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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tani91

so sorry for the late reply...I had read the update on the day you PMed me but didnt get the time to reply hey its ok reply in ur own time

anyways like always loved the update aww thx and by the looks of things going on in the show right now SuYaan are a great relief😍 the show right not is dragging and 🤢...how stupid is ishaan to hide sona's truth from suhana DAMMIT that day better come when these two work together...zameen aasman ek kardoongi but this will happen😈😆 hey there was a tellybuzz article saying Dharampatni mite end soon...maybe then Harshad can enter SGP...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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I saw that too and u feel really bad for him😭, I dunno about him entering in SGP but I seriously want these two to work together!! I mean UGH it needs to happen hopefully sometime later this year!
Edited by Tani91 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#53
Hey guys
here's Part 7-finally
just typed it all up n lost the entire update
hope u all like it
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"Bas Suhana itni si baat, tum aur Ayaan dinner ke liye gaye theh aur Ayaan ne kisi ka concert bachaya," Ishaan said slightly exasperatedly, for a second he thought Suhana was was going to confess to a past affair with Ayaan or something

"Shut up Ishaan!pehle poori baat sunlo," said Suhana and she began recounting the rest of the event for that night

**********FLASHBACK********
"Ayaan dekho wahan pe ice cream parlour, chalo tumhare pehle concert ka success wahan pe celebrate karte hai," Suhana said pointing out the ice cream parlour they visited sometimes

"Par bill tum pay kar rahi ho," Ayaan said

"you shameless man, ek ladki se bill pay karaoge?" Suhana said

"O madam, Ayaan Juneja sirf apni mum ka, sister ka aur girlfriend,fiance aur wife ka bill pay karta hai ya phir karega, aur app inmein se koi category mein nahin fit hoti,"

"so what, tumhari girlfriend nahin par best friend toh mein hoon," replied Suhana,"and don't you forget mein Suhana Bajpai hoon, yahan pe meri chalegi,"

"Suhana ek baat puchu...actually doh baat?" Ayaan asked and without waiting for her response first asked,"tum kaunse flavour ki ice cream logi?"

"umm, triple chocolate" Suhana replied.

"bhaiya doh triple chocolate ice cream de doh" Ayaan said to the man at the counter who served.

"aur second question kya hai?" Suhana asked as they sat down

"Suhana...why Sid, Sid kyun, tum Suhana Bajpai ho, tumhe koi bhi rich,handsome, acha ladka mil sakta hai aur tumho ke uss ghatiya insaan ke peeche bhaagti ho...why uss mein aisa kya hai jo muj..jo kissi aur mein nahin hai," Ayaan asked. The high of his first concert got him to open up to Suhana more.

"Par Sid, rich,handsome,charming aur acha ladka hai, woh mere liye perfect hai...koi problem nahintrust me Ayaan woh bohat acha hai and he's everything I want," Suhana replied.

Ayaan could almost feel the pain of something inside him breaking into pieces. Suhana wasn't even considering the idea of another guy let alone him, she was so blinded by Sid's fakeness that she cant see my love for her, Ayaan thought. He just couldn't bring himself to say anything else to Suhana and she too didn't say anything.

"ok, ab chale," Suhana said.

"let's go, chal ke car tak jaana hoga," Ayaan said not meeting Suhana's eyes. He had to pull himself together soon.

They begin walking in silence, after a few minutes however Ayaan said,"Suhana jaldi karo, barish hone wali hai, hum bheeg jayengi," As they heard thunder. Monsoon season was just about to rain and it looked like Delhi was going to get it's first rain of the season

"OMG Ayaan hum wrong direction mein ja rahe hai...look humne car ko uss side pe park ki thi aur hum opposite direction mein ja rahe hai,"

"Oh fish!" Ayaan said as it started raining. He took hold of Suhana's hand and pulled her under the shelter of a nearby building.

"Ayaan let's just go, hum yahan barish ruk ne ke liye wait nahin kar sakte," Suhana said, running a hand through her wet hair as Ayaan gazed at her in awe.

"nahin...nahin tum bheeg jao gi," Ayaan said softly, unable to take his eyes of her

"Ayaan hum already bheeg chuke hai," Suhana said sticking out her hand in the rain. She loved the rain. Ayaan also loved the rain and the feel of raindrops, especially the first rains of the season. He also stuck his hand out.



"Ayaan ab meinkuch poochu?" Suhana asked then said,"tumhari Dream Girl kaun hai? kaisi hogi woh?"

