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Posted: 13 years ago
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thank u
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sorry for nt commenting earlier Shona..was busy with my pre-boards..i read the updates d day u updated but i didnt get tym to comment so sorry :(


After reading d parts i love Ayaan more now..n now I m thinking ki kash Suhana wud hav realised bout Ayaan's feelings..hayyeee then SuYaan wud b a couple..but at the same tym i think ki fir bechare Ishaan ka kya hota 😆

Jaldi update d nxt part now :)
Edited by -MadRaginiFan- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: -MadRaginiFan-

Sorry for nt commenting earlier Shona..was busy with my pre-boards..i read the updates d day u updated but i didnt get tym to comment so sorry :(
its cool reply in ur own time
o ok how did they go?

After reading d parts i love Ayaan more now..n now I m thinking ki kash Suhana wud hav realised bout Ayaan's feelings..hayyeee then SuYaan wud b a couple..but at the same tym i think ki fir bechare Ishaan ka kya hota 😆 lol suhana tubelight hai she realizes everything late

Jaldi update d nxt part now :) will update next part soon...written half the update n need to finish off...its a long one as its second last

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey guys
Here's Part 9
one more left after this
anyways hope u guys like this one

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"Ishaan open the door," Suhana shouted from the bedroom as she examined herself in the mirror. Ishaan and she were going for lunch with Ayaan to Ayaan's favourite restaurant in Mumbai. It must have been Ayaan coming to pick them up.

"Arre Ayaan, undar ao...Suhana madam abhi bhi room mein tayar ho rahi hai," Ishaan said leading Ayaan into the house

"Abhi bhi nahin badli, Miss Perfectionist hamesha se itni der lagati hai ready hone mein," Ayaan said

"Ab mein Mrs.Perfectionist hoon," Suhana said as she came into the hall. She was dressed in a beautiful light pink salwar and as usual looked stunning with her trademark 100 watt smile.

"Sorry Mrs Perfectionist," Ayaan corrected, looking down trying to rid himself of memories of Suhana Bajpai.

"Ok toh chale?" Ishaan asked and all three left the flat and went down to Ayaan's car.

As Ishaan and Suhana got out of the car outside the restaurant a voice called "arre Ishaan, Suhana,." They turned to see a lady who was coming in their direction.

"Sneha bhabhi, app? What a surprise? App bhi lunch karne ayi hain?" Suhana asked.

"nahin, mein ye salwar wapas karne ayi thi aur ek nayi lene, acha hua tum mujhe mil gayi, mere saath chalo na shopping ke liye," she gushed.

"bhabhi mein yahan lunch ke liye ayi thi, mein app ke saath kaise ah sakti hoon, phir lunch ke liye late ho jayega," Suhana said trying to politely excuse herself.

"nahin Suhana please, tumhari choice sabse achi hai, please mujhe koi achi salwar choose kardo, bas pandra-bees minute lagenge woh samne wali dukaan mein jana hai," Sneha bhabhi insisted.

"Suhana ek kaam karo, tum Sneha bhabhi ke saath jao, mein aur Ayaan tumhara wait karenge," Ishaan said and added,"par Sneha bhabhi, sirf ek dukan and that's it,"

"par Ishaan.." Suhana argued

"Suhana sirf 20 minutes ki baat hai aur wase bhi mein aur Ayaan yahin pe hai, Ayaan ko Suhana Kashyap ke kuch karname sunao ga aur time aise hi chala jayega," Ishaan said. Suhana gave a look and he turned more serious, "Suhana jab Sneha bhabhi itna keh rahi hai toh jao na, tumhe shopping ke liye itna persuade karne ki zaroorat kabse padh ne lagi,"

"ok, chaliye Sneha bhabhi," and with that the two ladies left just as Ayaan came back from parking the car.

Ishaan explained Suhana's absence as they entered the restaurant.

"So Ishaan tum aur Suhana kab aur kahan mileh teh," Ayaan asked as they sat at a table.

"Boltengunj mein..." replied Ishaan with a reminiscent smile on his face and he recalled his first meeting with Suhana.

"aur shaadi kaise hui...I mean Suhana kaise maan gayi?" Ayaan asked

Ishaan told him how they got married.

"pehle Suhana ke liye ye rishta sirf Sid ko wrong proof karne ki liye tha...par dheere dheere woh humare parivar mein aise ghool mil gayi ke aaj mujhe se pehle sab Suhana ke bare mein pooch te hai...Suhana ko mujhe pyar ho gayi and the rest they say is history..." Ishaan finished off.

Ayaan looked surprised, "tumhe paata tha ke Suhana, Sid se pyaar karti hai, phir bhi tumne use shaadi ki...aur use itna pyar diya...tum use kitna pyar karte ho Ishaan?" Ayaan asked rhetorically.

"shyad tum use karte ho use thoda ziyada," Ishaan replied and Ayaan looked shell-shocked, was his love for Suhana so obvious that anyone apart from her could see it.

"ye tum kya..." Ayaan said but Ishaan cut in.

" Ayaan mein janta hoon ke tum Suhana se pyar karte teh aur aaj bhi kahin na kahin karte ho..."

