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Posted: 13 years ago
#71
@Vipu-yh ending it...it shud hav finished a while ago but i take too long to update
suhana is lucky in everything
thank u so much for reading n commenting
me too wishing the sme now...harshad shud cum in jahan piya wahan mein as gauri's saviour...off screen frenship with suhana that probably wont go down well with rano...


@Chandz-its ok read in ur own time...oh OUAT indian version with HarsIni😍dont put such thoughts in my head otherwise i'll start writing a fic on that😆

Edited by shona. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#72
^why do you think I mentioned it😛

I have had so many ideas regarding HarshIni its not even funny...I think I went through about every possible storyline imaginable😆 I had A Walk to Remember, OUAT, Revenge, Rishta.com type story, Puckleberry and Fabrevans storylines, Jab We Met type

yeah I am crazy
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Posted: 13 years ago
#73
LOL one of these days wen im done with this...maybe i will write some more HarshIni stuff
i love them two to the core n want them to work together...one day in a full love story...like TL or iss pyar ko kya naam doon or that sort...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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yay a new HarshIni fic🤗 BTW you should post it in the FF forum so more people can read it😳

yeah I'm telling you yaar they HAVE to work together for my sanity. I mean I went to see The Vow on Valentines Day and I was like omg amnesia story that could totally work on HarshIni😆

but the Revenge storyline is REALLY sticking with me...I already have an imaginary cast of desi version of Revenge in my mind 😆 I would love to see Ragini in a grey shaded character like Emily Thorne...she is kickass🥳and Harshad should play Daniel😳
Edited by Tani91 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#75
🥳

One more HarshIni FF
thats a superb idea..Chandni di u keep on giving ideas to Shona.
I m soo excited to read another HarshIni & yeah Shona..Chandni di is right..post the FF in the FF corner this tym..I m sure more people would join us 😉

I am in HarshIni dreamland now☺️...bhagwaanji please litsen to our prayers..please bring HarshIni together😍

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Posted: 13 years ago
#76
@Chandz-lol i want them in desi TVD...though it wudnt work esp after seeing PKYEK but still i'd love to see Harshad-Ragini-Karan Tacker as Stefan-elena-Damon...lol we are completely insane😆😆
Revenge storyline n HarshIni wud be awesome...

@Vipu-bhagwanji needs to get harshini to share screenspace asap!


nways last part coming up soon!
Edited by shona. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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desi TVD? lol yeah but I dunno I'm two minds about it because TVD is so good plus after the debacle that was PKYEK I think its proven that Desi TV and vampires dont work😆 but Tacker and Chopda as Stamon...me likey😍 but not Ragini as Elena because Elena has become such a pathetic character now...I would much rather see more Salvatore brothers and Caroline and Katherine than Elena🤢

I wish they were in a YRF show together...you know because YRF shows are simply THE BEST I mean they pay attention to every single detail and they're awesome even if YRF shows dont have much episodes they have such impact on the TV...I so wish Rishta.com and Seven were coming back😭


BTW I finally read the part...really great job (as usual) cant wait for the next one😳


PS- do you also watch Revenge?😲 Revenge is my new fave show after OUAT this season
Edited by Tani91 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#78
lol thats wat im saying after PKYEK i never wanna see desi vampire stuff of that sort
but i wud love to see harshad...tacker...barun sobti and ragini all work together n thats way too much to ask i know lol
yup im not liking elena's character much anymore but vampire caroline has been awesome

aww another fan of YRF shows...yes they may not be long n have realli gud trps but quality is definitely there...jus compare the quality of seven to pkyek as a sci-fi show...

nways glad u liked this part...done with the last part but too lazy to post rite now...will do tomorrow...hope u like the lil ending i have planned for ayaan

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Posted: 13 years ago
#79

Part 10
last part...was thinking of writing an epilogue where
Ayaan n Anu go Delhi to meet Kashyap family

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"toh tum sach mein ja rahe ho?" Suhana asked

"nahin nahin...sirf mera luggage ja raha hai, mein toh idhar he ruk ne wala hoon," Ayaan said sarcastically and Suhana playfully slapped him on the shoulder.



"Ayaan tum mujhe itne time badh mileh ho aur aise ja rahe ho...I wish ke mein, tum aur Ishaan aur saath mein enjoy kar sakte," Suhana said. She and Ayaan were surrounded by Ayaan's suitcases while Ishaan had gone to collect take away food for the three of them.


Ayaan turned Suhana to face him and said, "Suhana this is my proper goodbye, jab mein Delhi choodh kar aya tha tab maine tum ko kuch bataya nahin tha par aaj properly goodbye bhi bol raha hoon and anyways we'll remain in touch..."


"don't you dare say goodbye again...we'll meet again soon," Suhana said before adding,"aur iss bar tumhe touch mein rehna he padhega...aur woh baat yaad haina...jab hone wali Mrs.Ayaan milegi tab sabse pehle mujhe baatao ge..."


