ROSID FF: Ishq bina kya jeena (Ver 2) Completed FF

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi Friends,
Banu here with version 2 of Ishq bina kya jeena...

This is going to be entirely different from Version 1...

Also with all ups & downs which we come through without smooth transition in life...

You all know the concept of this story itself is something different from other FFs where RoSid shown as good characters...

Still in the version 1 i made them good so easily & they fall for each other...

Then due to some reasons it was wrapped soon too..

But hope this will be little lengthy and entirely different..

Hope you all like it & do provide your valuable feedback...

First few Parts will be same as the scenerio going to be the same..

Then the Version 2 starts..

Wish you all like it...

Fingers crossed...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 1

Forest...

Huge trees... Thick bushes...

Dark everywhere...

The wind was creating fear sound...

The branches of huge trees were looking like dancing...

The birds were resting in its nests...

Animals safety taken its place in its places...

Yes... They realised the rain is going to start...

It started...

The rain drops started little by little...

The sand spread its smell in the atmosphere...

Slowly it increased it density of dropping making it from rain drops to rain...

In very short period of time, it turned heavy rain...

The trees & plants were taking a natural shower bath by the rain...

The water started flowing in the ground from high level areas to low level areas...

No human were seen around...

Inside the forest there found a house...

Not sure who constructed such house in such dense forest...

Who was residing in such forest...

Anyone can get fear of a bhoot bangla looking into it...

The windows were restless due to wind...

The rain was passing its drops into the house through the window...

It was completely dark...

Deep inside the room there was candle lit in a place...

The candle was spreading its little light to the distance as much as possible...

The house was empty...

No items were found anywhere...

it seems like none have used that house for long...

It was full of dirt and unclean...

When looked down on the floor...

In that little light there seen a crying girl...

She was sitting wrapping her hands around her knees...

She lean on her knees and was crying badly...

Her dress was torn here & there...

She had scratches on her body...

Her hair was completely disturbed...

She seems like lost something which she should not...



In few feet distance, there found a guy...

He seems to be like a arrogant guy...

His face showed some sort of success accomplished...

He was wearing his shirt...

He was irritated with that girl's cry...

He looked at the girl angrily...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 2

The guy was giving angry look at the girl...

Guy: Will you please stop crying...

She continued crying...

Guy: How long you will cry like this... Already the rain is irritating in the outside while you turned more irritating...

No response...

Guy: Are you deaf? Cant you hear what i am telling? I told you to stop crying...

No effect...

Guy: Oh God! I dont know when she will stop this...

He was irritated...

Guy: I might have left outside if it is not raining...

He said looking outside...

Guy: The rain too seen the time only now to start.. Otherwise i might have gone out...

He was held situational...

Guy: I told that man... I am not used to in these girls matters... I wont do it... He was not leaving me...

He expressed his helplessnes...

Guy: Look... This girl is not taking name of stopping the cry now...

He looked around without knowing what to do...

Guy: The maximum portion of room is wet now... I dont know... If this rain continues.. how to even go out or how to stay here...

He was confused...

Guy: Is there any place in the upstairs...

He saw the steps and thought of going there & checking...

But it was completely dark...

He was looking at the candle whether to take it...

But she is already crying & that is the only souce of light there...

That is also not sure how long going to be alive giving light...

But he need to go upstairs & see as he was sure they cant go outside and also not possible to stay there as it was getting wet completely...

He remembered the cigarette lighter...

He took the help of it and went upstairs...

He took steps slowly as the steps which was made of wooden may be weak...

Once reached upstairs... he saw a room where fortunately he saw a cot...

The windows were also closed and hence the water didn't enter into the room...

He decided to stay there until rain stop and later to start from there...

He sat in the sofa...

Then he remembered the girl in the downstairs...

He felt she is alone in that water & she too cant stay there in that wetting place...

He swiftly went down near the girl...

Guy: Hi, come with me...

No response...

