FF:A Blast From The Past Pt10pg11 26/02

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi guys
I'm usually a silent member on this forum but had a FF idea so decided to write it
Inspiration for this FF comes from Tani91 (Chandni di's) beautiful creations of Harshad-Ragini and SuShaan and Vipu (-MadRaginiFan-) who also shares the HarshIni dream!
Hope all you guys like it

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Suhana Bajpai Kashyap

Suhana is spoilt,rich and now married to Ishaan and happy in her life in her joint family. She didnt want to move to Mumbai with Ishaan when he got a promotion and a transfer to Mumbai. She is finding it difficult to adjust here



Ishaan Kashyap

Ishaan is a simple guy who loves his family and wife Suhana dearly. He recently got a transfer and promotion to Mumbai and shifted to Mumbai with Suhana. He and Suhana are trying hard to adjust to Mumbai life without their family



Ayaan Juneja

Ayaan was at college with Suhana. Among Suhana's friend's he has always had feelings for Suhana but never managed to express them to her and before he could express his love she was with Sid and he moved to Mumbai. Now after a couple of years he meets Suhana in Mumbai not knowing she's happily married.




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Posted: 13 years ago
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will update Part 1 soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I cant believe you went ahead with this😉 I'm looking forward to it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I love reading FFs...
this one is a special one and I m sure I m gonna enjoy each & every chapter !!

Thanks a ton shona.
HarshIni + SuShaan = WOW what a combination 😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 1

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"Ishaan mein market mein hoon, can you believe mein,Suhana Kashyap sabzi buy kar rahi hoon,so cool na," Suhana gushed excitedly into her phone,"mein abhi busy hoon tumse badh mein baat karti hoon, ok," and with that she put the phone down.

On the other hand Ayaan was also buying groceries.
"bhaiya ye sab pack kardo," and he paid the stall owner when he heard a familer voice he hadn't heard in 2 years ago
"wow iss sab ke liye only 950 rupees," Suhana said surprised.

"Suhana!" Ayaan said from behind Suhana who turned. Shock,surprise and finally a smile appeared on her face.
"O-M-G Ayaan!" She exclaimed and hugged him. "where have to been, no phonecall,sms or anything for 2 years,you know Sullie and Sudhi ne kitna try kiya tha tumhe contact karne ka,"

They broke apart

"aur tumne...tumne try ki thi..." Ayaan said. Suhana looked so beautiful even today and her smile still made his heart skip a beat, her touch still sent his heart racing. Ayaan blinked hard to make sure this wasn't just a dream, Suhana in Mumbai in Indian attire was a far fetched thing but then again she was Suhana Bajpai, anything was possible for her

"agar mein tumhe phone karti toh tum oothate ya phir ignore karte jaise unki calls ko kiya tha," Suhana countered

"of course tumhare calls pick up karta...kisi ye mijaz ki tumhara call ignore kare...by the way mijaz means dare," Ayaan replied immediately and remembering Suhana's weak Hindi.

"yh I know," Suhana replied.

"oh madam, iske paise dene hai ya nahin," asked the man at the stall from whom Suhana was buying vegetables. Suhana and Ayaan had temporarily been oblivious to the entire world around them

"Suhana kitne logo ke liye itna sab kuch liya hai," Ayaan asked. The vegetables were enough to feed a large family.

"only 2," Suhana said innocently

"Suhana itni sabzi 8-10 log ke liye hai..." Ayaan said.

"mujhe toh sabzi kharidh na bhi nahin ata..." suhana said dejectedly

"it's ok Suhana, mein tumhari madat kar deta hoon," and with that Ayaan helped Suhana buy the right portions of groceries. Both were walking out of the market now.

"waise tum yahan kya kar rahi ho, Mumbai ki sabzi market mein, woh bhi akeli...Sanju ke saath Mumbai ayi ho ya phir Sullie-Sudhi ke saath?" Ayaan asked.

"OMG mein tumhe baatana na bhool gayi...I'm married, mein yahan apne husband ke saath hoon," Suhana said with a huge smile on her face.

Ayaan froze on the spot, processing the thought that Suhana was married. He knew it would happen one day, he could never pluck up the courage to tell her how much he loved her and now it was too late she was someone else's...he had lost her forever


Hope you guys liked it😳

P.S my Hindi is pretty bad so ignore mistakes please


Edited by shona. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank u guys for liking

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Posted: 13 years ago
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@ Chandni di-lol even i cant believe i went through with this...

@ Vipu-ur welcome🤗n thx for reading hope u like it

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Posted: 13 years ago
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oooh part 1...time to be really critical🤓 (JK...I'll read it first and then comment😳)


EDIT- ok can I just say that I could literally imagine this happening on the show...like seriously I coudl imagine Harshu's smile and the coy look he would have given😍. I loved how you kept Suhana's character intact...again I can almost imagine her messing up grocery shopping😆 The last bit about Ayan...aww🥺 (ugh I'm going to hate you now...making me pick between SuShan/JaiRa and HarshIni😭😭😭)
Edited by Tani91 - 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tani91

oooh part 1...time to be really critical🤓 (JK...I'll read it first and then comment😳)


EDIT- ok can I just say that I could literally imagine this happening on the show...im glad because thats wat i was trying to do...love the show n didnt wanna change things much like seriously I coudl imagine Harshu's smile and the coy look he would have given😍.me too imagining the sme while writing it I loved how you kept Suhana's character intact...Suhana has to be suhana...love her suhana moments again I can almost imagine her messing up grocery shopping😆 there was something similar in yday's epi n liked it so decided to make it the place where they'd meet The last bit about Ayan...aww🥺 (ugh I'm going to hate you now...making me pick between SuShan and JaiRa😭😭😭) i know its sad...n heartbreak for him but i cant break SuShaan up n love HarshIni as well...its delena-stelena all over agen



thank u di🤗 for reading n commenting

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Posted: 13 years ago
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ohh Gosh..
i m dead...Harshu and Ragini talking to each other😍
I couldn't stop imagining the sight☺️

Aww..Ayaan still loves Suhana...Suhana bhi na..isse kuch samajh ni aata 😛😆
Poor Ayaan..i can understand how he felt when she said that she's married..

Eagerly waiting for the next part..
jaldi update karna😉


and heyy..
U should make a PM list !!

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