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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
fab updates dear & ya sid is born to protect roli was nice roli started feeling something something for sid 😉 waiting fr next
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update ramya eagerly waiting for more
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice update dear.waiting dear next update when
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
fabulous updates dear...felt emotional in the beginning...loved bro-sis bonding of both the pairs...& ROSID's meeting is very much awesome...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you for all your comments.
Sorry for not replying individually and for making you all wait.
But I wish you bear me as I can't update till the weekend.
But I will make sure atleast I will give 5-6 updates continuously.
Little busy with studies.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ramya2397

Thank you for all your comments.
Sorry for not replying individually and for making you all wait.
But I wish you bear me as I can't update till the weekend.
But I will make sure atleast I will give 5-6 updates continuously.
Little busy with studies.

sorry for late comment.read your updates now only.superb concept.and the pace of the story is too gud.sid saying it seems he was born to save roli was good too.thank u for ur updates.do provide weekend updates when finishing your studies and ur free. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ramya2397

Thank you for all your comments.
Sorry for not replying individually and for making you all wait.
But I wish you bear me as I can't update till the weekend.
But I will make sure atleast I will give 5-6 updates continuously.
Little busy with studies.

no prob dear concentrate in ur studies and when u free then provide updates
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
UPDATE: 9


Sid with a smile left simar's room.
Simar: Roli is it still hurting... She asked with lots of concern.
Roli: no Simar Iam fine now. Don't worry. She said with a smile.
After that Roli and simar studied for some time.
They are completely involved in studies and did not notice the time too.
Just then Roli's mobile rang.
It was prem.
Roli answered the call.
Roli: ha bhaiyya.
Prem: Roli. I'm very sorry dear. I tried to complete the work quickly but still Iam held up.
May be It will be very late by the time I come home.
Roli: don't worry bhaiyya. It's ok I will go home my self. You take care and come carefully while driving in night roads.
Prem: but Roli how will you go alone.
Roli: I will manage. It's ok bhaiyya.
She was also scared to go alone as she don't want to trouble her brother.
Prem: Roli careful darling. Call immediately after reaching home.
Roli accepted and cut the call with confused smile on her face.
Simar who can guess the conversation looking at roli's expression.
Simar: Roli your brother is held up with work and is not coming to pick you up right?
Roli nodded as yes.
Simar: don't worry Roli stay her for night. Any way still there is lot of portion to be completed. So we can very well finish it today.
Roli: but how can I stay here.
You can very well stay here Roli...
A voice came from the entrance.
Simar and Roli turned to see simar's mother Sujatha standing at the entrance.
Sujatha with a Smile entered the room and sat beside Roli.
Sujatha cup Roli's face with one Palm.
Sujatha: simar is right Roli. Even at your home you should be alone and you will be scared. So stay here itself and anyway tomorrow is Sunday. You can go home in the morning once your brother reach home.
Roli: but Aunty...
Sujatha in serious tone: no ifs and buts ... I have come here to call you both for dinner. Now like good girls come and have dinner later you can continue studying.
Roli: ok Aunty.
Sujatha smiled and left the room followed by rosim.
Roli and simar came near dining.
Mataji and Rajender were already there waiting for them.
Roli: namaste mataji. Hello uncle.
Rajender: hai Roli. Seems like you remembered us after a long time. Not coming now a days.
Roli: nothing like that uncle. Little busy that's it.
Mataji:when did you come Roli. Actually I was feeling tiered so I was in my room and did not notice you.
Roli: hmm Mataji I came in the afternoon only.
All shared some casual talk with each other.
Sujatha: oh this sid will always come late what is he doing?
Simar: may be talking to his girlfriend.
Sid by then reached the dining and heard her sister. He slightly twist simar's ear.
Sid: what were you saying..
Simar: Ouch haa... Leave me bhaiyya please.
Sujatha: leave her and sit for dinner sid.
Sid obeyed and say next to simar.
Sid: maa send this idiot as soon as possible maa. I can't bear her torture.
Simar: maa look at him. He want to get rid of me.
Sid: hmm finally understood my pain. Thank you simar.
Simar faked crying.
Sujatha: oh keep quiet sid. Simar you know once you get married more than anyone your brother will miss you a lot. Now he is saying so much because he will not get chance to do all this once you get married.
Sid and simar looked eachother lovingly.
All finished their dinner in sometime.
Roli and simar went back to simar's room.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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UPDATE:10

After sometime sid comes to simar's room.
Simar: why bhaiyya gave bust to her sister's room.
Sid: I have rights to come to my sister's room. Don't I?
Simar: of course yes but I know now you got something to request me. Am I right?
She said in proud as if her guess is not wrong.
Sid bowed slightly to her holding his hands.
Sid: ha meri maa. Please don't play with my life.
Roli who saw all these chuckled.
Sid realized that Roli too is there and stood properly while simar joined her laughter with Roli.
Sid pulled simar a little side.
Sid: simar please don't tell anyone about my love to anyone. Please. I will give you what ever you ask for.
Simar: ok bhaiyya but on one condition.
Sid: no what?
Simar: you should not tease me again.
Sid: ok done.
Sid smiled and left simar's room.
Simar joined Roli.
They continued their studies for sometime.
Then Roli remembered that she did not inform prem about her stay in simar's house itself.
Roli called prem. but no response from other side.
Roli tried multiple times but no response from prem.
Simar saw Roli getting tensed on this.
Simar: Roli don't worry yaar. Maybe he is in some urgent work as he said. So not lifting the call.
Roli felt little convinced.
In a while Roli and simar slept after little conversation.

In the morning.
Roli being tensed got up very early and checked her mobile expecting call from her brother.
But no calls are messages from prem.
Roli was in hurry to go home now. But she can't disturb simar that early.
So she decided to wait till simar wake up. Roli was pushing hard her time.
Finally simar woke up. By now it was 8:00am.
Simar: good morning Roli. You wale up so soon.
Roli: simar. You got up. Simar now I will leave home.
Simar got up sat on bed.
Simar: what happened Roli is everything fine.
Roli started crying hugging Simar.
Simar did not understand why Roli started crying but still have her little time to come out her self.
Roli finally wiped her tears nod broke the hug.
Roli: bhaiyya... Bhaiyya has not called me still. Iam scared simar.
Simar now understood her concern so did not try to object her.
Simar: Roli don't worry. Premji would have reached home. As it was late may be he din't want to disturb you. So he would not have called. Ok now go home. You will be satisfied once you see him with your own eyes. I will ask bhaiyya to drop you. Fresh up soon.
Roli nodded and quickly freshup.
By then simar informed sid everything. So sid was waiting for Roli in the hall.
She waved bye to everyone at home and walked along with sid.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
Hope prem is alright and who's sid girlfriend I thought he silently loves roli eagerly waiting for more ramya

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