PREMAR FF: Destined to be together -- Updated Pt 27 on Pg 36 - Page 2

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If you have any suggestions you can pls tell i will add them as well as the story moves on...
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Part 2:

Next day Morning Bharadwaj House:

Prem: Mataji I want to talk to you about an important matter

Mataji: I also want to talk you but first have breakfast then we will talk

After Breakfast all are present in hall

Mataji: I decided to do marriage of PREM

Prem: Wow thank you Mataji I wanted to talk to you regarding my marriage itself

Mataji: Prem you should marry the girl whom I choose

Prem: Ok mataji I know you will choose surbhi only

Mataji: NO

Prem: What?

Mataji: Yes I don't want you to marry surbhi

Prem: Mataji but I love her

Mataji: No Prem she is not correct for you. I have a choosen a girl for you who is perfect match for you

Prem: No Mataji I love surbhi I will marry her only

Mataji: From when you started going against my wishes I said its final today we are going to see the girl by evening. Siddanth make him understand

After mataji leaves,

Prem: Maa I don't want to see any girl I love Surbhi and I will marry only her

Siddanth: Prem we understand you know about Mataji do one thing see the girl and say you don't like her then it will be fine

Sujatha: Ya Prem what siddanth saying is right do as he say. Just come and see the girl please atleast for my sake come later we will talk to Mataji

Prem: Ok maa I will come for your sake

Divedi House:

Jamuna: Meena ji the boy is from very nice family. If this match fixes I will be very happy for simar

Meena: I also think the same if simar gets married to that guy she will be happy in that house

Jamuna: Meenaji show the photo to simar

Meena: Ok

ROSIM room:

Meena: Simar see the Photo. He is from nice family his name is PREM.

Roli: First I will see, wow didi PREM nice name and he is looking handsome as well.

Simar: Roli pls give the photo.

Roli: No. why do you want to see.

Simar: Roli pls

Roli: Ok didi I will not irritate you. Here it is See how ur PREM is

Simar: She feels shy and see the Photo and says "PREM JI"

At the same time Prem is shown with Surbhi

Surbhi: Prem what is this you are going to see the girl

Prem: Don't worry surbhi just I am going to see the girl and reject that too I am going there for my family

Surbhi: But Prem..

Prem: Surbhi don't worry I wont marry anyone other than you, because I Love You.

Later in the Evening:

All family members(Mataji, Mausiji, Maa, Papa, Siddanth and Prem) reached simar's house but Prem is not at all interested.

All are having snacks where as Siddanth is chatting with roli and Prem is chatting with surbhi on mobile

Finally simar arrives she is looking awesome but for once also prem didn't look at her

Mataji says silently to prem to see her he lifts his head sees simar for one sec he feels dumbstruck and again continues chatting with surbhi

Jamuna: Prem beta if you want to ask simar anything you can

Mataji and Prem: No , Yes (Both says at a time)

Mataji: Ok ask

Prem: I want to talk with her personally

Jamuna: Simar take Prem to room

Premar enters the room:

Prem: I am little bit frank so I will say what's in my heart. First of all I don't like you and I am not interested in this marriage.

Simar feels hurt and she asks then why you came to see me then

Prem: Because of my family members. Whereas I love some other girl and I want to marry her. So, you say no this marriage

Simar: Y can't you say?

Prem: I already said them but they are not listening

Simar: Ok If I say no is there any guarantee that your family members will allow you to marry the girl you love

Prem: I will try to convince them

Simar: Now only you are not able to convince how come you will do it later. So, you are not sure you will be able to convince your family members or not

Prem doesnot know what to say so stays silent

Simar: So, if your silence itself tells that what I said is true. So, I wont say no to this marriage

Prem: But why? Y do you want to marry a guy who doesnot love you

Simar: Because "I LOVE YOU". Prem is stunned

Where as Simar continues that don't worry soon you will also start loving me

Prem: It will never happen because I love Surbhi, I will marry her and starts leaving from that place

Simar calls him he turns to her and she says I LOVE YOU PREM ji forever and I am sure you will also love me one or the other day as we are destined to be together.

Prem leaves from there and Simar smiles.

Will ever love blossom in Prem & Simar life let us wait and see?

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Yes 😛
Waiting to see how prem will fall in love with Simar
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Let us wait and see how much time it will take for him to love simar...
Next part will be updated by tomorrow
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Yes waiting for Tmr 😊
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PART 3:

Simar and Prem come and join everyone.