"Mrs. Ayaan jo mujhe poore Delhi aur Mumbai mein nahin mili woh ab paata nahin kab milegi..."Ayaan thought...how would it be to love a woman other than Suhana...a woman who would love him back...


"shyad Bangalore mein...you never know...jab mein Ishaan se Boltengunj mein mili thi tab mujhe paata nahin tha ki I will marry him and love him like this..."

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"Ayaan have a safe flight, aur haan Bangalore poonch te he humme phone karna," Ishaan said.

"Thanks Ishaan," Ayaan said giving Ishaan a hug.

"doobara mujhe choodh ke ja rahe ho," Suhana said facing Ayaan. It was only after getting Ayaan back in her life that she realized she never wanted him to leave again.

"Suhana come on its not like that...I'm sure hum jald hi milenge...agar tum aisi shakal bana kar mujhe send off karogi toh paka meri flight crash ho jayegi" Ayaan said

"Ayaan just shut up," Suhana said slapping him on the shoulder,"Badi maa kehti hai kuch acha kaam karne ja rahe hote hai usse pehle aisi baatein karni nahin chahiye," Suhana said.

"acha...lagta hai tumhari Badi maa ko milne ana hi hoga," Ayaan said,"arre ab issi baat pe smile kardo,"

Suhana smiled and hugged Ayaan. She was so grateful to God for giving her the world's best husband, friend, family, dad,sister and even maids

The two friends broke apart and Ayaan was about to leave but stopped as he remember something. Pulling out a camera he asked a man standing nearby to click the picture of him, Suhana and Ishaan together.

"ok bye guys, see you sometime in Delhi...aur haan Suhana, Ishaan ka khayal rakhna," Ayaan winked cheekily and pulled his suitcase quickly as Suhana's smile turned into an angry expression but then burst into his favourite smile. Ishaan and Suhana waved Ayaan goodbye and left only when he was out of sight.

Ayaan felt strange, for so many years he had felt fixated in a state where he only loved Suhana but over the last few days his feelings for her weren't so heightened...whether it was the fact that she was married or weather he finally figured out that Ishaan loved her more than he could ever have and her true happiness lied with Ishaan or else the fact that he had finally got to say a proper goodbye without breaking ties with her, he didn't know, he only knew that he didn't quite think the same way about Suhana that he had when he met her in the vegetable market. Maybe moving cities was God's way of saying it was time for him to move on.

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"Hi, umm can I just get to my seat," said a voice next to Ayaan who looked up from his magazine to see a girl pointing towards her window seat next to his. Ayaan just stared at her for a moment and then said, "oh yeah sure," and he got up to let her sit in her seat. She looked strangely tensed and agitated. Ayaan noticed that she kept running her hand through her hair which fell down to her waist. She had an angelic face Ayaan noticed, and he couldn't help stealing glances at her every now and then. She took a huge gulp of water and then unblinkingly observed the flight attendant who was going through regulatory safety precautions. As the announcement was made that the flight was ready for takeoff Ayaan noticed the girl fidgeting with her fingers and looking tensed.

"umm are you ok?" Ayaan asked unable to stop himself.

"I..yes...no...actually I'm scared of flying..." she replied.

"so you worry like this all through the journey," Ayaan asked

"no...just during takeoff and landing...hamesha mere saath koi na koi travel karta hai...first time akele kar rahi hoon..." she trailed off.

"par apke saath itne sare log travel kar rahe hai," Ayaan pointed out.

"nahin...mera matlab family ya friend se tha," she replied and then whispered," oh God mujhe safely Bangalore pooncha dijiye I promise mein chaat aur bread pakore ke saath chutney ka prashad chadaungi,"

"app Mumbai se nahin hai...hai na?" Ayaan said.

"how do you know?" she asked

"agar app Mumbai ki hoti toh app bhagwan ko chaat nahin vada pav chada ti," Ayaan said smiling

The girl gave a small laugh and replied, "actually mein Delhi se hoon,"


"seriously?" Ayaan said,"mein bhi Delhi se hoon, which part of Delhi are you from?"

"West," she replied and said ,"OMG" and shut her eyes tightly as the plane took off and clutched Ayaan's arm which was resting on the arm rest. Ayaan looked into her face and smiled. She looked like an overgrown child, with so much innocence on her face.

When the plane steadied itself in the air she opened her eyes.

"Hi, I'm Ayaan," Ayaan introduced.

"Hi I'm Anu," she replied and when Ayaan looked questioningly at her she adding, "Actually mera pura naam Anushka hai but sab mujhe Anu bulate hai,"

"nice name...so app Delhi mein rehti hai?" Ayaan asked.

"nahin...actually mein Bangalore mein rehti hoon, Mumbai chutiyan mana ne ayi thi," she replied and then asked,"aur app?"

