PREMAR FF: Destined to be together -- Updated Pt 27 on Pg 36 - Page 6

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Posted: 10 years ago
#51
part 9 is sooo nice nt c=the convo gymnastics nd excercise convo is funny...nice part...nd the ans given by prem to surbi is awesome😛
love this part
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Posted: 10 years ago
#52
part 10 is awesome...romantic dance nd romantic poems...u hav shown beautiful premar❤️ nd all this infront of surbi is mindblowing...i just imagining...😛
nice parts asha 👏
thank u sooo much😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53
Thank you for ur valuable comments it means a lot to me.. I ll update by today evng or tomorrow as I am little busy for today
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Posted: 10 years ago
#54
i was late to read this FF due 2 pongal celebrations bt im sure i had given all my views on all the parts...i hope love had blossomed btw prem nd simar...eagerly waiting for next part...
i think surbi might keep sm tiff btw our premar😕 bt want prem 2 support simar😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Asha122

Thank you for ur valuable comments it means a lot to me.. I ll update by today evng or tomorrow as I am little busy for today


sure...waiting for that😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Vassu_123

i was late to read this FF due 2 pongal celebrations bt im sure i had given all my views on all the parts...i hope love had blossomed btw prem nd simar...eagerly waiting for next part...

i think surbi might keep sm tiff btw our premar😕bt want prem 2 support simar😉


No problem yar u read and gave ur feedback its enough as it means a lot for me to know how to continue...
thank you...
😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#57
one word i gv to this FF "superbbb"
nd the abbr u had given 2 Idiot is sooo nice...😛
plzz continue this
want 2 see sm more funny conversation btw premar😉
also romantic scenes😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Note: Here is the next part. I am updating through mobile ignore if any mistakes. Please provide ur feedback


PART 11:

Morning:

Simar will be getting ready where prem will be acting as if he sleeping. Simar too notices it but she won't disturb him and leaves

After she leaves Prem opens his eyes.

Prem (ST): I am not able to understand what am I thinking.. Now a days only she (Simar) is in my mind. Do I love her? If so then what about surbhi is it attraction? Until now I was not so confused in any matter as I am now. God please show some way.

But what ever if I am with Simar I can be myself. He smiles and goes to get ready.

During Breakfast:

Siddanth: Mataji can we go for picnic?

Mataji: No I arranged Reception for you two couples after two days

Siddanth: Mataji please we can postpone it as we didn't invite anyone and we didn't start preparations also.

Jhanvi: Ya Mataji we will go.

Everyone asks so finally Mataji says ok

Rajendher: Prem see some nice resort and book it

Prem: Ok Papa

Prem gets a call and he says ok I am coming

Mataji: What happened Prem?

Prem: Mataji its about one project we need to submit a report and based on that contract will be given. Its very important for our company and now the meeting is preponed its in one hour I need to leave now.
He takes blessings from Mataji and leaves to room to get his bag.

Premar Room:

Simar comes and asks him to check bag once whether the file is there

Prem: He says dont worry I have it

Simar: Don't worry Prem ji contract will be yours. ALL THE BEST

Prem: Thank you. He leaves

Simar (ST): He don't know to smile also first I should teach him how to smile

She will be cleaning room and finds the file. She thinks this was the file he was working means its file related to contract. I asked him to check but he didn't now see he forgot.

She leaves to give file to Prem as there is less time

Some hotel:

Prem is not able to find file.

Prem (ST): How can I forget file now I can't go and get as well only 20 min is left. I lost it I should have listened to Simar.

Manager comes to know this calls Rajendher and tells him
Mataji asks rajendher wat happened?

Rajendher : Mataji we may loose the contract as prem forgot file. He will be upset as this was his dream

Mataji : Now we can't do anything leave it on god everything will be fine.

Simar reaches the venue but security won't allow her

Simar: Do u know who am I ?

Security: No

Simar: Do u know prem bharadwaj?

Security: Ya he is here

Simar: I am his girlfriend we fought so he is angry I want to see him and talk to clear everything otherwise he will scold you and he is expert in that so you allow me so that he will not scold

Security: I understand mam but if I allow then also I will get scoldings

Simar: Ok then you give this cover and flower to him

Security: Ok mam

He gives to prem he asks what is it.?

Security: Sir take this and forgive mam

Prem: which mam

Security: Ur girlfriend

Prem: What and he starts scolding.