Guy: I am talking to you only... Here the place is wet... We will go to upstairs...

No reply...

Guy: Cant you hear me... I felt pity on you and came down to call you & you are not even responding...

He hold her hand...

Guy: COme with me...

He pulled her to go to upstairs...

He took the candle on other hand...

She tried to go out of his grip...

She was feeling weak...

Guy: Already all tries went in vain right... Now why are you trying to escape from me... What are you going to get trying for it...

He said looking at her...

Guy: Now i am just taking you from here to save you from wet... Come with me...

He pulled her and took her towards the steps..

Girl: Leave my hands.. Dont touch me...

Guy: hi, already told you... I am just taking you to keep you safer... If you do too much... I will leave you here & you should be alone sitting in the wet floor... Candle too will go off soon...

Girl was wondering what he is trying to tell...

Guy: Now come with me silently...

They reached near steps...

Guy: Dont try anything in the steps... It is very weak... Just keep the steps taking care...

He took her to the upstairs...

He kept the candle in a side & looked at the cot...

It was dusty...

He thought of removing the dust so that they can sleep...

He looked around for cloth...

But nothing found...

He looked at her...

He took her dupatta...

She hold the dupatta to hold from pulling...

Guy: Just taking this to remove the dust... Give me...

He pulled the duppatta hard and started dusting the cot with it...

Girl was irritated with his act...

Guy: Look... We cant go out until rain stop... So we got no other option other than stopping here..

No reply...

Guy: We will sleep here and lets see whether rain stop tomorrow and we go back...

He throw the dupatta on her and lay down in the cot...

The girl was looking around with fear...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 3
The girl was afraid...

The tears were still scrolling without stopping for a second...

She was helpless...

The helplessness gave her irritation...

She looked at the dusty dupatta which was used by him to remove the dust of the cot...

She was irritated that he throw that on her after dusting...

She took it and throw on the cot...

He was least bothered and closed his eyes to sleep...

The girl looked around...

The floor was dusty and was not interested to sit there...

She got no other option other than sitting in the cot...

She went the other side of the cot and sit in it...

She was feeling frusted on seeing herself...

Still she was unable to do anything to the guy...

She looked at herself...

She closed her eyes while the tears overflow from the closed eyes...

She looked at him who was relaxing in the cot closing his eyes...

She was wondering what made him to do this...

Who is he...

Why all this...

She got no reply for so many questions raised on her head...

The head started paining as she was crying since long...

She hold her head with her hand...

Her eyes were burning...

She lean on the cot...

She closed her eyes...

After a while...

She started shivering...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 4

The girl was shivering...

She was unable to bear the cold climate...

She narrowed herself to the extend possible to get rid of cold...

But No...

The wind was entering into her creating shivering to her...

She looked at the duppata which she throw as it was dusty...

Now there is nothing to see dust...

She took the dupatta and wrapped around her...

Still the cold was not less for her to bear...

She was shivering...

In a while... she was not even able to open her eyes...

She was feeling feverish inside...

Her body was paining...

The cry & the climate all together took effect on her...

She was unable to bear it...

She was feeling bad about her condition...

How she is struck in strange situation which she never thought even on her dream...



The only daughter of Divedi family...

One of the millionare well known in the city...

Jamanlal divedi, the chairman of the Divedi group of industries was a successful businessman...

Meena Divedi his wife was behind her daughter Roli Divedi...

Meena:Roli, have this breakfast.. It is not good to skip breakfast...

Roli: Mom, I am getting late for college...

Meena: I will feed you when you are getting ready...

Roli: oh Mom! That will be disturbance for me...

She was doing her dressup...

Meena: Please just a little for your mother...

Roli: Oh Mom! You dont hear.. Ok... Give me...

She had a bit at last...

She rushed towards downstairs taking her small handbag and a book on her hand...

Meena: This girl is very difficult to handle.. Not sure how she will be in future...

