PREMAR FF: Destined to be together -- Updated Pt 27 on Pg 36 - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: Premarlove455

Interesting nice :)
Just waiting to see prem reaction when he fall in love
And prem and Simar story.

It takes time may be after 5 more parts... It will be love hate relationship starting... And simar ll not be crying more as well in my story...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Asha122


It takes time may be after 5 more parts... It will be love hate relationship starting... And simar ll not be crying more as well in my story...


Oh wow !!
Interesting waiting to read their love hate relationship

I love story where is love hate story
But can't stand PreMar separated

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Premarlove455


Oh wow !!
Interesting waiting to read their love hate relationship

I love story where is love hate story
But can't stand PreMar separated

dont worry i wont seperate them what ever it is...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Asha122


dont worry i wont seperate them what ever it is...


Yes dear I know u won't
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Note: Pls ignore if any mistakes. Enjoy reading...Please Provide ur comments as they are valuable for me.


PART 7:

Morning:

Divedi House:

Simar: Gets up takes Prem Photo says Good Morning Prem ji and Kisses his photo

Roli: To whom are you saying Good mrng didi

Simar: To you only

Roli: Wow by kissing you are saying Good mrng to my photo great. Don't lie to me I know you are saying good mrng to jiju right I know very well about you

Simar: I know I can't lie to you ya I said to your Jiju only ab khush

Jamuna calls simar

Jamuna: Simar beta just now I got call from Mataji they said ok for marriage but marriage will be tomorrow itself in Delhi due to some problem. I said ok so we need to start to delhi so pack everything

Simar: Ok Papa

Bharadwaj House:

Everyone asks Mataji why do you want to do marriage tomorrow itself we can see date and do right

Mataji: My decision is final marriage will happen tomorrow itself in temple it final no more arguments regarding it. Prem do you have any problem

Prem: Whatever it is I need to do marriage if its tomorrow itself whats the matter.

Rajendher: Ok then Mataji I will do arrangements

Mataji: By afternoon simar family also will come do arrangements

Rajendher: Ok Mataji

Simar's family will start from Vridhavan simar feels emotional while leaving

Here in Delhi

Surbhi: Prem whats this you are going to marry her by leaving me

Prem: I am sorry Surbhi I can't risk Mataji life for me she is important

Surbhi: Then what about our love?

Prem: In India there are many failure love stories among them one is ours

Surbhi: No prem I cannot live without you

Prem: Surbhi please try to understand I cannot go against my family I am sorry and he leaves from there

Surbhi: I will never leave you Prem. I love you. You want to come back to me

Simar's family reaches Delhi Siddanth comes to receive them and takes them to their guest house

Roli and Siddanth mingles with each other nicely

Jamuna reaches Bharadwaj house to talk with Mataji as she called him

Mataji: Jamuna I thought to do marriage of Siddanth with Roli. What is ur opinion. I will be happy if you say ok as both ur daughters will come to my home

Jamuna: Mataji I have no problem but once I will ask Roli and let u know an what abt Siddanth

Mataji: Siddanth are you ready to marry Roli?

Siddanth: Ya Mataji

Mataji: Ok u ask Roli and let me know we can do both marriages at a time

Jamuna says ok and leaves.

Jamuna says everything to roli and family members everyone are happy with it and they say Ok for Roli marriage

NEXT DAY:

Premar and Rosid are getting ready whereas Prem is not at all interested

After getting ready by seeing no one is there Prem goes to Simar room to talk with her

Prem: I am saying you again back out from this marriage otherwise you will face difficulties with me

Simar: Don't worry Prem ji you too should face difficulties with me so if you are ready I am also ready

Prem is about leave. Simar calls him

Simar: Prem ji you are looking handsome

Prem: You are looking like a devil for me

Simar: Wow really Thank you until now everyone said I am looking good but u r the one who read my heart and said truth I was also feeling same by wearing all this Jewellery. So, only Prem ji I LOVE YOU a lot

Prem leaves angrily & Simar smiles

Finally marriage of Premar and Rosid is completed (Note: I am not giving detail update of marriage as Prem is not interested here. Once he loves Simar again I will show their marriage)

They reach home and grahpravesh also completed and everyone retires to their room.

PREMAR ROOM:

Prem and Simar enters the room. Simar thinks to fresh up

Simar: Prem ji can you please go out I want to change my dress

Prem: I wont go out this is my room why should I if you want go and change in some other room

Simar: Ok then for me no problem I will change here itself

Prem: What?

Simar: Ya either you go out or else I will change here only

Prem: Do you any have sense?