"mein sirf chahta hoon ke woh khush rahe...aur jitni khush woh tumhare paas hai utni khush toh woh apne crorepati Dad aur mere saath bhi nahin thi...Suhana ko tumhare saath dekh kar mujhe jealous feel karna chahiye, jaise Sid ko Suhana ke saath dekh kar hua karta tha but...na jaane kyun ek ajeeb sa sookon milta hai usko tumhare saath dekh kar...reassurance ke woh khush rahegi ...usse hamesha itna pyar milega..."

"Aur mujhe ye sun ke gussa aur jealous feel karna chahiye...meri wife ka sabse acha dost use itna pyar karta hai but mein ye nahin feel kar raha...shyad isliye kyun ke mujhe itna vishvaas hai ke us ke liye Suhana ki khushi se badh kar kuch nahin aur Suhana ki khushi mere saath hai is liye tum khabhi Suhana ko mujhe se dur nahin karoge...Suhana sach mein tubelight hai...usse tum jaise dost ko kaise jaane dia...kaise usko tumhara pyar nahin dikha..." Ishaan said.

Ayaan chuckled; he still found the Suhana is a tubelight joke funny.

"hi guys, I'm back!" Suhana announced arriving at the table,"kya baat ho rahi hai?"

"tumhare bare mein...actually mein ye keh raha tha ke thanks to Suhana mujhe Ayaan jaisa friend aaj mil gaya," Ishaan said.

"arre we should celebrate our friendship...Ayaan is going to sing for us,"

"no Suhana mein nahin gaa sakta...meine kabse rehaz nahin kiya hai...I can't sing,"

Suhana walked up to the front of the restaurant and asked the for the mic.

"your attention everyone, today my best friend is going to sing a song so please can you all give it up for him..." People clapped.

"Ayaan, ab toh Suhana ne announce bhi kar diya hai, aur waise bhi meine tumko gaa te hue nahin suna...so go," Ishaan encouraged.

"Ishaan pure India mein 1 billion people hai jino ne mujhe sing karte hue nahin suna...it's ok your not missing much," Ayaan said

"nope, tumhe gana hoga...kuch humari dosti ke liye hi ga do," Ishaan insisted.

Ayaan had no choice, he took the mic from Suhana. He let the DJ know what he wanted to sing.

"ok before I start singing, I'd like to dedicate this song to my friends, Ishaan and Suhana, here is to friendship," and Ayaan sung one of his favourite songs "jaane kyun dil janta hai, tu hai toh I'll be alrite,"

When he finished, the whole restaurant burst into applause. The manager approached Ayaan with a job offer as a singer.

"no thank you, Sir I can't do the job, I'm already employed," Ayaan insisted but the manager offered more money

"It's not about money...mein Bangalore shift ho raha hoon," Ayaan said, looking at Ishaan and Suhana both who looked surprised.

"What!" aur tum humme kab batane wale teh?" Suhana asked, "Ayaan this is very wrong, you should have told me and Ishaan, what do you mean 'mein Bangalore shift ho raha hoon'"

"Suhana meri company mujhe shift kar rahi hai...I have to go...tum aur Ishaan bhi is liye he Mumbai aye ho na...aur waise bhi tum log bhi kuch time mein Delhi wapas ja rahe hona,"

"kab ja rehe ho?" Ishaan asked

"day after tomorrow...Jab mein Suhana se market mein mila tha tab mera transfer ho gaya tha...but shift hona postponed hogaya tha...par ab toh jaana hi hoga,"

"then let's party today," Suhana suggested

"toh packing kab karunga?" Ayaan said

"teekh hai, hum tumhare ghar ajayenge, party aur packing dono ho jayenge," Ishaan said.

"sounds good, meine tum dono ko 7pm ko pick up karlo ga," Ayaan said.

"acha jaldi kuch khana order kare, mujhe bohat bhook lagi hai," Suhana said.

And with that the trio had lunch.

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Shona

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very nice loved it. Well written.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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^ thank u glad u liked it!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Shona yaar may b m latecurrent but yeh...saab imagination hai na?????

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: tejukor

Shona yaar may b m latecurrent but yeh...saab imagination hai na?????



hey
using the current mumbai track i based this around it...i realli want harshad-ragini to work together one day n this idea occurred from Chandni's sigs so i decided to write this short fic...

Edited by shona. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#69
Ohh No Shona..
You're ending the FF😭

Aww..Ayaan is goin as well
But i really loved Ishaan-Ayaan convo😳
Suhana is soo lucky that she has these two men in her life!!
Also loved the part where Suhana make Ayaan sing...

Waiting for the final update now..You did a FAB job with this FF..i loved each n every part of it 😉


I wish ab jaldi se HarshIni share screen space😍..ab aur wait nahi hota!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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ok I havent read the part because I am in my library right now studying so I dont have much time and since there are only few more parts left I want to read them slowly😳

anyways I was watching OUAT the other day and Prince James and Snow White story was replaying in my mind and I was like they could totally do a show like this in Indian TV (ok not really but something like it) and I was imagining HarshIni as Prince Charming and Snow White...that would be so cool to see a story or a fan fic about that😍 (without the mother of a 28 year old part lol and grandmother of a 10 year old kid)

yeah I know I'm delusional😳

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