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Posted: 11 years ago
Love how Danny told Khumari that all he wanted was for her to hold his hand through out his life ...was so lovely n definately put a foot in his mothers mouth
Thank god truth is out about Guman n Lax heard what his present wife did to his past .
Loved how Sara n his father made up
Aww n all 3 men dreamed of dancing n romancing their partner oved it especially when Sara interrupted Danny n Sunnys vision I couldnt help but laugh
Thanks for pm plz keep em comin n continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

The Shell of love Part 11

Vidhyachathur announced the result of the dance competition:Both boys and girls are winners.
Everyone clapped hands.


Sunny came and sat between Kumari and Kusum.
Kus:What is this Sunny?
Sun:I am sorry.In excitement I did'nt know what I was doing.
Kusum and Kumari felt like laughing.
Kus:Tell me why are you excited?What do you want to tell me?
Sun:How will I say that?I don't know how to present that topic.

Kumari's eyes were searching for Danny that time:Where is this Danny?Saras bhai is with Kumud di.Sunny is with Kusum.Where are you?He did'nt even bother to look at me after the dance.
Kusum giggled:Tell anything courageously Sunny.
Sun:Kusum,I felt nice when I danced with you.Will you dance with me through out my life?
Kusum smiled holding his hand:Yes.
Sunny-Kusum burst into laughter.
Sunny-Kusum got up and went to a side.Kumari got fed up waiting for Danny.
Suddenly Danny sat near Kumari.
Kuma:Danny,where were you?How much did I wait?
He smiled:I was watching you from a distance to see whether you were missing me or not and you have passed the test.All the time you were searching for me.
Kumari was shy.
Danny held her hand and caressed it.She blushed.
Kuma:You know Danny...Sunny told Kusum that he liked dancing with her,so he wants to dance with her always.How romantic!Right?

D:So?You want me to say the same to you?
Kuma:Stop kidding Danny.
D:To be frank even I enjoyed dancing with you and I have decided that in Dubai in all parties we will dance together and people will say'Wow!What a sweet dancing couple!'
Kumari smiled.
Kuma:Danny,I can't wait for those moments.
D:Me too Kumari,can't wait to make you mine.


She blushed resting her head on his shoulder.

Haldi function also went well.

The wedding day...

Saras touched Laxminandan's feet.He blessed Saras.
L:You will have a happy married life as you make a good husband.I always failed as a husband.
Saras became upset.
Laxminandan patted Saras:Saras,when you decided to be a brahmachari I was upset.I felt that only a good girl like Kumud can bring you back to normal life.And I was right.In fact she was beyond our expectation.
She showed us the reality.She gave me back my son.
Saras:Kumud gave me back my father.
L:Saras...I could never be a good father in my busy schedule.Kumud made me realize my mistake.I am trying to correct my mistake though it cannot compensate the loss you had.But please forgive me my son.

S:No dad...no...no need of apology.I have to apologize as I misunderstood you.
L:We both were blinded by Guman's wicked games.But we are not blind anymore.
S:Dad...for me your love is more than enough.

Laxmi hugged Saras emotionally.
Kumud,Kusum and Kumari came on mandap in the bridal attire.


Saras,Sunny and Danny struggled hard to control themselves.
Saras-Kumud,Sunny-Kusum and Danny-Kumari got married on the same place at the same time.
Saras and Kumud shared a romantic eye lock.

Sunny looked at Kusum softly.Kusum rolled her eyes on her loving husband.

Wedding night...
Danny was waiting for Kumari desperately.Finally the blushing Kumari entered the room.He was so happy that he went and held her close to him.
D:I am so happy Kumari that finally you are mine.And I promise you that I will always make you giggle.
Kumari smiled.

Kusum entered Sunny's room.Sunny could'nt take his eyes off her.His sensuous eyes fell on her gracefully.
Sun:Kusum!


She was shy.

Sunny:You look very pretty.But...looks like it is incomplete.
Kus:Incomplete?
Sun: One thing is missing.
Kusum gave him a confused look.With a smile he opened a small box and took a waist chain.She was surprised.He tied it around her waist.She was very happy.

Sunny looked at her waist.

Sun:Beautiful.Now you look perfect.
Kus:Thank you so much Sunny.I know that you will make my imperfection perfect.I was incomplete.But you made me complete.

