To be with you:Danny,Kumari,Kusum OS

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Posted: 11 years ago
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To be with you

Danny's POV:You were the first friend I had in Ratnagiri.I still remember our first meeting without even knowing your true identity.It was so cute.

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We both became friends soon.But I don't know how...I fell in love with Kusum.
Kumari's POV:I was angry with you when I met you for the first time.

You exposed Umesh whom I blindly loved and saved my life.I realized how wrong I was in judging you.You gave me your hand of friendship by always supporting me.

I found solace in you.When I was sick you took care of me as a good friend.

I don't know how...but I know that slowly I fell in love with you".

Danny's POV:

Kusum never loved me.But I loved her blindly.I was on the top of the world when I married Kusum.

I forgot myself when I felt close to Kusum.
But my heart was broken when I realized that she never loved me.She loved only Saras bhaiyya.

Kumari's POV:

My heart broke into pieces when I came to know that my dream would never get fulfilled.Because you never loved me.You saw me only as a friend.Your love was Kusum.When you married Kusum I shed tears silently.But I was happy to see you happy with your love.

Danny's POV:

Kusum tried to snatch Saras Bhaiyya from Kumudji.For her,love was living with the person she loved.I know Kumari...you love me.But you never tried to snatch me from Kusum.Because for you,love is sacrifice...love is leaving the person you love with his love.That is the major difference between you and Kusum.I was very late in understanding that.

Kumari's POV:

Though I longed to be in your arms I was upset seeing Kusum ignoring you.I prayed for your union with Kusum.Finally Kusum changed her mind and accepted you as her husband.You were so happy.I loved to see your smile.

Danny's POV:

Kusum never changed her mind.She was only pretending to be a changed person in front of others.She always longed for Saras bhai and Kumudji's separation as she felt cheated.I was very happy for a while thinking that Kusum really accepted me as her husband.But I was late in understanding that Kusum had worn a beautiful mask to plot secretly against Saras bhai and Kumudji behind all of us.Why Kusum...why?Why did you do this?When I asked her she was silent.

After a moment she blasted at me that she has loved only Saras bhai and she could never see him with Kumudji.Her true colour was out.I was betrayed mericilessly by Kusum.My heart was broken.

Kumari's POV:

When we all came to know Kusum's true colour we were shocked.Everyone hated Kusum.But I could not do that.Because I never saw her evil face.My eyes saw only your tears.Your heart was bleeding terribly.I could'nt bear it.

Danny's POV:

When I was shattered completely I never thought I would be able to escape from depression.But when you wiped my tears,when you caressed my face,when you let me rest on your shoulders I felt different.You cleaned my wounded heart with relief by healing my wounds with your sincerity.You taught me what real love is while Kusum taught me what fake love is.Now I regret falling in love with Kusum when a gem like you were around me always.I did the biggest mistake by marrying Kusum.Our marriage was only a night mare.Now I am free from her.Now Kusum is not a part of my life at all.But still there is a huge difference between us Kumari.

Kumari's POV:

Danny... please for the sake of our friendship please don't go back to Dubai.I plead you...You should live happily with Kusum.

Tears rolled down her cheeks.

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Danny packed his bag to go back to Dubai.He was shocked to see Kusum with her luggages.
D:Kusum,why have you packed your luggages?
K:Danny...


D:Come to the point Kusum.
Kusum burst into tears.
K:Sorry Danny.Sorry for hurting you.

I want to come with you to Dubai.
Danny was shocked:What?
K:Yes Danny.
D:Kusum...please don't start your drama again.Last time also you apologized to me crying.I was a fool.So I believed you.But not anymore.
K:Believe me Danny...please...this time I really changed.Kumari made me realize that living with the person who loves us is what true love is.
Danny looked at her in disbelief:Kumari advised you?
Kusum nodded her head.
D:That is Kumari.She can sacrifice her love for my happiness.
Kusum could not believe it.
D:Kumari loves me.But since she feels that my happiness is being with you she is trying to unite us.Learn what love is from her.
Kusum was shocked.
K:How do you know that Kumari loves you?
D:I have seen love in her eyes.But I was helpless.Because I was blinded by my love for you.


