PREMAR FF: Destined to be together -- Updated Pt 27 on Pg 36 - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you dear😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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R going to update this story in here or in other PreMar FF ?

Coz I want to read prem is in love with Simar

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Premar556

R going to update this story in here or in other PreMar FF ?

Coz I want to read prem is in love with Simar

I will update here only dear this story..
That is one more story.. I got an idea of one more story so immediately i started it...Parallely i will update both

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Okay dear thank you 😉

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Originally posted by: Asha122

PART 5:

Morning Bharadwaj House:

Mataji: Prem where are you leaving early in the morning without having breakfast

Surbhi will be continuously calling Prem but he won't lift as Mataji is there

Prem: Mataji I have some work I will come after some time

Mataji: Ok atleast have BFast and go

Prem: I will have something outside Mataji don't worry and he takes Mataji's blessings and leaves

After going outside he calls Surbhi and asks her to get ready that he will come and pick her after two hours and within that I will do remaining arrangements

There Simar will be feeling uneasy that something bad is going to happen so she thinks to go to temple and pray to god

After completing arrangements Prem thinks finally I am going to marry the person I love. I know Mataji you will be angry on me but I can't marry the girl whom I don't love and make her life and my life as hell. Sorry Mataji please forgive me as for the first time I am going against your wish. Then he goes to pick up Surbhi

Prem: Surbhi I am waiting down come fast.

Surbhi comes down and they leave for temple

Prem & Surbhi reaches temple where all their friends will be waiting for them. They both goes to get ready

Whereas Simar will be feeling restless

In Bharadwaj house everyone will be having breakfast suddenly Mataji feels pain in heart and she collapses. Everyone shouts Mataji

Rajendher: Siddanth call doctor immediately

Siddanth: Ok Papa

Doctor comes and checks Mataji

Doctor: Mataji got minor heart attack you need to take care of her and also if she undergoes any stress then there may be a problem as so be careful he says then writes some tablets and leaves by saying she will gain consciousness in some time

There in temple Prem and Surbhi marriage will start with the Mantras of Panditji

Simar will be praying to god

Mataji gains consciousness and asks for Prem

Mataji: Where is Prem? I want to see him, call him

Siddanth: Mataji you don't worry I will call him. But Prem phone is switched off

Siddanth: Mataji his phone is switched off

Mataji: Whatever it is call I want to see him. I am feeling I will die without seeing him

Rajendher: Mataji don't say like that we will bring Prem

All gents leave in search of Prem. Siddanth is continuously trying his phone but it's switched off

None of them are able to find where Prem is

In temple Panditji asks them to get up for Varmala. They put garlands on each other neck and sit down.

One of their friends does gatbandhan and Panditji asks them to stand up for Saat Phere they get up and Surbhi thinks now no one can come in between us at the same time Simar face is shown.

Let's see what happens next and whose love wins?


i was really tensed while reading this part...😊 nice
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Asha122

Note: Dont know whether it reached your expectations or not. Because i only not satisfied with this part but anyways posting it. If you want any improvements pls let me know

PART 6:

Starts from temple where Prem and Surbhi will stand up for Saat Phere

Siddanth will be thinking what to do and he thinks may be he is with Rajeev and he thinks to call him

When they are about to take first phere Prem's friend gets a call and he shouts Prem

Prem: What happened Rajeev?

Rajeev: Prem Mataji got heart attack just now Siddanth called and she is asking about you

Prem: What come lets go

Surbhi: Prem then marriage

Prem: Surbhi as of now Mataji is important we can do our marriage later he throws garland on havan kund and leaves

Surbhi gets angry and says why is that one or the other thing is happening everytime whatever it is Prem I LOVE YOU I will get you at any cost.

Prem reaches home and goes to Mataji

Prem: Mataji how are you now? What happened? What did doctor say?

Rajendher: Prem doctor said that its minor attack and he asked us not give to any stress

Prem: Mataji please ek baar aap mujse baat karlejiye muje acha lagega

After sometime Mataji opens eyes and asks prem

Prem: Mataji I am here only

Mataji: I thought without seeing you only I will die

Prem: Please don't say like that I can't bear

Mataji: You all go now I am fine I saw everyone so no problem

Prem: No Mataji I will stay with you here only after some time I will go

Mataji: Ok

After everyone leaves

Mataji: I am very happy to see you. Though I love everyone I love you a little more than all

Prem: I know Mataji I too love you a lot

Mataji: Then will you listen to what I say that too if you think I will do anything after thinking a lot

Prem: Ok Mataji what ever you say I will agree

Mataji: Please marry Simar she is very nice girl

Prem: Ok Mataji as you say

Mataji: Promise

Prem: Promise I will marry Simar

Mataji sleeps and Prem leaves the room

There Simar is relieved and prays to matarani please see that Prem ji is happy and nothing happens to him