Security: sir please take this cover and he leaves

Prem opens the cover and sees it's file and opens the letter

Simar: So only you should listen to your wife. Anyways don't worry u ll get the contract. ALL THE BEST MY DEAR HUBBY

He takes the rose smiles

Prem (St): Paagal she didn't leave security also so sad he got scoldings from me. Meeting completes and Prem gets the contract

He goes home and will enter calmly

Mataji: Don't worry Prem if not this we ll get another one

Prem: He laughs and says we got contract

Everyone smiles. Rajendher asks how ?

Prem: I forgot file but simar got it on time. So, we got it.

Everyone feels happy and uma goes to bring sweets.

Prem: Maa where is Simar?

Sujatha: She is in room

Ok he says and leaves to room

PREMAR ROOM :

Simar is sitting on bed and listening to songs

Prem (St): Enters sees her. Really she is amazing if she is there with me I need not to worry about anything.

Simar sees Prem and asks him why r u seeing like that..?

Prem: Thank you

Simar: For what?

Prem: Because of you we got contract Thank you so much it's my dream

Simar immediately goes near window and will be seeing outside

Prem: What happened why are you seeing outside

Simar: I thought its raining

Prem: Why?

Simar: You said me thanks whole heartedly so obviously it should rain rgt its a miracle for me

Prem: Don't think too much because of u we got this contract tell me what you want

Simar: Not now I ll ask when I want.

Prem: Ok

Midnight @1 simar gets up

Simar: Premji pls get up

Prem: What happened y r u waking me at this time

Simar: Pls get up its urgent

Prem gets up and asks what happened any problem

Simar: Ha I want to eat panipuri

Prem: Are you mad?

Simar: I want to eat if not I won't sleep I will not let you sleep its final

Prem: Ok come we will go

Simar: She will hug prem and says thanks

Before he hug she will move back.

They leave to have panipuri

Simar will be seeing out and enjoying the view

Prem will be driving but from the corner of eyes he ll be seeing simar and will be having smile on his lips.

Prem: From past one hour we are roaming but didn't find anything ll go home tomorrow ll have

Simar: No. It ll be we ll search

Prem: ok as u wish. Finally they find it

Premar feels happy and they go there but person won't be there

Simar feels sad and asks what to do now

Prem didn't like to see simar sad

Prem: two mins he goes and starts preparing pani puri

Simar: wow you ll do

Prem: Y i shouldn't do. I know how to do mam

Simar: oh tats nice

Prem prepares and simar starts eating.

Simar: You too eat

Prem: no u have

But simar won't listen and she starts feeding him. Prem ll be loving it and he too feeds simar and they will be lost in their own world until some person comes and asks prem to pack panipuri for 50rs

Prem: what?

Person: Pls prepare for my wife also she is pregnant and she wants to eat

Prem: Hello I am preparing for my wife. I am not the person who sells it

Simar: Its ok pls prepare and give

Prem can't say no to simar so he prepares and gives. Person gives money but simar says don't want

Prem: Simar do u want more

Simar: No I am full

Prem: Ok come we ll go

Simar: Money

Prem places money and they get into the car

Simar: I want icecream

Prem: Now?

Simar: Its too spicy I want icecream. Pls Prem ji

Prem (St): If u ask this much cutely I will get and come anything for u

Simar: Premji wat r u thinking?

Prem: Nothing lets go come

They search for more than half an hour and find icecream

Prem: Which flavour?

Simar: Butter Scotch

Prem: It's my favourite

Simar: When u r mine how urs & my taste will be different

Prem: You no need to change ur taste for me and feel bad

Simar: I feel happy to do things of your choice because u r my life so I ll never feel bad

Prem: By listening simars words prem feels so happy and he goes to bring icecream
They both complete icecream and starts to home.

Prem (St): I want time to stop here only. After many days I am so happy that even I can't express. Never I felt this much happy with surbhi. May be what I felt with surbhi was not love only. One thing is sure I Like you Simar, for your smile I can do anything. May be one day I will love you also.
Finally they reached home by 5.

Edited by Asha122 - 10 years ago
Vassu_123 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#59
nice dear...😊
wt would be the next part
plzz continue
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Vassu_123

nice dear...😊

wt would be the next part
plzz continue

Due to some problem with net i was not able to post full part give me 10 min i will post fully.
Sorry for the trouble

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