Simar: Prem ji any way you are my husband so no problem for me. Ok then I will change

Prem: Hey wait I know you are mental but I don't want to become mental change quickly he says and goes out

After sometime Simar opens door and Prem comes in

Prem goes to fresh up and Simar starts arranging her sarees in cupboard

Prem comes and asks what are you doing

Simar: Until now I thought you don't have only brain now its confirmed you don't have eyes also

Prem: Don't think you are too smart I m asking why are you keeping sarees in my cupboard

Simar starts searching something.

Prem asks what are you searching for

Simar: Your name

Simar: You only said its yours so I am searching if your name is there

Prem: Good joke but I didn't get laugh

Simar: I know becoz you are not human only so how you will get laugh

Prem: whatever I don't want to argue with mental people and increase my head ache I am going to sleep.

After arranging Simar comes and sleeps on bed

Prem: Oye what are you doing here

Simar: Counting stars

Prem: Can't you give proper answer

Simar: Your question is like that. Everyone will sleep on bed I am also doing same

Prem: See I can't share bed with you

Simar: Ok then you sleep on coach

Prem: What? I am staying in this room from many years you came today and asking me to sleep on coach

Simar: So what from now on wards this is my room also so I have equal rights as you and she shows her mangalsutra. If you can't share bed with me you can sleep either on coach or on floor and she turns to sleep

Prem: You say you love me Is this the way to behave with your husband

Simar: You too say you love me then we can be like very Romantic couple

Prem: I hate you

Simar: You hate me right say atleast that properly

Prem: Shouts I Hate You ... Is it enough?

Simar: Thank you Prem ji

Prem: I said I Hate You why are you feeling happy

Simar: Hate is also one kind of emotion if you hate me some or the other way you are thinking about me so one or the other day that hate will turn to love and she kisses on his cheeks by saying Good night and sleeps

Prem is dumbstruck and not able to understand what happened so pinches himself and shouts. How dare she to kiss me ..

He calls Simar Simar and asks her to get up.. But she wont get up as she is sleeping

Ok I will deal withyou tomorrow

Prem takes pillows keeps in between them and turns to sleep.

Simar opens her eyes and smiles by seeing Prem and then sleeps.

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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
So good
Really love it
There r some of the scenes r funny
Like "You are looking like a devil for me" poor Simar
Also like how prem says it's my cupboard and Simar start search his name.
Keep it up
Awesome waiting for ch.8
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Here is the next part .Hope i reached to your expectations. Pls give your comments

PART 8:

Morning:

Simar gets up and goes to take bath while Prem is still sleeping

After taking bath she is drying her hair and the water droplets fall on prem because of which he opens his eyes and is mesmerized by the sight infront of him

Simar wore orange saree and she is looking divine. Prem is unable to take his eyes of her and he is seeing her with mouth wide open

Simar sees Prem from mirror goes to him and shouts in his ear Prem Ji

Prem comes to world and asks are you mad why are you shouting

Simar: Actually I thought to save some mosquitoes from you

Prem: Kya?

Simar: I know I am looking beautiful but because of that you should not kill mosquitoes by opening your mouth.

Prem: Don't you have any proper answer for my questions

Simar: What to do you will ask the questions which I don't have proper answer. So, next time onwards ask the question which I have proper answer

Prem: Idiot

Simar: Wow I Love you too

Prem: Its confirmed you are mental I said Idiot and what are you saying

Simar: Are Prem ji do you know the meaning of IDIOT it means "I DO Ishq Only Thumse" which means you love me so I said I love you too

Prem: No no I didn't mean it and its cheating

Simar: No u r cheating

Both will be quarelling suddenly Prem stops quarelling and starts sweating. Simar gets tensed and asks what happened. He shows wall and she starts laughing

Simar: Very famous and talented business man is scared of lizards wow it's a great opportunity

Prem: Don't joke I am really afraid of them

Simar: Ok wait I will take from wall and give it to you

Saying so Simar climbs on bed and starts to act as if she is going to catch lizard Prem gets afraid and pulls Simar but both looses balance and falls on bed. Simar falls above prem and both are lost in each others eyes but prem is getting irritated as Simar's hair is disturbing his view so he tucks hair behind her ear and says beautiful. Simar blushes

They come to senses by hearing someone knock on door. Simar moves to open the door and prem goes to fresh up.

Sujatha: Simar beta are you ready then come for pooja

Simar: Ya maaji I am ready lets go

They go down Mataji asks Simar and Roli to do pooja

In Premar Room:

While getting ready Prem thinks if maa didn't come on time don't know what might have happened

I think she knows some magic whatever it is she looks beautiful. Prem control otherwise what she said will become true and you may start loving her so be far from her that's better.