After Prem leaves Mataji opens and smiles, Prem if you think u r smart I am too smart

When Prem was talking to his friends to do marriage arrangements Mataji might have listened

Mataji: I know Prem you went to do marriage with Surbhi so only I acted as if I got Heart Attack so that you will come back without doing marriage. I know its wrong way but it's necessary because only Simar is correct for you and she is the whom you can stay happy with. Now you may feel bad but later u will understand and she drifts to sleep

Prem goes to his room and thinks now I need to marry Simar and what about Surbhi

Prem2 is his soul

Prem2: Don't worry about Surbhi just marry Simar she is only correct for you

Prem1: No I am sure Surbhi is correct for me and I love her she too loves me

Prem2: Its not love just you are attracted to her and she is a nice friend

Prem1: What attracted I am not any teenager to get attracted and all I know the difference.

Prem2: How are you thinking you love Surbhi?

Prem1: I know I love her tats it

Prem2: You have any reasons to love her

Prem1: Ya obviously any one will have reasons she is good looking she studied well and from a nice family

Prem2: Simar also has all the qualities right then why don't you love her

Prem1: Silent

Prem2: Love should happen without any reasons and when your soul mate enters your life it will happen to you as well and your soul mate is Simar

Prem1: Simar I don't like her at all. I hate her

Prem2: If you don't like her then why are you thinking about her

Prem1: I am not thinking about her. Why I will think about her I don't want to see her face also

Prem2: I am ur soul I know whom you are thinking about more than you. Some where you like her(Simar)

Prem1: No no... I hate her(Simar). If I marry also I will never love her

Prem2: Don't worry you marry her you will fall in love with her she also said the same thing right

Prem1: Shouts I hate her.. You leave from here

Prem falls on bed with frustration and closes eyes

Simar: Prem ji what are you doing? R u thinking about me?

Prem: Don't know what is happening in my life I only can't understand I am saying I love Surbhi and everyone are saying you are correct for me including my soul

Simar: May be what everyone are saying is right

Prem: But I don't like you

Simar: I am there right so don't worry one or the other day you will love me as well and your life will be too good as we are made for each other

Prem: Don't say these words I am fed up with Soul mate, made for each other and all

Simar: Ok Ok don't get angry then she kisses him on his cheeks suddenly Prem falls down from bed

Prem: He searches total room and keeps his hand on cheeks.

Prem what happened to you why are you thinking about her in your dream also. I think you became mental so only you are thinking about her go and get ready other wise you will become totally mental and he leaves from there.


haha this part is funny i mean prem nd his soul...prem imagining simar is romantic😉
dear y prem hate simar...it will nice if u write he dont like her..a small correction, rest is awesome😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Asha122

It takes time may be after 5 more parts... It will be love hate relationship starting... And simar ll not be crying more as well in my story...


its nice 2 see simar caring for prem😛 nd nt a crying simar...welldone asha👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice job Asha
Plzzz update it soon
I am waiting to read next

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Asha122

Note: Pls ignore if any mistakes. Enjoy reading...Please Provide ur comments as they are valuable for me.


PART 7:

Morning:

Divedi House:

Simar: Gets up takes Prem Photo says Good Morning Prem ji and Kisses his photo

Roli: To whom are you saying Good mrng didi

Simar: To you only

Roli: Wow by kissing you are saying Good mrng to my photo great. Don't lie to me I know you are saying good mrng to jiju right I know very well about you

Simar: I know I can't lie to you ya I said to your Jiju only ab khush

Jamuna calls simar

Jamuna: Simar beta just now I got call from Mataji they said ok for marriage but marriage will be tomorrow itself in Delhi due to some problem. I said ok so we need to start to delhi so pack everything

Simar: Ok Papa

Bharadwaj House:

Everyone asks Mataji why do you want to do marriage tomorrow itself we can see date and do right

Mataji: My decision is final marriage will happen tomorrow itself in temple it final no more arguments regarding it. Prem do you have any problem

Prem: Whatever it is I need to do marriage if its tomorrow itself whats the matter.

Rajendher: Ok then Mataji I will do arrangements

Mataji: By afternoon simar family also will come do arrangements

Rajendher: Ok Mataji

Simar's family will start from Vridhavan simar feels emotional while leaving

Here in Delhi

Surbhi: Prem whats this you are going to marry her by leaving me

Prem: I am sorry Surbhi I can't risk Mataji life for me she is important

Surbhi: Then what about our love?

