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Posted: 11 years ago
I liked this twist of yours.Interesting.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 11 and 12 were both amazing!!! I loved them both alot!
All the couples are adorable, especially Samud!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
I liked this version more than the tv episode
The right couples were together
I did feel little sad for Kusum as here she was MU but have to admit still felt Kumad had every right to slap her
Now hoping Saras cleans up the mess b4 gets outta hand
Thanks for pm plz keep em comin n continue soon

Happy new yr n wishing u all the best for 2014
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Posted: 11 years ago
The Shell of love Part 13
Danny-Kumari fans were angry with Danny for wooing Kusum.They wished Danny got angry with Kusum as she fell for his brother.I dedicate this part to them.

Kumud cried:Saras...my own sister eyeing on you.I can't bear it Saras.
Saras consoled her:Kumud...you don't worry about it.Because I am only yours.And I am born only for you.
They share an emotional eye lock

Kuchh na kahe
Bas chup rahe
Khamoshiyan hi kah jaaye
Tham jaye yeh jahaan
aur Pal bhi thahar jaaye...

Kumud :I know that Saras.But my own sister falling for you and marrying your friend just for namesake...I could'nt bear it Saras.Sunny...how will he bear it?Was e also pretending to be happy before us?Poor Sunny.He already had a heart break before.Now again...
S:The answers of all our questions can be given by Kusum.

Saras and Kumud rushed to Kusum's room.Kusum was shocked to see an angry Saras who gets angry only when his Kumud is hurt.
S:What I heard is true or not Kusum?
Kus:It is...it is...
S:Are you not ashamed of yourself Kusum?How could you feel like that for me?You should have considered me as your brother.
Kusum wept:I did'nt do it intentionally.It just happened.I don't know how.You know very well how love happens unknowingly.You fell for didi unknowingly.Right?Can we control that emotion?Tell Saras jeeju.
Saras was lost for words.
Kus:The only thing we can control is our physical deeds.I never tried to snatch you from didi.I always wanted Kumud didi to be happy with her love.
Kumud got melted.
K:I know that you can never snatch Saras from me.I know that you are not bad.For my happiness you decided to move on with a marriage.But you spoiled an innocent man's life.
Why did you marry Sunny if you don't love him?Loving someone and marrying someone else.Have you ever thought how Sunny would react knowing the truth?You may be ignoring him and he will be so upset.How much he would have dreamt of a life with you!But you hurt him too.


Kusum cried.
Kus:You all are misunderstanding me didi.
S:Till now we misunderstood you.We thought you were an innocent girl.But now we understand you very well.
Kusum was shattered.
Saras grabbed Kumud's hand:Don't talk to Kusum.There is no use.
He went out with Kumud.
Kusum cried.


Kumud:Saras...Kusum can't be blamed completely.As she said love is not in our hands.It happens unknowingly.Since your heart is big she fell for you.Anybody would fall in love with you Saras.
S:Kumud...but what she did...
K:She loves me a lot.She did'nt want me to be hurt.So she hid her love from me.She did'nt want to come between both of us.So she decided to get married.She sacrificed her happiness for me.
Kumud's eyes became wet.
S:Is it sacrifice Kumud?I can understand how she felt for me before.But now I am her sister's husband.She calls me jeeju and loves me from behind.She spoiled the purity of the word 'jeeju'.She married Sunny.But she is not at all loyal to him.She broke his heart also.At least he deserves happiness.Right?
Kumud was silent.

Kusum thought:Sunny...I need you now.Only you can bring me peace.I miss you.
Suddenly Sunny's call came.She picked up the phone in a hurry:Sunny...
S:Kusum...sorry...there is some urgent need for construction.So I need to go far.I can come only tomorrow.So take care.
Kusum could'nt control her tears.
S:Kusum,don't cry...only for one day.Then I will come back no.
Kus:Ok Sunny.Take care.
S:Bye Take care.I love you.
Kus:i love you too Sunny.
He smiled.
She put the phone and cried.

Danny was very angry.Kumari was very upset.
Kuma:What is happening here Danny?
D:The problem is not silly Kumari.I can't imagine Kusum stooping so low.Never expected this from her.


Kumari became upset:Kusum can't do that Danny.I feel something is hidden somewhere.
D:All I know is your sister Kusum is disgusting.
Kumari felt sad.

The next day...
Vidhyachathur,Dugbha and Guniyal came towards Kusum.
Vidhya caressed Kusum's head which surprised her.
Kus:Baapu...
V:Your Maa told me everything.Sorry beta.I misunderstood you.Though you did a mistake by longing for what you don't deserve finally you corrected your mistake.
Kus:But Kumud di...she misunderstands me.
Dug:Today we realised the truth.Kumud and Saras will also realise it.
Kusum was relieved.
Vidhya and Dugbha left the room.
Dug:Kusum...you really repented and corrected your mistake.God will not leave your hand.
Kalika came.
Kal:Kaki is right.Kumud di will understand Kusum.I have full faith in her.Sarasji and Kumud di have big hearts.
Kusum kept silent.
Guniyal caressed her and left the room.
Kusum burst into tears.
Kalika felt sad.She thought:Once I used to be very happy to see your tears Kusum.But now I really feel sad.

Kal:Kusum,don't cry.Everything will be alright.
Kusum wiped her tears.
Kalika went.
Danny came inside.He was fuming with anger.
Kus:Danny!
D:How could you stoop so low Kusum?I never expected this from you.You loved your own sister's man?Even after marriage you continuing your secret love by betraying Sunny?What mistake did Sunny do to suffer like this?Because of you during the initial stage of marriage itself bhaiyya bhabhi and Sunny are suffering.I can't forgive you for that.


Kusum was very upset:Danny...please listen to me once.
D:I don't want to hear anything.You are sick.
Suddenly they heard a voice from behind:Danny!
They turned back.
They were shocked.


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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update
Update soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow wonderful update loved it thank you for pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Great update as usual, I love it. Suspens now I wonder who is coming. U know I m so disappointed by kusum in the serial that I cant even find sympathy for her in your ss. As usual I love kumari hopr she ll be back in the serial soon, I miss her.
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n wonderful update! Well written! update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
This was a action packed update. Suspense added, who and what is next. Look forward to update.

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