PREMAR FF: Destined to be together -- Updated Pt 27 on Pg 36

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Anu0517

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Posted: 10 years ago

Hey guys,

I am going to write an OS on PREMAR and i am posting part 1 pls suggest whether i need to continue or not.

All characters are same but surbhi also will be present.

All of you need to bear surbhi as well

Note: first time i m writing pls ignore if any mistakes

Edited by Asha122 - 10 years ago

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Anu0517

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Posted: 10 years ago

Index:

Pt1 - Pg1

Pt2 - Pg2

Pt3, Pt4, Pt5 - Pg3

Pt6 - Pg4

Pt7, Pt8 - Pg5

Pt9 , Pt10 - Pg6

Pt11 - Pg8

Pt12 - Pg9

Pt13 - Pg11

Pt14 - Pg13

Pt17 - P9 19

Pt18 - Pg20

Pt19 - Pg24

Pt20 - Pg25

Pt21 - Pg27

Pt22 - Pg28

Pt23 - Pg30

Pt24 & Pt25 -- Pg32

Pt26 -- Pg34

Pt27 -- Pg36

Edited by Asha122 - 10 years ago

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Anu0517

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Posted: 10 years ago

Note: Here is the first part. If any mistakes pls ignore and pls let me know if i need to continue or not

Bharadwaj House:

A lady is sitting on sofa and waiting for Panditji. Panditji arrives and greets her Namaste MATAJI

Mataji: Namaste Panditji please sit

Panditji: Mataji as you said i got photos of girls please see them

Mataji: Ok panditji we will see and let you know

Panditji leaves

Sujatha: Mataji for whom you are searching girl Prem or Siddanth

Mataji: For Prem

Rajendher: Mataji but Prem said he love some girl

Karuna: Ya Mataji she is Pari's sister we know her very well. It will be good if we make them marry

Mataji: I know whats good and whats not for PREM so u ppl do as i say and no more arguments and go do ur work

VRINDAVAN:

Divedi house:

A girl is singing bhajan all comes to attend pooja after listening to bhajan and the girl is none other than Simar.

Jamuna: Simar beta bhajan bahuth acha gaya thumne dil kush kardiya..

Simar smiles and leaves to her room to wake roli

Roli get up its late already u need to go college

Roli: Didi i think ur mind is not working properly today is sunday no college

Simar: What no its Monday today now dont play games get up.

Roli: Pls didi 5 min

Simar: No wait not like this and she throws mug full of water on roli face

Roli: Didi wait i wont leave you and runs behind simar

some how Simar throws her inside bathroom to get ready and she leaves for school. She will be working as teacher

Later in the Evening some HOTEL:

A guy comes on bike with girl on his back along with his friends to party its none other than PREM and the girl who is on back side is Surbhi

Prem along with his friends will be enjoying the party

After party

Surbhi: Prem pls talk to your mataji so that we can marry

Prem: Dont worry surbhi everyone in home know our matter and you are pari babhi sister as well so no one will say no to our marraige

Surbhi: Are u sure Prem?

Prem: Yes

Surbhi: I love you Prem i can't loose u..

Prem: I too love you surbhi dont worry no one can come in between us.

At the same time Simar face is shown. Let us see what destiny has in store for them

Edited by Asha122 - 10 years ago

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Premarlove455

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Posted: 10 years ago

Wow!! Interesting dear
Keep updating
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Anu0517

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Premarlove455
Wow!! Interesting dear
Keep updating
❤️

Happy u loved it

i had a fear whether it will be nice or not as i m writing for first time...

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Premarlove455

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Asha122

Happy u loved it

i had a fear whether it will be nice or not as i m writing for first time...

But I loving it
😛

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Anu0517

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Premarlove455

But I loving it
😛

Thank you dear 😊

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Premarlove455

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Asha122

Thank you dear😊

U r most welcome dear 😛

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Vassu_123

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Posted: 10 years ago

hey dear 1st of congrats nd thank u for writing 1st premar FF...

coming 2 ur FF 1st of i was shocked the story begins with prem loving surbi😲 butim sure somthing is instore btw prem nd simar...i hope u will show a true love...

different story...plzz continue..interesting😉

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Anu0517

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: Vassu_123
hey dear 1st of congrats nd thank u for writing 1st premar FF...
coming 2 ur FF 1st of i was shocked the story begins with prem loving surbi😲 butim sure somthing is instore btw prem nd simar...i hope u will show a true love...
different story...plzz continue..interesting😉

Thank you yar... 😊

I thought to try differently...

Ya finally PREMAR r destined to be together...