K:Danny...
D:Kusum...you are forgetting that we are not a couple anymore.We are divorced.Now I don't feel the same for you.So sorry.I can't take you with me.
Kumari came in.
Kumari:Danny...don't go to Dubai.Stay here with Kusum.
Danny looked at Kumari:I am not going to Dubai Kumari.I have decided.
Kumari and Kusum were surprised.
D:But not for Kusum...but for you.

Kumari did not understand anything:Danny...What did you say?



D:According to you living with the person who loves us is what true love is.Right?I realized who my true love is.And I have decided to be with her.

He held her hand:You are my true love Kumari.And I have decided not to return to Dubai to be with you.
Kumari could not believe it.
Kusum was shattered.
Kum:Danny...so you know that I love you.But you don't stay here just for me.Because I know I don't have a place in your heart.
D:No Kumari.Earlier I failed to understand who my true love was.That time I was blindded by my love for Kusum.But now I am not blind.
Danny's arms cupped her face:I have fallen in love with you Kumari.I really love you Kumari.
Kumari looked at him emotionally:Danny...
Danny became very emotional:Kumari...will you be with me forever?
Kumari nodded her head in tears.
His arms circled her in love.
Kusum wept silently seeing them together.

Kusum's POV:

This s God's punishment for not seeing Danny's love before and trying to possess Saras snatching him from Kumud didi by betraying Danny.I deserve this.I don't deserve Danny's love.Danny deserves someone loving like Kumari.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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I don't watch the show... It was coming on tv and I saw a scene of Danny & Kusum. Danny was really sweet saying the relationship will progress at Kusum's level... this was last week I think. The only thing I know about this show is Jennifer is in it and I'm a KaJen fan. I never liked Sanjay's movies so naturally I won't be interested in his shows.
Good OS but I have no clue who Kumari is and based on the scene I watched I like Danny & Kusum together. I know my opinion isn't really valued becasue like I said I am not a fan or a viewer of this show, but free speech is a right 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Saraswatichandra is not SLB show.He left d show long ago.Earlier Danny-Kumari's friendship was focussed.So everyone expected them 2 b a pair.but suddenly a twist came & Danny-kusum became a pair.but still if u check d forum all r danny-kumari fans.so i wrote this OS.look wise also Danny-Kumari r better than Danny Kusum.But I luv Kusum.The viewers expected Kusum-Sunny pair as their scenes were concentrated.ut Sunny is missing in d show now

Originally posted by: sarbrathan

I don't watch the show... It was coming on tv and I saw a scene of Danny & Kusum. Danny was really sweet saying the relationship will progress at Kusum's level... this was last week I think. The only thing I know about this show is Jennifer is in it and I'm a KaJen fan. I never liked Sanjay's movies so naturally I won't be interested in his shows.
Good OS but I have no clue who Kumari is and based on the scene I watched I like Danny & Kusum together. I know my opinion isn't really valued becasue like I said I am not a fan or a viewer of this show, but free speech is a right 😉

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely. So many mistakes between Kusum, Danny and Kumari. All MU were straighten out between them. Kusum learned sometimes being sorry is not enough. Glad that Kumari and Danny finally are together.
Edited by Punkin22 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG this is so beautifully written 👏

Don't know what to say just LOVED it ❤️

Great job 👍🏼 Very well written!! :)

Made me emotional wish this happens in the serial can't see Danny with Kusum 😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Omg this so emotionnal, I love it I think I had tears while reading. I really want something like that in the show. Danny andkumari were a lovely pair and they had a good chemistry aswell. Cv need to think of them. I really cant stand kusum. Jasmine u r awsome. Good job
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice OS
Liked how kumari tried to bring Kusum n Danny back together
Was feeling little sorry for kusum because she realized to late n lost the man who loved her but glad for kumari getting her happy ending with the man she loves
Thanks for pm n plz keep em comin
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice update
Update soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice os
Thanks 4pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da pm n wonderful OS!

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