Mataji says to Jamuna that we will call and inform you regarding our decision and they starts to leave

While Mataji is talking to Jamuna Prem comes to Simar and says

Prem: I am saying you once again say no to this marriage

Simar: Never

Prem: Ok I am saying I wont marry you

Simar: Our marriage will definitely happen

Prem: You are saying it will happen, if so I will never love you and I will show you hell

Simar: Don't worry I will turn that hell also to heaven. If you are there with me I can manage anything hell or heaven

Prem: Then welcome to hell

Simar: Thank you for agreeing to marry me

Prem: When I agreed?

Simar: Just now u said welcome to hell that means u agreed for our marriage right

He thinks to say something but with in that Mataji calls and he leaves.

After everyone leaves ROSIM room:

Roli: Wow didi he looks so handsome

Simar: Ya he is and don't worry you can call him JIJU

Roli: Wow that means you like him

Simar: No

Roli: Then

Simar: I Love him

Roli: Wow that's nice I will say to Maa and Papa and she leaves

Simar thinks not now roli from past two years I am loving him when maa and papa said about the guy I didn't like but when they said name and showed photo I felt very happy that he is the one whom I am going to marry

After reaching Bharadwaj house everyone retires to their room

Prem in his room thinking how dare is she to say I love you to me but why I didn't get angry on her. I am feeling as if I met her some where and she looks good too as they say Beauty with Brains nice combination. What ever it is I love surbhi and I want to marry her its final and tomorrow once again I will talk to Mataji and then he drifts to sleep

Next day Morning after breakfast everyone are present in hall

Mataji: I decided that Prem will get married to Simar

Prem: No Mataji for our family sake I came and saw her but I don't want to marry her

Sujatha: Prem listen to Mataji I also feel she is very nice girl

Prem: Maa you all know I love surbhi I want to marry her that's it

Pari: Mataji what happens if Prem marries my Sister she is very nice girl

Mataji: Pari I know who is suitable for Prem don't come in between

Siddanth: Prem Mataji right I think simar is right person for you

Prem: So you all are on one side ok then listen I will never marry her its my decision and he leaves

CAFE:

Surbhi: I Love you Prem. I want to marry you

Prem: I also love you surbhi so only I fought with everyone and came

Surbhi: I said before only not to see that girl but you didn't listen

Prem: what to do I went for my family and now they are not understanding me

Surbhi: Then I have a plan

Prem: What?

Surbhi: We will marry without saying to anyone and then we will go infront of them then they have to accept.

Prem: Without permission of family members I can't do it you know that then y r u saying this

Surbhi: I know Prem but we don't have any other option. If not this they will make you marry that girl. If that happens I will die Prem

Prem: Surbhi what are you talking

Surbhi: Its true Prem I cannot live without you

Prem: I too can't live without you. Ok then as you wish we will marry tomorrow. I will do necessary arrangements.

Surbhi: That's so nice she hugs Prem and says I Love you

Where as at the same time Prem remembers how Simar said I LOVE YOU and smiles.

What happens now will destiny separate the couple if not how will they be united let's wait and see

Edited by Asha122 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I think prem will marry to Simar
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PART 4:

Prem drops surbhi in her home and he leaves but still thinking about simar

Prem: Why I am still thinking about her(simar) not able to understand. What ever first stop thinking and do preparations for your marriage

He reaches home calls his friends to arrange some things and lies on bed but some where simar is in his thoughts that he also can't accept

In Divedi house:

Simar is thinking about Prem

Two years back (flashback):

Simar came to Delhi regarding some work.

One fine day Simar is going out along with her friends for some work and she stops at one place to eat Pani puri while she is eating she sees a guy who carries one old lady and cross road as she can't walk its none other than Prem. She moves to that place where Prem will be asking that old lady why are you struggling like this don't you have anyone

Old lady: No

Prem: Then atleast you can stay in some old age home right

Old lady: Who will take me there?

Prem: I said this much can't I join you there as you are like my Dadi and he leaves from there by taking that old lady.

Simar: Impressed

One day in CAFE Simar is there along with her friends Prem is on other side of her but he won't see her and she also won't see him. After some time she is able to here one voice and turns to see who is scolding his friend regarding the value of life, love and family and suicide is very foolish thing its none other than Prem.

She thinks very nice guy and leaves.

In Hostel Room:

Divya: Simar's friend asks her whom are you thinking about

Simar: She says stranger

Divya: What?

Simar narrates the incidents and says very nice guy he thinks a lot about family and helps others as well now a days its difficult to find people like them

Divya: What is his name?

Simar: Don't know

Divya: Without knowing only you are thinking about him

Simar: To think about a person no need to know his name

Divya: Do you love him?

Simar: What are you mad?