Meena was feeling tension thinking about her daughter...

Roli: Dad, I am leaving to college... Bye...

Jamanlal: Bye Darling.. Take care...

Roli rushed towards her car...

She took her car and was driving towards the college...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 5

When she was about to enter into college road...

She found a guy coming in the bike towards her and stopped the bike in front of her way...

As the road was narrow & one way she was unable to cross the bike & go...

Roli down the glasses of the car door...

Roli: Mr... Dont you have brains... Get away from this path... Why you came in oneway & stopped just in front of my car...

The guy didn't reply and got down from the bike...

He came near Roli's car...

He lean towards the open door...

He looked inside raising his eyebrows...

He took the car key..

Roli: What are you doing?

Guy: Shhh...

He now went near bike and put the bike in a corner behind a tree...

Roli was wondering what is happeing...

The guy came near the car again...

He opened the door and pulled our Roli...

Roli: Hi you... leave me...

Guy: Shhh... Dont shout...

He slap on her face while she fainted...

He put her in the back seat and occupied the driving seat...

He started driving towards the forest...



When Roli regained her conscious...

She was inside the forest...

Inside the house...

She looked around...

It was dark...

She can hear the raining sound outside...

It was getting dark...

She saw the guy who she met in the road...

who gave a slap on her face...

The same guy...

He was lighting a candle...

Roli: Hi you... Who are you... Why you bring me here...

Guy: Shhh... I dont like someone shouting at me...

Roli: Why i am going to shout at you if you dont come on my way... Tell me why you bring me...

Guy: There is no need for me to give any explanation to you...

Roli: Hi, come on... i am not asking you any explanation... I want to know why you bring me & nothing more than that... Let me go...

Roli got up and tried to move from there...

The guy hold her hand and pulled her inside...

Roli's hand was paining by his sudden pull...

Roli: ooch.. my hand...

Guy: I have not bring you here so many kilometers to let you go...

Roli: That is what i am also asking why you bring me...

Guy: To enjoy you...

Roli: What???

She tried to take her hand from his hold...

Guy: Yes...

Roli: What rubbish are you talking? Are you crazy?

Guy: I dont like someone asking me questions...

Roli: First tell me who are you...

Guy: Oh! What you thought i will give my Biodata to you...

He turned her towards him

Roli was wondering what is going to happen...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 6
Roli was pulled by the guy towards him hardly...

Roli: Leave me...

He was not ready to hear anything...

Roli tried to push him away...

But his hold was very strong that he was unable to do anything...

He removed her dupatta...

Roli: Help... help...

The guy laughed...

Guy: Help... Who will come to help you here... No one is present anywhere around...

She realise herself helpless..

She tried to scratch him with her nails...

He got angry...

He pushed her on the floor...

She fell down and got hurt...

Roli: ooch... ooch...

She got pain in the hip...

Still she need to escape from him...

She went backward slowly... while he was forwarding his steps towards her...

Roli: Dont come near... I will kill you...

He was not interested to hear anything...

Roli went back to the extent possible... There is no space behind and she was hitting on the wall...

He went near her...

Roli: Please leave... dont do anything...

Guy: Dont shout...

He pulled her closer...

She was putting her full pressure to escape from him...

But of no use..

She was unable to withstand his strength...

She was unable to escape from his hands...

She lost herself...

She was lost completely...

Only her tries to escape left her with scratches all over her body...

But she has lost the one which she should not...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi Friends,

Till now the updates of both version remains the same...

Lets see what happens next...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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waiting for next updates...akka...lengthy means..minimum how many parts your r planning... 😃😃😃...waiting for twist...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sowmya567

waiting for next updates...akka...lengthy means..minimum how many parts your r planning... 😃😃😃...waiting for twist...


hmm... lengthy means i think minimum 50 updates... max as the story proceeds...

Twist... I am not sure whether i can tell it as twist..

instead i can say how it happens in real life in such situation...

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