone na.
Prem: then fine I will be down do call me if anything needed.
Simar nod her head in acceptance while prem left the room with a smile.



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Posted: 9 years ago
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UPDATE:7


Roli came to conscious.
Roli was sweating profusely and is scared.
Roli shouted... No please save me.
With this simar noticed that she came to conscious.
Simar: Roli nothing happened to you. See you are at home.
Roli saw that she in her room and got little bit relaxed.
Roli started crying and hug simar.
Simar console her rubbing her back.
Simar: Roli now you are safe and those idiots also got punishment. You don't need to get scared.
Prem listening Roli screaming came to her room.
Prem hug Roli and console her.
Roli got relaxed as she is in her house now.
Just then sid too came inside.
Sid: oh Roli is conscious. Good you recovered soon. You are so strong Roli.
This made Roli remember her father.
She smiled at him.
Sid: I thought I will take simar home as it is already late.
Simar frowned seeing sid.
Simar: oh my god. From when you started caring for me bhaiyya.
Sid: oh common don't create me as a bad brother infront of your friend ok.
All laughed.
Roli: no. I can understand when you care for someone who is not related to you then ofcourse you will be a caring brother too.
And thank you so much for saving my life. I really owe to you sid.
Prem: yes Sid. You not only saved Roli's life but also my life. You know without her even Iam not there.
Sid: simar now please come fast dear. Or else these two siblings will kill me with their emotional athyachaar.
Again all smiled.
Sid and simar left Roli's house.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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And that's it for today guys
Hope you all enjoyed it and I was able reach your expectations.
And I don't know when I will be able to update next.
Hope see you soon with next updates
Bye for now goodnight.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ramya2397

And that's it for today guys
Hope you all enjoyed it and I was able reach your expectations.
And I don't know when I will be able to update next.
Hope see you soon with next updates
Bye for now goodnight.

all updates r fablous dear but don't say when u will be able to update next bcoz updates r so gud difficult to wait try dear give update soon if possible
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Posted: 9 years ago
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good it was sid fab updates dear will wait for further updates
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Posted: 9 years ago
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UPDATE: 8

Roli though recovered soon was not completely alright.
Before she could recover from parents death she suffered this kidnap.
At home prem and in college simar are the only 2 with whom she used to speak.

In sid house...
Simar was sitting alone worried.
Sujatha saw her and asked what was the reason behind her silence.
Simar: Maa I am worried about Roli.
Sujatha: ya I too got to know about her parents. I felt very bad for them.
I felt bad for not attending their funeral atleast as we were not in station that time.
Simar: but again something big happened in her life maa. She...
Just then sid came and interrupted simar from saying further.
Sid: maa I am too tired can I get coffee please.
Sujatha: sure sid I will bring in 5min.
Sujatha left.
Sid sat next to simar.
Sid: idiot why are you telling about Roli to maa. You know na they are little superstitious and this would create wrong impression on Roli.
Simar: ha bhaiyya you are right. I never thought like this.
Sid: what is new in that you never think which is required.
Simar pouts.
Sujatha came there with coffee and gave it to sid.
Sujatha: oh again your Krishna- Arjuna fight started.
Sid: no maa today I am giving geethopadesh.
Sid finished coffee and left to his room.

In Roli's house...
Roli is studying.
Prem came to her room.
Premji: Roli I have an urgent work at office. So I need to go. Please take care Roli. I will try to come as soon as possible.
Roli nodded ok with a smile.
Roli thought for a while and said.
Roli: bhaiyya if you can please leave me in simar's house. And after finishing the work you can pick me up from her house.
Prem: well. As you wish. ok get ready.

Prem dropped Roli at simar's place and left from there.
Roli entered the house. As she normally go there she go directly to simar's room.
Simar's room is in 1st floor. Roli was climbing the stairs.
Suddenly she slipped from the upper step. But before she fall sid come front and hold her hand.
With help of sid she balanced to stand straight but she got hurt on leg. She was not able to walk.
Sid with out second thought pick her in his arms.
Rosid eyes meet. Roli smiled unknown to her.
She wrapped her hands around his neck.
Sid carried her to simar's room.
Simar seeing Roli carried by sid got worried and started lava of questions.
Sid: oye question bank stop asking so many questions. It's simple logic... Roli got hurt on her leg while climbing the stairs and so I brought her to your room.
Are you satisfied now.
Simar saw him with Lott angry look.
Simar shifting her concern to Roli...
Simar:are you ok Roli.
Roli: ha simar Iam fine. She saw sid... Thank you Sidji for saving me again.
Sid: ha Roli It seems I am born to protect you. He smiled and left the room arising feelings fir him in her heart



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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
lovely update 👏 loved when sid says i am born to protect you.. roli started falling for sid waiting for more updates dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
Superb dear..roli started getting feelings on sid...wat abt sid...n of course sod born to protect roli

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