Divya: Then without sleeping if you are thinking about that person only means anyone will think the same

Simar: Nothing like that just thinking he is nice person and handsome as well

Divya: That only these are the symptoms of love

Simar: Nothing like that don't know whether I will see him again or not and he don't know that I exist also. But who ever marries him and gets his love will be lucky

Divya: How can you say that without even talking to him

Simar: To know about few people no need to talk just their behavior talks he is one among them and his eyes and face speak volumes

Divya: So you love him ok then don't worry if you are made for each other your matarani will make you both one.

Simar won't say anything and she sleeps

After few days Matarani Mandir in Delhi:

Simar's family came to do pooja in the morning. Prem's family also came to do pooja

But they didn't see each other

Panditji asked Simar to go and do bath in temple pond simar leaves along with Roli

At the same time Panditji says to Mataji who wants to do Pooja they need to take bath in temple pond. Mataji asks Prem to go and come

With in that Simar came out of pond due to cold she ties scarf to her face only eyes will be seen.

While she is leaving Prem will be coming by talking in phone and without seeing he will dash simar with fear of falling down she closes her eyes and catches his kurthi and Prem catches her through waist, as no proper balance they both will fall in pond where as her forehead hits with his head and her maang is filled with his kumkum(sindhoor) and the bell from temple rings at same time. Then Simar moves far from him and opens her eyes and sees its prem. While Prem sees her eyes as she has covered her face with scarf. Siddanth will come and call him Prem so he goes from there.

Then Simar comes to her senses and sees that her maang is filled and she thinks that until now I was not able understand why I have seen you as always u were in my thoughts from the day I saw you but now I understood that you are the person whom god also wants me to spend my life with.

I know that one or the other day we will become one I will wait till that day.

Roli asks her to come she comes out of her thoughts and asks Roli whats the name of that guy she says I listened that guy calling him as Prem

Simar thinks my Prem Ji and leaves

Flashback ends

Simar: Premji destiny also wants us to be together so only on that day unknowingly itself you filled my maang for me that day itself I became urs and was waiting with some hope that I will meet you and it happened finally. I know you don't love me but I believe in my love that you will understand me and start loving me.

She takes his photo and says Good night Prem ji and she sleeps.

Will Simar love wins or will Prem marry Surbhi lets wait and see what happens the next day?

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PART 5:

Morning Bharadwaj House:

Mataji: Prem where are you leaving early in the morning without having breakfast

Surbhi will be continuously calling Prem but he won't lift as Mataji is there

Prem: Mataji I have some work I will come after some time

Mataji: Ok atleast have BFast and go

Prem: I will have something outside Mataji don't worry and he takes Mataji's blessings and leaves

After going outside he calls Surbhi and asks her to get ready that he will come and pick her after two hours and within that I will do remaining arrangements

There Simar will be feeling uneasy that something bad is going to happen so she thinks to go to temple and pray to god

After completing arrangements Prem thinks finally I am going to marry the person I love. I know Mataji you will be angry on me but I can't marry the girl whom I don't love and make her life and my life as hell. Sorry Mataji please forgive me as for the first time I am going against your wish. Then he goes to pick up Surbhi

Prem: Surbhi I am waiting down come fast.

Surbhi comes down and they leave for temple

Prem & Surbhi reaches temple where all their friends will be waiting for them. They both goes to get ready

Whereas Simar will be feeling restless

In Bharadwaj house everyone will be having breakfast suddenly Mataji feels pain in heart and she collapses. Everyone shouts Mataji

Rajendher: Siddanth call doctor immediately

Siddanth: Ok Papa

Doctor comes and checks Mataji

Doctor: Mataji got minor heart attack you need to take care of her and also if she undergoes any stress then there may be a problem as so be careful he says then writes some tablets and leaves by saying she will gain consciousness in some time

There in temple Prem and Surbhi marriage will start with the Mantras of Panditji

Simar will be praying to god

Mataji gains consciousness and asks for Prem

Mataji: Where is Prem? I want to see him, call him

Siddanth: Mataji you don't worry I will call him. But Prem phone is switched off

Siddanth: Mataji his phone is switched off

Mataji: Whatever it is call I want to see him. I am feeling I will die without seeing him

Rajendher: Mataji don't say like that we will bring Prem

All gents leave in search of Prem. Siddanth is continuously trying his phone but it's switched off

None of them are able to find where Prem is

In temple Panditji asks them to get up for Varmala. They put garlands on each other neck and sit down.

One of their friends does gatbandhan and Panditji asks them to stand up for Saat Phere they get up and Surbhi thinks now no one can come in between us at the same time Simar face is shown.

Let's see what happens next and whose love wins?

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey guys

Please let me now how it is so far. Criticisms are also welcome so that i can improve.
Thank you

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