Same time Hall:

After Pooja some servant will be taking clothes to give to poor people Sujatha will see one blue shirt and ask him to give that

Sujatha: Mataji I gave it as gift to Prem for his birthday since Surbhi won't like he stopped wearing though his favorite color is blue

Pari: Maa you know na he loves Surbhi and he won't go against her wish then also you made him to marry someone else

Mataji: Pari don't talk much I know what's right and what not

All this is heard by Simar she says maa you don't worry today Prem ji will wear this shirt only she takes the shirt and moves upstairs

Pari: He will not wear it

Simar: Bhabhi give me 10 mins then you see

Premar Room:

Simar(ST): Enters room, now how to convince him he won't listen my words. When People won't listen you should go in there way and make them do it. You can do it Simar go ahead

Prem: He sees Simar and asks why did you bring this shirt here

Simar: Prem ji Maaji said your favorite color is blue, you love to wear it

Before he says something

Simar: I know Prem ji you don't want to wear this shirt as I won't like blue I said same to maaji but she said you will wear because you won't change your decision for me. So I challenged with maaji and came that you will not wear this shirt. So, please don't wear

Prem: Who are you to say what I should wear. Give that shirt I like blue and it's my favorite saying that he takes the shirt and wears it

Simar smiles. Prem asks why you are smiling. Don't think in your dream also I will do something for you and I will not change for you understand because I hate you

Simar: But I LOVE YOU Prem ji so you no need to do anything for me, you too don't change yourself for anyone as the ones who love you will love you for how you are itself by saying so she leaves

Prem starts thinking but he gets interrupted by a call

Simar goes down

Pari: What happened? He said he won't wear. I know he won't listen to anyone

Jhanvi: Maa see there

Everyone gets shocked to see Prem wearing blue shirt

Pari: Prem how come you are wearing blue shirt

Prem: Bhabhi my favorite color is blue so what's there if I wear it

Mataji: Ok now let's have breakfast

Everyone goes to have breakfast

Simar and Roli are serving breakfast to everyone suddenly Pari interrupts Simar

Pari: Simar Prem won't eat Poha I think so you don't know so you prepared it

Simar is about take her hand back, Prem catches her hand

Prem: No Bhabhi I like Poha so I will eat and signals Simar to serve

Jhanvi: Prem bhaiyya what happened to you from morning you are giving shocks. Is it real or am I hallucinating?

Prem pinches her hand Jhanvi shouts. Now it's confirmed you are not hallucinating. Everyone laughs and completes breakfast

All gents leave for office where as all ladies goes to do their work.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Please update soon!!
Nice waiting for next chapter
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Note: Here is the next part. Pls ignore if any mistakes

PART 9:

In Office:

Prem is doing work suddenly he hears Simar calling Prem ji and he searches for her. But she is not there

Prem (ST): What's this Prem concentrate on work don't think about her. Within one day you started thinking about her how is this possible she did some magic on you so only you started thinking of her

Sankalp shouts Prem in his ear

Prem: What happened why are you shouting?

Sankalp: Bhaiyya I am calling you from Past 5 mins you are not even responding. Whom are you thinking about?

Prem: Don't use ur brain too much I am not thinking about anyone tell what you want

Sankalp: Want signature in this file

Prem (ST): Morning that idiot now this Sankalp. If they shout like this I will become deaf one day. He handovers file to Sankalp he leaves

Afternoon Surbhi comes to Bharadwaj house, Pari introduces her to Simar

Surbhi: So you are the one whom Prem married

Simar: yes

Surbhi: Do you know who I am

Simar: Ya you are the one whom Prem ji loved right

Surbhi: Still he loves me only. So, you better back off from this marriage

Sujatha, Mataji and Mausiji witness this from upstairs and Sujatha thinks to go and stop Surbhi but Mataji stops her to listen what Simar says

Simar: Do you have any proof that still Prem ji loves you

Surbhi: What Proof?

Simar: I know you don't have but I have a proof that we are bonded for rest of our seven births she shows her Mangalsutra and says Prem ji is mine no one can change it

Surbhi: Don't live in dreams. Mark my words today also Prem loves me and I will snatch him from you its my challenge

Simar: Ok let's wait and see what happens

Just then all gents come for lunch

Surbhi goes to prem hugs him and asks how are you?