"mein Delhi se hoon and kuch saal se Mumbai mein tha aur ab job transfer Bangalore hogaya hai," Ayaan replied.

"cool...so what do you do?" Anu asked

"I'm a marketing director in a music company, what about you?"

"mein mere Dad ka business handle karti hoon," she replied now looking much more at ease than before the flight took off.

"acha tell me one thing...app flying karne se dar ti kyun hai?"

"I dunno...bas take off aur landing ke waqt darr lagta hai...isliye hamesha koi friend ya family ke saath travel karti hoon...I need to hold onto someone..." she trailed off and Ayaan looked at her hand which was still holding his tightly and she followed his gaze and quickly removed her hand.

"I'm sorry," she muttered

"it's ok," Ayaan said. Both chatted all the way to Bangalore.

"ok so ye mera number hai, agar Bangalore mein koi bhi problem ho or kuch chahiye then call me,"

"thanks, chalo acha hai ke mere paas ek friend toh hai Bangalore mein...jab Mumbai mein aya tha tab mera yahan koi nahin tha...anyways I'll call you...afterall naye flat ke interiors kara ne hoge aur mein koi ache interior designer ko yahan nahin janta..." Ayaan replied

"dude tum iski bilkul worry mat karna, mein ek bohat achi interior designer ko janti hoon, she'll make your house a home," Anu replied.

"cool," Ayaan said and before he could say anything else the announcement was made that the flight was ready to land. Anu looked panicky again and Ayaan offered his hand.

"ab toh hum dost hai, you can hold onto my hand," Ayaan said and after a moment Anu took his hand and held on tightly though didn't close her eyes instead stared into his. She didn't know what it was about him that made her feel calm and safe, maybe it was this; the sincerity in his eyes that compelled her to trust him.

"uh oh..." Anu whispered as the plane began to descend and Ayaan smiled at the look on her face.

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The following week Ayaan called Anushka and they met again. These meeting became frequent and as Ayaan began to settle into the new city he and Anushka spent more time together and had fallen for each other sharing some memorable moments together.


As Ayaan got into bed after a memorable date with Anushka he decided it was time to call Suhana and keep his promise.

"hello," said the familiar voice of Suhana

"Suhana, I'm in love," Ayaan said.

"OMG...really? who's the lucky girl" Suhana replied and she and Ishaan chatted away with Ayaan

"how dare you Ayaan, itne months ho gaye aur tum mujhe ab baata rahe ho shame on you," Suhana said.

"ok in my defence, first I wanted to make sure this is love...now I'm sure about it I can tell the world," Ayaan said

"OMG Ayaan...tum toh mujse bhi bade tubelight nikle...poore 5 months lage tumhe ye jaane ne ke liye ke tum iss girl se pyar karte ho," Suhana said. Ayaan burst into laughter. He had really moved on from Suhana, had realised though he and Suhana could have had a future it wasn't really meant to be...it was always supposed to be Ishaan for Suhana and Anu for him. Alas he had found someone who could love him back the way Suhana could never have.

As the first rains of the monsoon season fell he shared his monsoon dance with his soon to be bride, Anu while Suhana did the same somewhere in the streets of Delhi with Ishaan.


That's all. Hope u guys enjoyed reading this fic as much as i enjoyed writing it.

Special thanks to Chandz (Tani91) for letting me use her beautiful sigs n bringing HarshIni together in them

and to Vipu n Aki for always leaving kind comments 😊

thank u guys!


Shona

Edited by shona. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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The PERFECT ending any FF could ever have 👏

I m feeling so sad that ur FF is over..gosh i cud feel SuYaan's friendship..never wanted Ayaan to say goodbye

Iwish i also had a friend like Ayaan yaar..i m soo in aww of SuYaan😍
i dropped a lil tear as well when Ayaan finally said goodbye😭


But as they say "jo hota hai achhe ke liye hota hai"
So,Rockstar Ayaan got his true love:-Anushka😳
[i love u bringing in Anupriya 😃]

The last SuYaan chat on the phone is too ADORABLE..dono besties Tubelight hain😆
and shona even i wanted Ayaan-Anu to visit SuShaan..maybe in ur next FF if u ever think of writing one again😛😉

The best part about this update was the way u used Chandni di's avis..uff she's a SUPERB avi maker & her avis made this update more PROMISING & READABLE!!
[Avis se yaad aaya ki why aren't u using any HarshIni avi? Chup-Chap use karo aur unka PROMOTION karo🤣 ]


Shona. u plz don say thanks instead thanks goes to u for fulfilling our HarshIni☺️dream by atleast ur FF🤗..
will neva forget this very spcl FF..i m gonna read it all over again after a month😉
And i promise u that this FF will always remain close to me heart❤️
My most favourite FF Ever !!!

Love ya tons
🤗
aur plz ab mujhe bhool matt jana
[i know u wouldnt kyunki min bhoolne hi nahi dungi😛]

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