Ayaan gave a small smile before saying,"bilkul tumhari tarha, anti piece, jiska maan itna saaf ho, khoobsorat itni ho ke usko dekhta he rahon aur bholi tumhare jaisi ho..." Ayaan replied

"aww...kash meri koi twin sister hoti?" Suhana said.

This girl is absolutely crazy, she's still not understanding I dont want anyone else, I just want her, Ayaan thought

"Par woh girl jo bhi ho, promise me ke sabse pehle mujhe bataoge aur usse milaoge," Suhana said.

"ok promise, jab woh milegi toh sabse pehle tumhe baataunga," Ayaan said, wondering if he would ever find another girl and get over Suhana

After a few moments in silence Suhana said,"you know mein humesha barish mein dance karna chahti thi...films mein itna acha lagta hai, mujhe bhi karna hai but..." she broke off.

When Ayaan didn't reply she looked around to see him holding out a hand

"Miss Suhana Bajpai can I ask you for a dance?"
Suhana smiled and took his hand. Suhana place her hand on his shoulder and he placed his on her waist and began to dance slowly

"OMG...i cant believe mein aise beech sadak pe barish mein tumhare saath dance kar rahi hoon," Suhana said as Ayaan spun her around.

While dancing both were very close to each, Ayaan stopped dancing and just gazed into Suhana's eyes. Suhana too just looked at Ayaan. Ayaan leaned in towards Suhana to kiss her when his phone began ringing and he came to his senses.

"wrong number" Ayaan replied into the phone when someone asked for a Anurag Ganguly

"chalo Suhana, ghar" Ayaan said. The two walked back to the car in silence and drove to Suhana's house in silence.

Ayaan stopped the car in the Bajpai driveway and got out and opened the door for Suhana who looked lost in thought.

"Suhana...Suhana I'm sorry and good bye," Ayaan said and leant in and kissed Suhana on the cheek.
Suhana looked puzzled and and was frozen on the spot while Ayaan got into the car and drove off without a second glance


thats all guys
hope u liked it
plz comment/critisize








Edited by shona. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#54
Ohh rabba main toh marr gyi oye..SuYaan/HarshIni..u guys r driving me crazy!
Gosh..u were ryt shona. ye kya kar diya aapne Ayaan Juneja *embarassed*
I cant stop dreaming n thinking bout HarshIni after dis update of urs.. u've killed me shona!

waiting for d nxt update..Ishaan ka reaction kya hone wala hai..i m excited..

keep rocking
love ya tons
Edited by -MadRaginiFan- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: -MadRaginiFan-

Ohh rabba main toh marr gyi oye..SuYaan/HarshIni..u guys r driving me crazy!
Gosh..u were ryt shona. ye kya kar diya aapne Ayaan Juneja *embarassed*
I cant stop dreaming n thinking bout HarshIni after dis update of urs.. u've killed me shona!

waiting for d nxt update..Ishaan ka reaction kya hone wala hai..i m excited..

keep rocking
love ya tons



Thank u! glad u liked it Vipu!!
i cudnt fit the whole thing in one update so had it in 2 parts...n suhana was mainly referring to this part wen she was telling ishaan
one day they will come together somewhere, somehow

hope u like next part as well


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Gonna put up Part 8 as well

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"Ishaan I don't know unn 5 seconds mein kya hua tha, I mean it all happened in the moment, Ayaan ne shyad mujhe thoda ziyada serious le liya tha jab meine kaha tha ke mujhe films mein jaisa hota hai waise rain dance karna tha...I dunno, but I want to clarify ke kuch nahin hua tha...woh last time tha jab meine Ayaan ko Delhi mein dekha tha...uski good bye ko mein uss waqt samaj nahin payi thi...mujhe nahin pata tha ke next day woh chala jayega..." Suhana said.

Ishaan took Suhana's hands in his before saying,"Suhana jab kuch hua he nahin tab tum justification kyun de rahi ho,"

"Because jab Sonali tumhari life mein aise achanak ayi tab mujhe laga ke woh humare beech ah rahi hai aur tum dono ke beech kuch chal raha hai aur mein nahin chahti ke Ayaan ko le kar aisi koi misunderstanding tumhe ho..." Suhana replied

"Suhana mein janta hoon ke Ayaan sirf tumhara friend hai, mein sab Sid aur tumhare bare mein janta hoon aur ye bhi janta hoon ke tum sirf mujse pyar karti hoon," Ishaan replied, "Suhana, kyunki Sona meri best friend hai mein tumhari aur Ayaan ki dosti ko samaj sakta hoon...Suhana, jaise tumne abhi kaha, it just happened in the moment...ziyada socho maat aur soh jao," Ishaan said.

