ROSID FF- REMAKE completed.

REMAKE


Hai guys.
I know i am yet to complete my SS. But as I just want to pen this ff... Giving you the story line hope you all like it. Fingers crossed.
This would be more of brother and sister bonding. Roli and prem are brother and sister and also sid and simar.
Roli and prem are orphans and has no one.
So here it goes...

Roli after loosing her parents becomes reserved. Prem gets worried about her. He get her married to veeru...
Now let's see how rosid meet each other.
I know the story might not be convencing. But I will try my best to unite rosid.

Please give me your opinion on this even if it is negative no issues.

I like the concept dear unique and i know concept related to siblings but dear try to give lots of rosid scenes and one suggestion dear first u complete ur ss then u start to give updates for this ff bcoz if u give updates for both story it's take long time so finish ur story one by one if u feel bad then sorry dear

nice concept dear...waitin fr updates

lovely concept 👏 waiting for updates

nice concept dear👏waiting for updates😊

Oops I completely forgot about this ff
I will give updates now
Ha tell me which you want me to update first remake or thum ho meri zindagi

REMAKE

UPDATE:1

Many people are crowded near a big building.
Everyone are talking within themselves making the place more chaotic.
Police jeep accompanied a black van.
2 dead bodies were taken out and 4 people along with police moved inside the building with cadavers.
They placed the bodies in a cold storage box enclosed with glass.
Inspector: we are sorry prem. Your parents died in an accident near ghat area and we could not save them.
Listening to all this prem started shivering.
He slowly moved towards his parents dead bodies but had to stop listening to big sound coming from top probably from his sister's room.
Prem ran towards her room.
Prem banged the door which opened by itself as it was not locked.
Prem was now more shattered seeing his sister's position than seeing his parents dead bodies.
Prem rushed towards his sister taking her into his embrace.
Prem: Roli... Roli... Don't cry baby. You know I can't see you in tears.
Roli sobbed like a child on his chest.
Roli: bhaiyya mamma and pappa...
She could not speak more. She again burst crying.
Prem had real tough time consoling his little sister.
2 close relatives of them came and called prem to proceed with further rituals.
Prem: Roli come down and see our parents for one last time.
Roli: no bhaiyya. I can't see them like that.
She is crying like hell making prem more weak.
Prem though felt grief on his parents death his pain for Roli was more.
Prem made her sit on bed and asked. 2 women there to take care of her as he is required to go and complete his parents last rituals.
Prem left Roli's room ofcourse not before giving a glance at her.
He completed all the rituals swiftly and returned from the grave as he know what Roli's position there at home.
He rushed as fast as he can to Roli's room.

UPDATE:2


Prem took his steps towards Roli.
He sat next to her.
Seeing him women there left the room.
Prem placed his hand on Roli's head giving her a feel of protectiveness
She leaned on to his shoulder.
Prem was not able to see her naughty sister who never missed a chance to pull her brother's legs.
He came out of his thoughts as Roli's tears started wetting his shoulder.
Prem: Roli... Please don't cry darling. I am there with you.
Roli was all quiet.
Prem made her look at him holding her cheeks... Roli I can't see you crying dear. We should move on. I know it is not easy to forget it that easily afterall they are our parents. But we need to face this situation and we cannot stop our lives here itself. You know Roli pappa always use to say that you are a strong girl and can face anything in life.
But you know you are proving him wrong.
He wiped Roli's tears and kissed on her forehead.
Roli did not speak anything and leaned on his shoulder again.
Prem too kept quiet as he know it is very difficult for her to take the loss of their parents.
Roli was favorite kid in their house and no one ever spoke rude also especially prem.
Roli always use to say: bhaiyya I disturb you so much and you never say a word to me why?
For which prem used to reply: because my Roli can never be a disturbance to me.
Roli use to hug his brother in love.

Roli after longtime slept on his lap.
Once prem got sure she slept he made her sleep on bed and kissed on her forehead.
When he tried to move away he felt resistance from Roli.
He turned to see and Roli hold his hand in sleep.
Prem smiled at her.
Prem sat on floor beside Roli caressing her hair.
Prem was pushed to remember an incident of Roli's.
When Roli was 5yr old kid...
Meena once raise her hand on Roli to beat as she was about to burn her hand with her naughty works.
But before Meena really beat her Roli started crying. She was very scared as she never seen her mom angry.
Prem come and quickly pick her in his arms and console her.
Roli sleep in a while on his shoulder. When he put her on bed Roli hold his hand and prem use to spend whole night beside her holding her hand.
From then on when ever Roli is scared she use to hold him.
After this incident prem did not talk to his mother for atleast one week. So no one in the house never dare to say anything to Roli.
Thinking about this incident a smile crept on prem's lips.


Guys I know you all are waiting for sid to come in Roli's life and do all these. But please bear with me for few more updates. I promise after sid entry in Roli's life I will not make you wait.

No dear I not forgot the concept I think that u give both ffs update togethe but it's gud decision to give update one by one first u complete remake dear if possible

Fab start dear eagerly waiting for more