Prem: In India there are many failure love stories among them one is ours

Surbhi: No prem I cannot live without you

Prem: Surbhi please try to understand I cannot go against my family I am sorry and he leaves from there

Surbhi: I will never leave you Prem. I love you. You want to come back to me

Simar's family reaches Delhi Siddanth comes to receive them and takes them to their guest house

Roli and Siddanth mingles with each other nicely

Jamuna reaches Bharadwaj house to talk with Mataji as she called him

Mataji: Jamuna I thought to do marriage of Siddanth with Roli. What is ur opinion. I will be happy if you say ok as both ur daughters will come to my home

Jamuna: Mataji I have no problem but once I will ask Roli and let u know an what abt Siddanth

Mataji: Siddanth are you ready to marry Roli?

Siddanth: Ya Mataji

Mataji: Ok u ask Roli and let me know we can do both marriages at a time

Jamuna says ok and leaves.

Jamuna says everything to roli and family members everyone are happy with it and they say Ok for Roli marriage

NEXT DAY:

Premar and Rosid are getting ready whereas Prem is not at all interested

After getting ready by seeing no one is there Prem goes to Simar room to talk with her

Prem: I am saying you again back out from this marriage otherwise you will face difficulties with me

Simar: Don't worry Prem ji you too should face difficulties with me so if you are ready I am also ready

Prem is about leave. Simar calls him

Simar: Prem ji you are looking handsome

Prem: You are looking like a devil for me

Simar: Wow really Thank you until now everyone said I am looking good but u r the one who read my heart and said truth I was also feeling same by wearing all this Jewellery. So, only Prem ji I LOVE YOU a lot

Prem leaves angrily & Simar smiles

Finally marriage of Premar and Rosid is completed (Note: I am not giving detail update of marriage as Prem is not interested here. Once he loves Simar again I will show their marriage)

They reach home and grahpravesh also completed and everyone retires to their room.

PREMAR ROOM:

Prem and Simar enters the room. Simar thinks to fresh up

Simar: Prem ji can you please go out I want to change my dress

Prem: I wont go out this is my room why should I if you want go and change in some other room

Simar: Ok then for me no problem I will change here itself

Prem: What?

Simar: Ya either you go out or else I will change here only

Prem: Do you any have sense?

Simar: Prem ji any way you are my husband so no problem for me. Ok then I will change

Prem: Hey wait I know you are mental but I don't want to become mental change quickly he says and goes out

After sometime Simar opens door and Prem comes in

Prem goes to fresh up and Simar starts arranging her sarees in cupboard

Prem comes and asks what are you doing

Simar: Until now I thought you don't have only brain now its confirmed you don't have eyes also

Prem: Don't think you are too smart I m asking why are you keeping sarees in my cupboard

Simar starts searching something.

Prem asks what are you searching for

Simar: Your name

Simar: You only said its yours so I am searching if your name is there

Prem: Good joke but I didn't get laugh

Simar: I know becoz you are not human only so how you will get laugh

Prem: whatever I don't want to argue with mental people and increase my head ache I am going to sleep.

After arranging Simar comes and sleeps on bed

Prem: Oye what are you doing here

Simar: Counting stars

Prem: Can't you give proper answer

Simar: Your question is like that. Everyone will sleep on bed I am also doing same

Prem: See I can't share bed with you

Simar: Ok then you sleep on coach

Prem: What? I am staying in this room from many years you came today and asking me to sleep on coach

Simar: So what from now on wards this is my room also so I have equal rights as you and she shows her mangalsutra. If you can't share bed with me you can sleep either on coach or on floor and she turns to sleep

Prem: You say you love me Is this the way to behave with your husband

Simar: You too say you love me then we can be like very Romantic couple

Prem: I hate you

Simar: You hate me right say atleast that properly

Prem: Shouts I Hate You ... Is it enough?

Simar: Thank you Prem ji

Prem: I said I Hate You why are you feeling happy

Simar: Hate is also one kind of emotion if you hate me some or the other way you are thinking about me so one or the other day that hate will turn to love and she kisses on his cheeks by saying Good night and sleeps

Prem is dumbstruck and not able to understand what happened so pinches himself and shouts. How dare she to kiss me ..

He calls Simar Simar and asks her to get up.. But she wont get up as she is sleeping

Ok I will deal withyou tomorrow

Prem takes pillows keeps in between them and turns to sleep.

Simar opens her eyes and smiles by seeing Prem and then sleeps.


this is the best part...
awesome
i cant control my laugh while reading premar conv...simar answers nd prem Q r awesome
thank u dear...really loved it...
2day i had seen a new simar...lve this kind of simar
nd that kiss...just love it❤️
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Originally posted by: Asha122

Here is the next part .Hope i reached to your expectations. Pls give your comments

PART 8:

Morning:

Simar gets up and goes to take bath while Prem is still sleeping

After taking bath she is drying her hair and the water droplets fall on prem because of which he opens his eyes and is mesmerized by the sight infront of him

Simar wore orange saree and she is looking divine. Prem is unable to take his eyes of her and he is seeing her with mouth wide open

Simar sees Prem from mirror goes to him and shouts in his ear Prem Ji

Prem comes to world and asks are you mad why are you shouting

Simar: Actually I thought to save some mosquitoes from you

Prem: Kya?