Prem too hugs her says I am fine and he sees Simar

Simar feels pain but she won't show. Surbhi turns to her and smiles

Everyone comes to hall

Surbhi takes blessings of everyone.

Roli and Simar says Mataji lunch Is ready. So, everyone goes to have lunch where Sankalp comes shouting Prem Bhaiyya

Prem: Why are you shouting morning also you were shouting in office now what happened?

Sankalp: Bhaiyya I know you were thinking about Bhabhi only in office but you no need to prove

Prem: What?

Sankalp: When did u change your name to Simar as you signed Simar in all the places instead of Prem

Prem doesn't understand what to say, everyone try to hide their smiles

Sankalp: Ok bhaiyya you can explain later please sign first as its required urgently

Prem signs and gives the file to Sankalp

Prem (ST): Hey Matarani this Paagal will make me also Paagal one day now what should I say to everyone. God Please help me

Prem: Mataji vo.. Gets interrupted by Prem's phone call.

Prem (ST): God you heard me thank you

Prem: Mataji one minute this call is important and goes to attend call

Everyone smiles by seeing his(Prem) condition. Whereas Surbhi is fuming

Prem comes back and joins them. Everyone completes lunch and are sitting in hall

Mataji: I decided to arrange a reception for both the couples after three days. So, start the preparation for it

Rajendher: Ok Mataji

Outside House Prem & Surbhi talk

Surbhi: Prem you know I don't like blue then why you wore it

Prem: If you want to talk about my shirt then come we will go inside

Surbhi: Ok leave it. Prem I know you are not happy with this marriage so take divorce from her so that we can marry

Prem: Are in ur senses? Listen Surbhi though I don't love Simar I can't take this step because my family members Love her. If I take this step Mataji will be affected a lot I can't take risk

Surbhi: What about us?

Prem: I don't have hope on us you too forget me, start new life and he gets interrupted by call so he leaves

Simar listened to their conversation but there is no expression on her face

Prem comes inside home and tells everyone that evening some of his friends are coming

Mataji asks her bahu's to do necessary arrangements.

PREMAR ROOM:

Prem enters and he sees Simar that she tied her hair tucked saree pallu in waist and is trying to take something from the above shelf

She was about to loose balance in nick of time Prem comes and catches her both are lost in each other same time Sujatha and Jhanvi enters sees them like that and clears their throat

But still they are in their world. So finally Jhanvi taps Prem.

Prem puts Simar down

Prem: Maa do you want anything

Sujatha: Ha I want something but I think you are busy with that

Prem: I am busy

Sujatha: Ha I want Simar for some time but I think you have work with her

Prem: No maa nothing like that just I was helping you can take her

Sujatha: Simar I asked for clothes did you get them

Simar: Ya Maaji I will get and come

Sujatha says ok and leaves with Jhanvi

Prem: Why were you doing gymnastics?

Simar: You won't do exercise so I thought if you lift me atleast there will be exercise for you so I was trying to do gymnastics

Prem: For my every question you will be having answer but not a proper one

Simar: Smiles and says obviously

Prem: Because of these talks only where ever I go I am remembering you only

Simar: Wow Mr.Prem Bharadwaj it's a miracle

Prem: Please don't give this much respect I can't bear. My friends are coming atleast infront of them don't talk like this to me

Simar: Ok. If I do so what will I get?

Prem: What you want?

Simar: Not now whenever I want I will ask

Prem: Ok Done

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PART 10:

Evening:

Prem friends (Rajeev, Ramesh, Divya, Vijay, and Swathi) arrive and he introduces them to everyone.

They ask about Simar just then Simar comes wearing blue saree prem will be mesmerized and unable to take eyes off from her

Simar comes down. Ramesh introduces himself and others to Simar

Jhanvi goes near Prem and says Bhaiyya Bhabi won't go anywhere she will be with you only so now talk with your friends

Prem comes out of his thoughts while Simar Roli Pari serves snacks to everyone all the elder people retired to their rooms and Surbhi also arrives

Rajeev: Ok then we will play something

Ramesh: First caroms then truth and dare

So teams for caroms Team 1: Prem& Siddanth, Team 2: Rajeev&Vijay where Ramesh is referee

Ramesh: Guys if you want you can change your partners. Whoever looses they should do what winning team says. So who are on Team 1 & Team 2 side?

