PREMAR FF: Destined to be together -- Updated Pt 27 on Pg 36 - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow
Dear I really love the flashback scenes
How PreMar meets

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Posted: 10 years ago
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That's awesome dear
Thank you so much for make it
First PreMar FF
Beautiful written.


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Really nice FF dear
Do write it soon !!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Premarlove455

Wow
Dear I really love the flashback scenes
How PreMar meets

Nice happy u loved it...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Premar556

That's awesome dear
Thank you so much for make it
First PreMar FF
Beautiful written.


Thank you dear😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: AnjaliSSK

Really nice FF dear
Do write it soon !!

Thank you dear...😊
Ya sure will update by today or tomorrow
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Note: Dont know whether it reached your expectations or not. Because i only not satisfied with this part but anyways posting it. If you want any improvements pls let me know

PART 6:

Starts from temple where Prem and Surbhi will stand up for Saat Phere

Siddanth will be thinking what to do and he thinks may be he is with Rajeev and he thinks to call him

When they are about to take first phere Prem's friend gets a call and he shouts Prem

Prem: What happened Rajeev?

Rajeev: Prem Mataji got heart attack just now Siddanth called and she is asking about you

Prem: What come lets go

Surbhi: Prem then marriage

Prem: Surbhi as of now Mataji is important we can do our marriage later he throws garland on havan kund and leaves

Surbhi gets angry and says why is that one or the other thing is happening everytime whatever it is Prem I LOVE YOU I will get you at any cost.

Prem reaches home and goes to Mataji

Prem: Mataji how are you now? What happened? What did doctor say?

Rajendher: Prem doctor said that its minor attack and he asked us not give to any stress

Prem: Mataji please ek baar aap mujse baat karlejiye muje acha lagega

After sometime Mataji opens eyes and asks prem

Prem: Mataji I am here only

Mataji: I thought without seeing you only I will die

Prem: Please don't say like that I can't bear

Mataji: You all go now I am fine I saw everyone so no problem

Prem: No Mataji I will stay with you here only after some time I will go

Mataji: Ok

After everyone leaves

Mataji: I am very happy to see you. Though I love everyone I love you a little more than all

Prem: I know Mataji I too love you a lot

Mataji: Then will you listen to what I say that too if you think I will do anything after thinking a lot

Prem: Ok Mataji what ever you say I will agree

Mataji: Please marry Simar she is very nice girl

Prem: Ok Mataji as you say

Mataji: Promise

Prem: Promise I will marry Simar

Mataji sleeps and Prem leaves the room

There Simar is relieved and prays to matarani please see that Prem ji is happy and nothing happens to him

After Prem leaves Mataji opens and smiles, Prem if you think u r smart I am too smart

When Prem was talking to his friends to do marriage arrangements Mataji might have listened

Mataji: I know Prem you went to do marriage with Surbhi so only I acted as if I got Heart Attack so that you will come back without doing marriage. I know its wrong way but it's necessary because only Simar is correct for you and she is the whom you can stay happy with. Now you may feel bad but later u will understand and she drifts to sleep

Prem goes to his room and thinks now I need to marry Simar and what about Surbhi

Prem2 is his soul

Prem2: Don't worry about Surbhi just marry Simar she is only correct for you

Prem1: No I am sure Surbhi is correct for me and I love her she too loves me

Prem2: Its not love just you are attracted to her and she is a nice friend

Prem1: What attracted I am not any teenager to get attracted and all I know the difference.

Prem2: How are you thinking you love Surbhi?

Prem1: I know I love her tats it

Prem2: You have any reasons to love her

Prem1: Ya obviously any one will have reasons she is good looking she studied well and from a nice family

Prem2: Simar also has all the qualities right then why don't you love her

Prem1: Silent

Prem2: Love should happen without any reasons and when your soul mate enters your life it will happen to you as well and your soul mate is Simar

Prem1: Simar I don't like her at all. I hate her

Prem2: If you don't like her then why are you thinking about her

Prem1: I am not thinking about her. Why I will think about her I don't want to see her face also

Prem2: I am ur soul I know whom you are thinking about more than you. Some where you like her(Simar)

Prem1: No no... I hate her(Simar). If I marry also I will never love her

Prem2: Don't worry you marry her you will fall in love with her she also said the same thing right

Prem1: Shouts I hate her.. You leave from here

Prem falls on bed with frustration and closes eyes

Simar: Prem ji what are you doing? R u thinking about me?

Prem: Don't know what is happening in my life I only can't understand I am saying I love Surbhi and everyone are saying you are correct for me including my soul

Simar: May be what everyone are saying is right

Prem: But I don't like you

Simar: I am there right so don't worry one or the other day you will love me as well and your life will be too good as we are made for each other

Prem: Don't say these words I am fed up with Soul mate, made for each other and all

Simar: Ok Ok don't get angry then she kisses him on his cheeks suddenly Prem falls down from bed

Prem: He searches total room and keeps his hand on cheeks.

Prem what happened to you why are you thinking about her in your dream also. I think you became mental so only you are thinking about her go and get ready other wise you will become totally mental and he leaves from there.

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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
Interesting nice :)
Just waiting to see prem reaction when he fall in love
And prem and Simar story.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
Superb first Premar FF story written Asha

Plz continue soon !!


👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
Me too love PreMar flashback scene ❤️

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