Sun:I was imperfect and incomplete.That's why past relationship did'nt work out.But now I am happy that I was imperfect and incomplete.That's why I got you in my life to make me perfect and complete.
They shared a romantic eye lock.Suddenly she became shy.

His love broke her shell and they drowned in the passion of love.

Saras could not stop himself from coming closer to Kumud who looked like a beautiful fragrant red rose in the red saree.She blushed.
Ang Laga De Re
Mohe Rang Laga De Re
Ang Laga De Re
Mohe Rang Laga De Re
Main To Teri Joganiya
Tu Jog Laga De Re



S:Day by day your beauty is increasing Kumud...
She blushed.Her cheeks became more red.
Ram Ratan Dhan
Lagan Magan Man
Tan Mora Chandan Re
Ujli Kori Preet Pyaasat
Rang Laga De Re
Saras:Kumud...today is my dream come true.You became my wife.I thought it would remain my dream forever.But finally the most beautiful dream in standing before me as mine.
They both became emotional.
They shared a beautiful eye lock.

Raat Banjar Si Hai
Kaale Khanjar Si Hai
Tere Seene Ki Lau
Mere Andar Bhi Hai
Tu Hawa De Ise
To Mera Tan Jale


K:For some time I also thought that my dream got broken.But the scattered pieces of my dream have come together Saras.It will never break.
They smiled happily enjoying the dreamy moment of togetherness.


When Saras came closer Kumud was so shy that she tried to walk away.He caught her saree's pallu.She was stunned.
Jala De Re Sang Jala De Re
Mohe Rang Laga De Re
Main To Teri Joganiya

Tu Jog Laga De Re


She turned back and looked at him.Seeing his naughty smile she blushed. He pulled her pallu to bring her close to him.She kept on blushing.
Saras carried her in his arms and took her to the bedroom which was decorated with red roses.The bed was full of red rose petals.Kumud was amazed by his surprise.
S:This is our heaven of love Kumud.
She blushed.

He threw rose petals at her face sensually.She drowned in the romantic sensuousness.
Raas Hai Raat Mein
Teri Har Baat Mein
Raas Hai Raat Mein
Teri Har Baat Mein
Bolo Main Kya Karoon
Aise Halaat Mein
Hoon Main Teri Malang
Tu Hi Mera Nasha



He placed her on the bed.He caressed her face romantically.She got lost in him.
Chadha De Re Bhang Chadha Re
Prem Ki Bhang Chadha Re
Main To Teri Joganiya
Tu Jog Laga De Re


Saras came closer to Kumud.She held a net as a barrier.Their smile was visible through the net.
S:There were lots of barriers in our love Kumud.Now I won't let anything hunder our love.
She smiled.He pulled the net and threw it down.She smiled.

Jog Laga De Re
Prem Ka Rog Laga De Re
Main To Teri Joganiya

Tu Jog Laga De Re



He left no distance between them.They swam in the river of passionate love.

The next morning Saras opened his eyes with a smile seeing his beloved Kumud lying next to him.Though she was in deep slumber her face looked pleasant and cheerful because of the love he poured on her.

Kumud opened her eyes.She blushed seeing his smiling face adoring her.Both of them got up from the bed covering themselves in blanket.Kumud was shy.
K:I am going to take bath.
He pulled her towards her.
K:What are you doing Saras?Leave me.
S:Kumud,you can't stop me now.Our incomplete journey has been completed.You are mine now.I have the right to love you.
She blushed.
He started pampering her with his love.

Edited by jasminerahul - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow nice update, all the three couple r lovely especially danri they rcuteness personified. I love reading ur ss when i saw ur update i couldnt wait to read. Great job as usual. I love how u describe evryone emotions and the picture r lovely. I miss danri a lot in the show
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Posted: 11 years ago
👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👍🏼.
tf pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
First I loved all the pictures with story. They were excellent. The update was outstanding too. All of the 3 couples are really sweet. I love your story because you are very good at expressing each emotion of the character. Look forward to your stories... 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb update
loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n nice update
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow nice update loved it thank you for pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved it.
Hot and sweet pm.
S and k r very romantic.
Their romance fill moments r awesome.
Tf pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
just superbbb update👏👏👏

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