Surbhi: I am on Team 2. I know Vijay only will win as everytime Vijay only wins with Prem

Simar: That's everytime but this time Prem ji will win

Surbhi: You don't know Prem looses very badly in caroms

Simar: Don't worry I am there with him so definitely he will win

Team 1: Premar, Rosid, Jhanvi, Sankalp

Team 2: Pari, Uma, Sattu, Shailu, Surbhi, Divya, Swathi, Vijay, Rajeev

Ramesh: There are more people in Team 2 anyone can shift to Team 1

But no one is ready. Roli says no problem we are enough

Ok 5 sets game let's see who wins

First two sets Team 2 wins

Surbhi: I said right no one can beat Vijay in caroms only one more we will win

Simar: Don't worry next three we will only win. Siddanth ji I will play instead of you can we replace

Siddanth: Ya sure Simar

Simar starts playing without giving chance to anyone she clears the board. Prem is just watching each and every move of hers, also how she is smiling for each shot he is feeling as if just they both are playing and no one is around them

Similarly Simar plays and wins the game everyone shouts but Surbhi fumes.

Ramesh: Team 1 wins the game

Vijay: Wow Bhabi you played without giving chance to anyone I didn't expect this

Roli: My didi is champion in caroms

Ramesh: Wow that's nice

Prem is still gazing Simar without even blinking. Simar feels his gaze but still she tries to avoid.

Rajeev: Arey Bhai why are you seeing Bhabi like that as if you are going to eat her

Prem: He comes out of his world and says nothing

Ok Team 1 will say what Team 2 should do

Prem: Simar will say because of her we won

All shouts yes

Simar: It's just a game played for fun so no need to do anything

Prem is stunned by her reply as he didn't expect this then he smiles

Ramesh: Ok now truth and dare

Roli gets a bottle and says Bottle ka muh Jiske taraf ayega they should choose truth or dare and back of bottle whom its pointing to should ask question and the person should do that and truth means they should say truth

Everyone says ok

Ramesh Spins the bottle it stops at Vijay and question at Siddanth

Vijay: Before you ask I say truth

Prem: What is this you should take dare

Vijay: Prem u only do dare , if ur back hurts you have Simar bhabi to apply balm but I don't have anyone

Everyone laughs

Prem (ST): He is talking as if I am kuber's wealth with me

Siddanth: Ok say about your dream girl

Vijay: She should be Very supportive, Intelligent, Understanding and Beautiful

Prem: Dream girl won't be available in Flipkart or OLX

Vijay: Yes Bhai you are right. Ok my dream girl should be like Simar Bhabi

Prem didn't feel good but he won't show and he talks slowly that only Simar hears he don't know how your answers will be for my questions so only he is saying like that. Simar smiles.

Vijay Spins the bottle it stops at Prem question at Ramesh

Prem: Dare

Ramesh: Ok then do one romantic dance with Bhabhi

Simar: No. What about song

Siddanth says Don't worry Simar song will be played

A soft song from bodyguard movie starts playing Teri meri meri teri prem kahani hai mushkil

Prem gets up and forwards his hand and asks May I Simar forwards her hand shyly and they actually dances very romantically and are lost in each other that they didn't even notice that song has stopped

Roli goes near Simar and asks Didi Jiju are you hearing any song can you please tell me the song name but there is no reply from them

Roli taps Simar then they notice that song has been stopped. Everyone laughs. Surbhi does not like it.

Vijay spins the bottle it stops at Simar question at Divya

Prem: I know she will choose dare

Simar smiles and says yes

Divya: Ok dedicate two romantic poems to Prem

All at a time asks what except simar

Simar says Ok. Prem is stunned

Simar:

Prem ji it's for you

"Sawal kuch bhi ho, jawab tum hi ho

Rasta koi bhi ho, manzil tum hi ho

Dukh kitna bhi ho, khushi tum hi ho

Arman kitne bhi ho, aarzoo tum hi ho

Gussa kitna bhi ho, pyar tum hi ho,

Khawab koi bhi ho, us me tum hi ho

Kyunki tum hi ho...!! Ab tum hi ho,

Meri ashiqi ab tum hi ho...!!!!!"

Everyone claps and says amazing. Prem not able to understand what to say

Divya: Please Simar one more

Simar: Ok

"Tere pyaar ka sila har haal mein denge,

Khuda bhi maange ye dil toh nikaal denge,

Agar dil ne kaha tum bewafa ho,

Toh is dil ko bhi seene se nikaal denge...!!"

Everyone claps whereas Prem has tears in his eyes but he controls

Prem: Its already late let's have dinner

After completing dinner Prem friends leave and all others retire to their rooms.

Prem is thinking about Simar and without knowing only he drifts to sleep before Simar comes

Simar comes sees him sleeping covers him with blanket and she too drifts to sleep.

Edited by Asha122 - 10 years ago

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