Simar: I know I am looking beautiful but because of that you should not kill mosquitoes by opening your mouth.

Prem: Don't you have any proper answer for my questions

Simar: What to do you will ask the questions which I don't have proper answer. So, next time onwards ask the question which I have proper answer

Prem: Idiot

Simar: Wow I Love you too

Prem: Its confirmed you are mental I said Idiot and what are you saying

Simar: Are Prem ji do you know the meaning of IDIOT it means "I DO Ishq Only Thumse" which means you love me so I said I love you too

Prem: No no I didn't mean it and its cheating

Simar: No u r cheating

Both will be quarelling suddenly Prem stops quarelling and starts sweating. Simar gets tensed and asks what happened. He shows wall and she starts laughing

Simar: Very famous and talented business man is scared of lizards wow it's a great opportunity

Prem: Don't joke I am really afraid of them

Simar: Ok wait I will take from wall and give it to you

Saying so Simar climbs on bed and starts to act as if she is going to catch lizard Prem gets afraid and pulls Simar but both looses balance and falls on bed. Simar falls above prem and both are lost in each others eyes but prem is getting irritated as Simar's hair is disturbing his view so he tucks hair behind her ear and says beautiful. Simar blushes

They come to senses by hearing someone knock on door. Simar moves to open the door and prem goes to fresh up.

Sujatha: Simar beta are you ready then come for pooja

Simar: Ya maaji I am ready lets go

They go down Mataji asks Simar and Roli to do pooja

In Premar Room:

While getting ready Prem thinks if maa didn't come on time don't know what might have happened

I think she knows some magic whatever it is she looks beautiful. Prem control otherwise what she said will become true and you may start loving her so be far from her that's better.

Same time Hall:

After Pooja some servant will be taking clothes to give to poor people Sujatha will see one blue shirt and ask him to give that

Sujatha: Mataji I gave it as gift to Prem for his birthday since Surbhi won't like he stopped wearing though his favorite color is blue

Pari: Maa you know na he loves Surbhi and he won't go against her wish then also you made him to marry someone else

Mataji: Pari don't talk much I know what's right and what not

All this is heard by Simar she says maa you don't worry today Prem ji will wear this shirt only she takes the shirt and moves upstairs

Pari: He will not wear it

Simar: Bhabhi give me 10 mins then you see

Premar Room:

Simar(ST): Enters room, now how to convince him he won't listen my words. When People won't listen you should go in there way and make them do it. You can do it Simar go ahead

Prem: He sees Simar and asks why did you bring this shirt here

Simar: Prem ji Maaji said your favorite color is blue, you love to wear it

Before he says something

Simar: I know Prem ji you don't want to wear this shirt as I won't like blue I said same to maaji but she said you will wear because you won't change your decision for me. So I challenged with maaji and came that you will not wear this shirt. So, please don't wear

Prem: Who are you to say what I should wear. Give that shirt I like blue and it's my favorite saying that he takes the shirt and wears it

Simar smiles. Prem asks why you are smiling. Don't think in your dream also I will do something for you and I will not change for you understand because I hate you

Simar: But I LOVE YOU Prem ji so you no need to do anything for me, you too don't change yourself for anyone as the ones who love you will love you for how you are itself by saying so she leaves

Prem starts thinking but he gets interrupted by a call

Simar goes down

Pari: What happened? He said he won't wear. I know he won't listen to anyone

Jhanvi: Maa see there

Everyone gets shocked to see Prem wearing blue shirt

Pari: Prem how come you are wearing blue shirt

Prem: Bhabhi my favorite color is blue so what's there if I wear it

Mataji: Ok now let's have breakfast

Everyone goes to have breakfast

Simar and Roli are serving breakfast to everyone suddenly Pari interrupts Simar

Pari: Simar Prem won't eat Poha I think so you don't know so you prepared it

Simar is about take her hand back, Prem catches her hand

Prem: No Bhabhi I like Poha so I will eat and signals Simar to serve

Jhanvi: Prem bhaiyya what happened to you from morning you are giving shocks. Is it real or am I hallucinating?

Prem pinches her hand Jhanvi shouts. Now it's confirmed you are not hallucinating. Everyone laughs and completes breakfast

All gents leave for office where as all ladies goes to do their work.


1st part of the epi. is sooo romantic...loved simar intelligence in wearing...eagerly waiting hw prem will fall in her love...
dear i hope tr will be some twist in surbi love ie fake love...nd want prem 2 gv tight slap 2 her
didnt watch those scenes in ssk...atleast i will be glad 2 watch that in ur beautiful FF😛

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