Suhana hugged him and muttered,"Ishaan, I love you..."

Ishaan hugged her back and said, "love you too," and with that both went to sleep.

On the other hand Ayaan was lying on his bed watching TV and thinking about his last day in Delhi as well. He recalled his first concert and the dance in the rain with Suhana and how in the carhe made up his mind to leave Suhana and Delhi behind and to date that was the toughest decision he had ever taken.

*************FLASHBACK**************

Ayaan drove into the Bajpai driveway and got out of the car, he knew what he had to do next; go home, pack and leave Delhi as soon as possible. His feelings for Suhana had grown stronger as time had gone by but he always hid them but today he couldn't quite control them, she was so sure about her future with Sid so there was nothing left in Delhi for him now, just seeing her and feeling pain and heartbreak every day, he was better off starting life afresh in another city away from Suhana.

Ayaan opened the door for Suhana who got out in silence. If he was so sure to leave the he might as well say his goodbye now.

"Suhana...Suhana, I'm sorry," Ayaan apologized, hoping she would understand that he hadn't meant to take advantage of her earlier. And in the moment deciding that if this was the last time he would see Suhana he might as well not have any more regrets, added, "and good bye," leant in and kissed her on the cheek.

Without waiting for a response he turned his back on Suhana and drove off, the image of Suhana standing there puzzled, carrying several questions in her eyes but asking none.

Ayaan drove straight home packed his things. He spoke with his mother who was currently in London with his sister. He informed them about his decision to leave Delhi, and his mother acknowledged his feelings behind this and suggested he go to Mumbai where they owned a flat. He could shift there now and they would decide about the future when she returned to India.

Ayaan welcomed the idea and booked a flight ticket to Mumbai for the next morning and left after putting last few things in Delhi straight never to come back.

************FLASHBACK**************

Ayaan had now made a place for himself in the city of dreams where he hadn't become a singing superstar he once wanted to but was now enjoying success in as a marketing and advertising head of a top music company. He just wished that he could have said a proper good bye to Suhana and wondered if this meeting in Mumbai was God's way of giving him this second chance before moving to Bangalore. His transfer had been sanction and he was moving there in 2 weeks and it was up to him now to decide what he wanted to do, live in his past loving a married woman and constantly feeling guilty for it or else look forward to the future and move on from her by ending things off properly and one day find true that was meant for him, because today he had realized that Suhana wasn't ever meant for him or Sid, she was made only for Ishaan, who loved her and gave her everything that she actually really needed and deep down somewhere wanted.


That's all for this part

only two more parts left then im done with this FF

Edited by shona. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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can I just say I LOVE you so much for this...I LOVE you for making me visualize these scenes because you've written them in such a beautiful way...AHH the rain dance and then the TL reference🤣 and then using that sig (which for me is seriously my most fave thing I've ever made😳) everything is brilliant

I've saved this story in my bookmarks so even after it ends I can always revist it and fangirl dream about HarshIni😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: Tani91

can I just say I LOVE you so much for this...aww I love u too Chandni for giving me HarshIni and also keeping my siggy box looking so beautiful at all times😳
I LOVE you for making me visualize these scenes because you've written them in such a beautiful way...thank u for liking them...TL rain dance was one of my all time fav scenes so i bought it into this...n i loved TL so bought in the reference too...AHH the rain dance and then the TL reference🤣 and then using that sig (which for me is seriously my most fave thing I've ever made😳) everything is brilliant yes that sig is my most fav sig ever made by u including all the amazing Virat Kohli requests u make for me! I loved it n this scene was just for that sig...

I've saved this story in my bookmarks so even after it ends I can always revist it and fangirl dream about HarshIni😍 aww thank u im glad u liked it coz i wrote this mostly for u n Vipu n maybe someday might write another HarshIni fic...i alwasy p[lanned this one to be a short one but maybe a proper one with HarshIni as a couple😍

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Posted: 13 years ago
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aww you're too sweet😳 hahaha if you do you better PM me first😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lol definitely first pm to u n Vipu
hey i need to finish this one...still two parts of this left n hopefully u will like the ending

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